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June 30, 2020

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Tokyo Governor's Election

The election for Tokyo governor will be held coming Sunday, but there aren't good candidates so that I really wonder who I vote for.
Narrowing down by an elimination method, no one will be left.
These candidates give me a thought that the election doesn't have any meanings.
Those who seriously think about Tokyo won't go up for any election since they are basically busy and don't have any desire to be famous.
Those who go up for electons are always useless people who just want power and money.
No matter who bacomes Tokyo governor, I can't stop being worried about the future.
I can't be an abstainee by any means. I'll choose one for sure.
After the election, when the person I vote becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best to slam him out of the governor's position more harshly than the media.


今週の日曜日は東京都知事選だが、誰にいれようか本当に迷うくらい良い人物がいない。
消去法でやっているが、そうすると誰も残らなくなる。
選挙する意味があるのかと思うくらいだ。
そもそも、真剣に東京のことを考えてる人は忙しい上に、欲がないから立候補しない。
立候補するのは、権力と金がほしい使えない連中ばかりだ。
誰が都知事になっても先が思いやられる。
私は決して棄権しない人だ。必ず一人選ぶだろう。
そして、その人物が公約を守れないときは、マスコミよりも厳しく糾弾し、辞任させるために全力を尽くすだろう。

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June 30, 2020

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The election for Tokyo's governor will be held this coming Sunday, but there aren't any good candidates so that I really wonder who I should vote for.,

"Tokyo's governor" because we are showing that the governor belongs to Tokyo. "this coming Sunday" because we are being specific to which Sunday it is. "aren't any good candidates" is to highlight that there are none. "I really wonder who I should vote for." Should is used to suggest advice.

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July 1, 2020

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arisingstar

July 1, 2020

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"I am really wonder" should be "I really wonder", but otherwise the corrections are correct

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arisingstar

July 1, 2020

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Thank you so much for correctin my English and the explanations. I think the governor of Tokyo is similar to a state governor in the United States. Tokyo has 23 wards and 26 cities and small islands. There are mayors in the wards and the cities and the islands respectively.

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July 1, 2020

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Tokyo Governor's Election


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Gubernatorial/governor = presidential/president

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I do not know Japan's political system. Is the governor of Tokyo equal to a mayor of a city in the United States?

The election for Tokyo governor will be held coming Sunday, but there aren't good candidates so that I really wonder who I vote for.


The election for Tokyo governor will be held the coming Sunday, but there aren't any good candidates so that; I really wonder who I will vote for. The election for Tokyo governor will be held the coming Sunday, but there aren't any good candidates; I really wonder who I will vote for.

The election for Tokyo governor will be held this coming Sunday, but there aren't good candidates so that I really wonder who I'm going to vote for. The election for Tokyo governor will be held this coming Sunday, but there aren't good candidates so I really wonder who I'm going to vote for.

The election for Tokyo's governor will be held this coming Sunday, but there aren't any good candidates so that I really wonder who I should vote for., The election for Tokyo's governor will be held this coming Sunday, but there aren't any good candidates so I really wonder who I should vote for,

"Tokyo's governor" because we are showing that the governor belongs to Tokyo. "this coming Sunday" because we are being specific to which Sunday it is. "aren't any good candidates" is to highlight that there are none. "I really wonder who I should vote for." Should is used to suggest advice.

Narrowing down by an elimination method, no one will be left.


Narrowing down by anUsing the process of elimination method, no one will be leftremaining. Using the process of elimination, no one will be remaining.

NIf I narrowing down by anthe candidates using the process of elimination method, no one will be left. If I narrow down the candidates using the process of elimination, no one will be left.

"elimination method" = "process of elimination"

Narrowing down by an elimination method, no one will be left. Narrowing down by elimination, no one will be left.

"an" is not needed, because we do not need to know what type of elimination method or that it is a method. Narrowing down by elimination in general suggests you are narrowing your choices.

These candidates give me a thought that the election doesn't have any meanings.


These candidates give me athe thought that the election doeswon't have any meanings. These candidates give me the thought that the election won't have any meaning.

The low quality of these candidates givmake me a thoughtink that these type of elections doesn't have any true meanings. The low quality of these candidates make me think that these type of elections don't have any true meaning.

These candidates givmake me a thoughtink that the election doesn't have any meanings. These candidates make me think that the election doesn't have any meaning.

the correct phrase is "make me think" to describe something giving you thoughts. "meaning" is singular, because any word after "any" has to be singular. "any money", "any day", "any person"

Those who seriously think about Tokyo won't go up for any election since they are basically busy and don't have any desire to be famous.


Those who seriously think about Tokyo won't go upcampaign for any election since they are basically busy and don't have any desire to be famous. Those who seriously think about Tokyo won't campaign for any election since they are busy and don't have any desire to be famous.

Those who seriously think about Tokyo's issues won't go uprun for any election since they are basicallytoo busy and don't have any desire to be famous. Those who seriously think about Tokyo's issues won't run for any election since they are too busy and don't have any desire to be famous.

"Famous" is okay here, but it connotes more of a celebrity image. A better way to say it might be "...desire to be in the public eye."

Those who seriously think about Tokyo won't go up for any electionrun for office, since they are basically busy and don't have any desire to be famous. Those who seriously think about Tokyo won't run for office, since they are basically busy and don't have any desire to be famous.

the phrase to enter an election is "run for office".

Those who go up for electons are always useless people who just want power and money.


Those who go upcampaign for elections are always useless people who just want power and money. Those who campaign for election are always useless people who just want power and money.

Those who go uprun for elections are always useless people who just want power and money. Those who run for elections are always useless people who just want power and money.

Those who go up for electonsrun for office are always useless people who just want power and money. Those who run for office are always useless people who just want power and money.

"run for office"

No matter who bacomes Tokyo governor, I can't stop being worried about the future.


No matter who baecomes Tokyo's governor, I can't stop being worriedworrying about the future. No matter who becomes Tokyo's governor, I can't stop worrying about the future.

No matter who baecomes Tokyothe governor of Tokyo, I cawon't be able to stop being worried about the future. No matter who becomes the governor of Tokyo, I won't be able to stop being worried about the future.

No matter who baecomes Tokyo's governor, I can't stop being worried about the future. No matter who becomes Tokyo's governor, I can't stop being worried about the future.

apostrophe "s" to show ownership or possession.

I can't be an abstainee by any means.


I can't be an abstainee by any means. I can't abstain by any means.

I can't be an abstaineer by any means. I can't be an abstainer by any means.

I can't be an abstainee by any means. I can't abstain by any means.

"abstainee" is not an actual word. There is a word called "abstainer", but that is a person who does not take part in desires or pleasures. "abstain" in verb form would be appropriate, since it also means to not vote.

I'll choose one for sure.


I'll choose someone for sure. I'll choose someone for sure.

I'll choose someone for sure. I'll choose a candidate for sure. I'll choose someone for sure. I'll choose a candidate for sure.

"one" is very general, which can make a reader ask "one" what? One suggestion is use "someone" to refer back to the candidates or "a candidate" to be specific and refer back to the election.

After the election, when the person I vote becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best to slam him out of the governor's position more harshly than the media.


After the election, when the person I vote for becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best to slam him out of the governor's position more harshly than the media. After the election, when the person I vote for becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best to slam him out of the governor's position more harshly than the media.

After the election, when the person I vote for becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best to slam him out of the governor's position even more harshly than the media will. After the election, when the person I vote for becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best to slam him out of the governor's position even more harshly than the media will.

After the election, whenif the person I vote for becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best "to slam him out of the governor's position" more harshly than the media. After the election, if the person I vote for becomes the governor and can't fulfill his campaign promises, I'll do my best "to slam him out of the governor's position" more harshly than the media.

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