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Jan 05

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Today's weather in my city

Nothing in mind to write about today, so let me just describe and discuss how does the weather like today in my city with extra discussion about climate change.



The weather today was very cool. We have light rain and the sky is full of clouds, so we could not see the sun. We are in the winter but the temperate is a little higher than usual. I think this may came because what they called "Global Warming". Ten years ago, the weather in my city was noticeably different from today's. As per my knowledge, this becomes now a global phenomenon, and it's several countries are suffering from this. I have watched the news about the fires going on in Australia. Forest fires rises a concern about how dangerous these incidents and its relation with global warming. Some people think these claims are exaggerating while the others believe in this and they call for immediate action from the competent authorities. Either this phenomenon happens because of global warming or not, no one can deny the climate change that we sense it in our planet.

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Nothing in mind to write about today, so let me just describe and discuss how does the weather like today in my city with extra discussion about climate change.

NThere is nothing ion mind to write about today, so let me just describe and discuss how doeswhat the weather is like today in my city and with an extra discussion about climate change.

NI have nothing in mind to write about today, so just let me just describe and discuss how doeswhat the weather was like today inand my city with extra discussion about. I will also discuss climate change.

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The weather today was very cool.

We have light rain and the sky is full of clouds, so we could not see the sun.

We haveIt lightly rained and the sky iwas full of clouds, so we could not see the sun.

It seems as if you are talking in past tense, so I changed it to past!

We haved light rain and the sky iwas full of clouds, so we could not see the sun.

We haved light rain and thea sky is full of clouds, so we could not see the sun.

"Have" should be "had" in the past tense.

We are in the winter but the temperate is a little higher than usual.

We are in theIt is winter but the temperate is a little higher than usual.

"We are" doesn't really fit here

We are in theIt is winter but the temperate is a little higher than usual.

We are in theIt is winter, but the temperature is a little higher than usual.

I think this may came because what they called "Global Warming".

I think this may came from, what they call, "Global Warming". (Or "I think this is because of, what they called, "Global Warming".")

I think this may cahave come because what they called "Global Warming".

I think this may cambe because what theyof something called "Gglobal Wwarming".

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Ten years ago, the weather in my city was noticeably different from today's.

As per my knowledge, this becomes now a global phenomenon, and it's several countries are suffering from this.

As per my knowledge, this has now becomes now a global phenomenon, and it's several countries are suffering from this.

No need for "it's": "several countries" is already the subject

As perTo my knowledge, this now has becomes now a global phenomenon, and it's several countries are suffering from this.

As perTo my knowledge, this has becomes now a global phenomenon, and it's severalmany countries are suffering from ithis.

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I have watched the news about the fires going on in Australia.

I have watched the news about the fires going onburning in Australia.

"Going on" isn't technically wrong, but "burning" sounds better.

Forest fires rises a concern about how dangerous these incidents and its relation with global warming.

Forest fires raises a concern about how dangerous these incidents are and its relation with global warming.

Forest fires raises a concern about how dangerous these incidents and itsre and their relation with global warming.

Forest fires raises a concerns about how dangerous these kinds of incidents are and itstheir relation with global warming.

Some people think these claims are exaggerating while the others believe in this and they call for immediate action from the competent authorities.

Some people think these claims are exaggeratinged while the others believe in this and they call for immediate action from the competent authorities.

Competent sounds a bit off here.

Some people think these claims are exaggeratinged, while the others believe in thisem and they call for immediate action from the competent authorities.

Some people think these claims are exaggeratinged while the others believe in this and they call for immediate action from the competent authorities.

Either this phenomenon happens because of global warming or not, no one can deny the climate change that we sense it in our planet.

EiWhether this phenomenon happens because of global warming or not, no one can deny the climate change that we sense it in our planet.

"that we sense it in our planet" doesn't make a lot of sense, so I just changed it to "no one can deny climate change." to make it more concise.

EiWhether this phenomenonis happensing because of global warming or not, no one can deny the climate changes that we sense it ihappening on our planet.

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