Jan. 5, 2020
Nothing in mind to write about today, so let me just describe and discuss how does the weather like today in my city with extra discussion about climate change.
The weather today was very cool. We have light rain and the sky is full of clouds, so we could not see the sun. We are in the winter but the temperate is a little higher than usual. I think this may came because what they called "Global Warming". Ten years ago, the weather in my city was noticeably different from today's. As per my knowledge, this becomes now a global phenomenon, and it's several countries are suffering from this. I have watched the news about the fires going on in Australia. Forest fires rises a concern about how dangerous these incidents and its relation with global warming. Some people think these claims are exaggerating while the others believe in this and they call for immediate action from the competent authorities. Either this phenomenon happens because of global warming or not, no one can deny the climate change that we sense it in our planet.
The weather today was very cool.
We haved light rain and thea sky is full of clouds, so we could not see the sun.
We had light rain and a sky full of clouds, so we could not see the sun.
"Have" should be "had" in the past tense.
We are in theIt is winter but the temperate is a little higher than usual.
It is winter but the temperate is a little higher than usual.
"We are" doesn't really fit here
I think this may cahave come because what they called "Global Warming".
I think this may have come because what they called "Global Warming".
As per my knowledge, this has now becomes now a global phenomenon, and it's several countries are suffering from this.
As per my knowledge, this has now become a global phenomenon, and several countries are suffering from this.
No need for "it's": "several countries" is already the subject
Forest fires raises a concern about how dangerous these incidents and itsre and their relation with global warming.
Forest fires raises a concern about how dangerous these incidents are and their relation with global warming.
Some people think these claims are exaggeratinged while the others believe in this and they call for immediate action from the competent authorities.
Some people think these claims are exaggerated while the others believe in this and they call for immediate action from the competent authorities.
Today'she weather today in my city
The weather today in my city
NI have nothing in mind to write about today, so just let me just describe and discuss how doeswhat the weather was like today inand my city with extra discussion about. I will also discuss climate change.
I have nothing in mind to write about today, so just let me describe what the weather was like today and my city. I will also discuss climate change.
The weather today was very cool.
We haved light rain and the sky iwas full of clouds, so we could not see the sun.
We had light rain and the sky was full of clouds, so we could not see the sun.
We are in theIt is winter, but the temperature is a little higher than usual.
It is winter, but the temperature is a little higher than usual.
I think this may cambe because what theyof something called "Gglobal Wwarming".
I think this may be because of something called "global warming".
Ten years ago, the weather in my city was noticeably different from today's.
As perTo my knowledge, this has becomes now a global phenomenon, and it's severalmany countries are suffering from ithis.
To my knowledge, this has become a global phenomenon and many countries are suffering from it.
I have watched the news about the fires going onburning in Australia.
I have watched the news about the fires burning in Australia.
"Going on" isn't technically wrong, but "burning" sounds better.
Forest fires raises a concerns about how dangerous these kinds of incidents are and itstheir relation with global warming.
Forest fires raise concerns about how dangerous these kinds of incidents are and their relation with global warming.
Some people think these claims are exaggeratinged, while the others believe in thisem and they call for immediate action from the competent authorities.
Some people think these claims are exaggerated, while others believe in them and call for immediate action from competent authorities.
EiWhether this phenomenonis happensing because of global warming or not, no one can deny the climate changes that we sense it ihappening on our planet.
Whether this is happening because of global warming or not, no one can deny the climate changes that we sense happening on our planet.
Today'she weather today in my city
The weather today in my city
NThere is nothing ion mind to write about today, so let me just describe and discuss how doeswhat the weather is like today in my city and with an extra discussion about climate change.
There is nothing on mind to write about today, so let me just describe and discuss what the weather is like today in my city and with an extra discussion about climate change.
The weather today was very cool.
We haveIt lightly rained and the sky iwas full of clouds, so we could not see the sun.
It lightly rained and the sky was full of clouds, so we could not see the sun.
It seems as if you are talking in past tense, so I changed it to past!
We are in theIt is winter but the temperate is a little higher than usual.
It is winter but the temperate is a little higher than usual.
I think this may came from, what they call, "Global Warming". (Or "I think this is because of, what they called, "Global Warming".")
I think this may came from, what they call, "Global Warming". (Or "I think this is because of, what they call, "Global Warming.")
Ten years ago, the weather in my city was noticeably different from today's.
As perTo my knowledge, this now has becomes now a global phenomenon, and it's several countries are suffering from this.
To my knowledge, this now has become a global phenomenon and several countries are suffering.
I have watched the news about the fires going on in Australia.
Forest fires raises a concern about how dangerous these incidents are and its relation with global warming.
Forest fires raise a concern about how dangerous these incidents are and its relation with global warming.
Some people think these claims are exaggeratinged while the others believe in this and they call for immediate action from the competent authorities.
Some people think these claims are exaggerated while the others believe in this and they call for immediate action from the authorities.
Competent sounds a bit off here.
EiWhether this phenomenon happens because of global warming or not, no one can deny the climate change that we sense it in our planet.
Whether this phenomenon happens because of global warming or not, no one can deny climate change.
"that we sense it in our planet" doesn't make a lot of sense, so I just changed it to "no one can deny climate change." to make it more concise.
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Good job! I understood what you were trying to say throughout the paper. Just a little off on certain word placements, verb tenses, etc. Keep up the good work! :)
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Nothing in mind to write about today, so let me just describe and discuss how does the weather like today in my city with extra discussion about climate change.
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The weather today was very cool. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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We have light rain and the sky is full of clouds, so we could not see the sun.
It seems as if you are talking in past tense, so I changed it to past!
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We ha "Have" should be "had" in the past tense. |
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We are in the winter but the temperate is a little higher than usual.
"We are" doesn't really fit here |
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I think this may came because what they called "Global Warming".
I think this may came from, what they call, "Global Warming". (Or "I think this is because of, what they call
I think this may
I think this may |
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Ten years ago, the weather in my city was noticeably different from today's. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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As per my knowledge, this becomes now a global phenomenon, and it's several countries are suffering from this.
As per my knowledge, this has now become No need for "it's": "several countries" is already the subject |
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I have watched the news about the fires going on in Australia. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
I have watched the news about the fires "Going on" isn't technically wrong, but "burning" sounds better. |
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Forest fires rises a concern about how dangerous these incidents and its relation with global warming.
Forest fires raise
Forest fires raise
Forest fires raises a concern about how dangerous these incidents a |
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Some people think these claims are exaggerating while the others believe in this and they call for immediate action from the competent authorities.
Some people think these claims are exaggerat Competent sounds a bit off here.
Some people think these claims are exaggerat
Some people think these claims are exaggerat |
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Either this phenomenon happens because of global warming or not, no one can deny the climate change that we sense it in our planet.
"that we sense it in our planet" doesn't make a lot of sense, so I just changed it to "no one can deny climate change." to make it more concise.
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