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Toco Toucans

Toco toucans are originated in South America and called "Jewel of the Amazon" because of their big and vivid orange bill.
At a zoo in Japan, it turned out that a pair of toco toucans were both females after the zoo had tried breeding for five years. The zoo bought two toco toucans, Toto and Poko, as a pair of male and female. Toto was regarded as male because she was bigger than Poko. In addition, Toto courted Poko and gave her feed.
Toco toucans lay two to four eggs at once. However, Poko laid six eggs that are all unfertilized. Recording the inside of the birdhouse, Toto seemed to lay eggs. Finally, it was proved by DNA profiling that Toto is female.

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Toco Toucans

Toco toucans are originated inlly from South America and are called the "Jewels of the Amazon" because of their big and vivid orange bills.

At a zoo in Japan, it turned outwas discovered that a pair of toco toucans were both females only after the zoo had tried breeding them for five years.

The zoo had bought the two toco toucans, Toto and Poko, as a pair of male and male/female pair.

Toto was regarded as male because she was bigger than Poko.

In addition, Toto courted Poko and gave her feeood.

In this case, I feel like it would be more common to say "food" instead of "feed", although "feed" isn't wrong.

Toco toucans lay two to four eggs at once.

However, Poko laid six eggs that are all, all of which were unfertilized.

RIn a recording taken from the inside of the birdhouse, Toto seemed to laybe laying eggs.

Finally, it was proved bythrough DNA profiling that Toto iwas female.

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May 12, 2021

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Thank you so much!

Toco Toucans

Toco toucans are originated in South America and called "Jewel of the Amazon" because of their big and vivid orange bill.

Toco toucans are originated inlly from South America and are called the "Jewels of the Amazon" because of their big and vivid orange bills.

In a Japanese zoo, it turned out that a pair of toco toucans were both females after the zoo had tried breeding for five years.

The zoo bought two toco toucans, Toto and Poko, as a pair of male and female.

The zoo had bought the two toco toucans, Toto and Poko, as a pair of male and male/female pair.

Toto was regarded as male because she was bigger than Poko.

In addition, Toto courted Poko and gave her feed.

In addition, Toto courted Poko and gave her feeood.

Toco toucans lay two to four eggs at once.

However, Poko laid six eggs that are all unfertilized.

However, Poko laid six eggs that are all, all of which were unfertilized.

Recording the inside of the birdhouse, Toto seemed to lay eggs.

RIn a recording taken from the inside of the birdhouse, Toto seemed to laybe laying eggs.

Finally, it was proved by DNA profiling that Toto is female.

Finally, it was proved bythrough DNA profiling that Toto iwas female.

At a zoo in Japan, it turned out that a pair of toco toucans were both females after the zoo had tried breeding for five years.

At a zoo in Japan, it turned outwas discovered that a pair of toco toucans were both females only after the zoo had tried breeding them for five years.

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