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The Sky via the Window

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akihello 0 · June 17

Prompt: "PROMPT FOR JUNE 2021 WRITING CHALLENGE: What do you see when you look out the window?" by Jacque. Like this prompt? Write your own response here.

Target Language - English

"What do you see when you look out the window?"

I can see it's cloudy outside now. I'm in a room on the third floor, so I see the cloudy sky and some roofs from the window.
I'm glad I'm able to see the sky at least. I'm afraid if I could see nothing but only the wall via the window.


Native Language - Japanese

「窓の外を見たら、何が見えますか?」

今、外は曇っているのが見えます。私は3階の部屋にいるので、窓からは曇った空と幾つかの屋根が見えるのです。少なくとも、空が見えるから嬉しいです。もしこれが、窓から壁だけしか見えない状態だったら嫌だなって思うんです。

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yoyoyoyeah 0 June 17, 2021
The Sky via the Window
"What do you see when you look out the window?
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I can see it's cloudy outside now.
I'm in a room on the third floor, so I see the cloudy sky and some roofs from the window.

I'm in a room on the third floor, so I see the cloudy sky and some roofs from the window.

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I'm in a room on the third floor, so I see the cloudy sky and some rooftops from the window.
I'm glad I'm able to see the sky at least.
I'm afraid if I could see nothing but only the wall via the window.

I'm would be afraid if I could see nothing but only the wall viafrom the window.