• This week, tens of thousands people on twitter celebrated 10th anniversary of starting "Madoka Magica" on the air.

• This week, tens of thousands of people on tTwitter celebrated the 10th anniversary of startthe airing of "Madoka Magica" on the air.

• This week, tens of thousands of people on twitter celebrated the 10th anniversary of startthe airing of "Madoka Magica" on the air."

• Ten years ago, I was still a high school student and indifferent toward Japanese anime.

• Ten years ago, I was still a high school student and indifferent towards Japanese anime.

• Ten years ago, I was still a high school student and indifferent towards Japanese anime.

• Moreover, I didn't have enough time to watch TV in order to work hard on studying for university entrance exam.

• MoreoverAlso, I didn't have enough time to watch TV in order to work hard onbecause I was studying for the university entrance exam.

• Moreover, I didn't have enough time to watch TV in order to workbecause I hard ton studying for hard for the university entrance exam.

• But, even if I watched just one episode of these popular anime, such as "Madoka Magica" and "STEINS; GATE", I would be addict to them.

• But, even if Ifrom watcheding just one episode of thesea popular anime series, such as "Madoka Magica" and "STEINS; GATE", I would become addicted to them. ¶
  

  The logic here is unclear. The claim is: If you watch anime, you'll become addicted.
  
  Case I: You have already watched anime and became addicted. In this case, it should be past tense, and you'd know which series it is (so you wouldn't write: such as "Madoka Magica" and "STEINS; GATE").
  
  Case II: You haven't watched anime before. Then how do you even know you'll become addicted?

• But, even if IIf I had watched just one episode of these popular anime, such aslike "Madoka Magica" and "STEINS; GATE"," I would bprobably would have become addicted to them.

  This is Subjunctive II tense since you're hypothesizing about something which could have happened but didn't.

• This decade must be a golden age for late night anime, which are broadcasted on TV and targeting for teens and adult audiences.

• This decade must beis a golden age for late night anime, which are broadcasted on TV and, targeting for teens and adult audiences.

• This decade must be a golden age for late night anime, which are broadcasted on TV and targeting for teens and adult audiences.

  The phrase "targeting for teens and adult audiences" isn't really necessary.

• The movie of late night anime had never earned over two billion yen until "Madoka Magica" sat a new record.

• The movie ofMovies derived from late night anime had never earned over two billion yen until "Madoka Magica" saet a new record.

• The movie of lLate night anime had never earned over two billion yen until "Madoka Magica" sat a new recordwas broadcast.

  A movie is usually longer than an episode of an anime series.

• 1 Last year, twelve movies earned over two billion yen in Japan even though theaters restricted the number of seats.

• Last year, twelve moviesanime earned over two billion yen in Japan even though theaters restricted the number of seats for them.

  This can also be written like this:
  
  "Last year, twelve anime earned over two billion yen in Japan despite the fact that theaters restricted the number of seats for them."

• Two of them are late night anime.

• Two of them awere late night anime.

• Two of them are late night anime series.

• 1 One is my favorite anime "Violet Evergarden" and the another is "Demon Slayer".

• One is my favorite anime series, "Violet Evergarden," andwhile the another is "Demon Slayer"."

• 1 Surprisingly, "Demon Slayer" earned over thirty billion yen and established a Japanese record.

• Surprisingly, "Demon Slayer" earned over thirty billion yen and established a Japanese recordset a new record in Japan.

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