April 5, 2022
The public transport in Barcelona City
I will talk you about the public transportation in my city. The better way to move in Barcelone is with the underground. Is fast, confortable and it has a very good frequency of pass. If you don't like the tube, you can travel by bus. With bus, you can admire the city, and is fast to access it; you will avoid to go down to the tube. Is slower than the tube, but it has a good frequency of pass too. There is the tram too, but is not so useful as the tube or bus. It has a long frequency of pass and don't pass by the center of city. The City Council want to made a extension of tram by Diagonal avenue, but Barcelona people don't like much this idea. By other hand, there is a public service of cycles, that for short trips is very useful and easy.
The public transport in Barcelona City
I will talkell you about the public transportation in my city.
You could say "talk to you" but the present tense is awkward there.
The better way to move in Barcelone is with the underground.
It is fast, conmfortable and it has a very good frequency of pass.
Do you mean stops?
If you don't like the tube, you can travel by bus.
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Good job! Your grasp of grammar is great, just watch out for a few turns of phrase that don't exist in English
April 5, 2022
Thanks for your praise. I know I must to fix some errors.
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I willant to talk you about the public transportation in my city.
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I just added the subway. Explain a little more.
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If you don't like the tube, you can travel by bus.
You need to explain what the tube is.
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Break up statements into separate sentences. Use conjunctions. Pay attention to word usage.
It is slower than the tube, but it has a good frequency of pass too, but it shows up frequently like the tube.
Context tells us that you are comparing to the tube.
There is also the tram too, but it is not aso useful as the tube or bus.
Also and too have roughly the same meaning, but the usage can be determined by context and the way it sounds.
It has a long frequency of pass andarrives frequently, but doesn't pass by the center of city.
Learn about other ways to connect phrases, other than and. For example there is but, or, also, furthermore, on the other hand, as well as, and even though. They all have different meanings.
The City Council wanted to made a extension ofextend the tram byto Diagonal avenue, but Barcelonan people doidn't like much this idea.
Extension is a noun, To extend is a verb.
The people of Barcelona or the Bacelonan people.
Also make sure you are using the same tense.
ByOn other hand, there is a cycle public service of cycles, that for short trips is very useful and easytransportation services, that are very useful and easy to access for short trips.
I think I understand what you mean. The whole sentence needs to be rephrased.
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Good work! Pay attention to tense and keep learning how to connect ideas through conjunctions in different ways.
April 6, 2022
Thanks a lot for all your feedback.
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The City Council want to made a extension of tram by Diagonal avenue, but Barcelona people don't like much this idea. The City Council want to The City Council wants to ma The City Council wanted to Extension is a noun, To extend is a verb.
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By other hand, there is a public service of cycles, that for short trips is very useful and easy.
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I think I understand what you mean. The whole sentence needs to be rephrased.
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