Jan. 24, 2023
Laws are a powerful method to manage the public. From my prospective, a society without laws cannot function well, although too much regulations may pose a threat to the society.
If a society doesn’t have effective laws, the society will be chaotic and there is no economic growth. Laws give people various kinds of rules and regulations to tell every citizen what can do and what cannot. If people act at their will, it will bring a less efficient society and thus the government budget will be tense. According to the law about traffic, for example, every adult has the responsibility to comply with traffic rules and regulations at anytime anywhere. Only in this way, can people go to work on time and ensure a smooth traffic especially during the rush hour. Conversely, if people don’t obey traffic rules, some accidents will increase and being late is not uncommon for them, all of which can undermine the economy.
Laws is a good tool for people to build a harmonious society. People are more incline to driven by the illegal interests without law’s restrains. They are more likely to do something hurt others, such as fraudulent and violent activities. At this moment, law is a powerful weapon to punish those offenders, helping them understand the boundary between right and wrong. For instance, if salesperson sell counterfeit goods to customers, not only could it definitely have an adverse effect on the company’s brand image, but also with the help of laws, the government would impose a harsh punishment on these business practices. So, there are less illegal events in people’s daily life due to the law and our society will be more health and stable.
However, too much rules and regulations can restrict people’s freedom to some extent, which impose a detrimental influence on society’s long-term development. If the authority just wants to set complex rules to maintain the society stable without listening the public’s voice, the citizen feel they are ignored and they don’t have motivations to contribute the development of the whole society. One example is the censorship law that restrict the freedom of speech. If citizens have no opportunity speak out their voices, the government cannot pinpoint and tackle the problems, such as corruption and bureaucracy. After a long time, people will be disappointed in society and thus the society will be indulged in stagnation.
In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running smoothly without laws while imposing harsh regulations may produce negative effect.
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The Pros and Cons about Laws in Society
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Laws are a powerful method to manage the public.
From my perospective, a society without laws cannot function well, although too muchany regulations may pose a threat to the society.
From my perspective, a society without laws cannot function well, although too many regulations may pose a threat to the society.
If a society doesn’t have effective laws, the society will be chaotic and there iswill be no economic growth.
If a society doesn’t have effective laws, the society will be chaotic and there will be no economic growth.
Laws give people various kinds of rules and regulations to tell every citizen what can dobe done and what cannot be done.
Laws give people various kinds of rules and regulations to tell every citizen what can be done and what cannot be done.
If people act at their will, it will bringcreate a less efficient society and thus the government budget will be tensecreating a strain on the country's economy.
If people act at their will, it will create a less efficient society thus creating a strain on the country's economy.
According to the laws about traffic, for example, every adult has the responsibility to comply with traffic rules and regulations at any time anywhere. According to the laws about traffic, for example, every adult has the responsibility to comply with traffic rules and regulations at any time anywhere.
Only in this way, can people go to work on time and ensure a smooth traffic flow especially during the rush hour.
Only in this way can people go to work on time and ensure a smooth traffic flow especially during the rush hour.
Conversely, if people don’t obey traffic rules, somethe number of accidents will increase and being late iswould not be uncommon for them, all of which can undermine the economy.
Conversely, if people don’t obey traffic rules, the number of accidents will increase and being late would not be uncommon for them, all of which can undermine the economy.
Laws isare a good tool for people to build a harmonious society.
Laws are a good tool for people to build a harmonious society.
People are more inclined to be driven by the illegal interests without the law’s restraints.
People are more inclined to be driven by illegal interests without the law’s restraints.
They are more likely to do something to hurt others, such as fraudulent and violent activities. They are more likely to do something to hurt others, such as fraudulent and violent activities.
At this moment, law is a powerful weapon to punish those offenders, helping them understand the boundary between right and wrong.
For instance, if a salesperson sells counterfeit goods to customers, not only cwould it definitely have an adverse effect on the company’s brand image, but also with the help of laws, the government would impose a harsh punishment on these business practicesit also would be punishable according to the law.
For instance, if a salesperson sells counterfeit goods to customers, not only would it have an adverse effect on the company’s brand image, but it also would be punishable according to the law.
So, there arwill be less illegal events in people’s daily lifeves due to the law and our society will be more healthier and more stable.
So, there will be less illegal events in people’s daily lives due to the law and our society will be healthier and more stable.
However, tToo muchany rules and regulations, however, can restrict people’s freedom to some extent, which may impose a detrimental influence on society’s long-term development.
Too many rules and regulations, however, can restrict people’s freedom to some extent, which may impose a detrimental influence on society’s long-term development.
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If the authority just wants to set complex rules to maintain the society stabletability of society without listening to the public’s voice, the citizens may feel they are ignored and they dwon’t have the motivations to contribute to the development of the whole societysociety as a whole.
If the authority just wants to set complex rules to maintain the stability of society without listening to the public’s voice, the citizens may feel they are ignored and won’t have the motivation to contribute to the development of society as a whole.
One example is the censorship law that restricts the freedom of speech. One example is the censorship law that restricts the freedom of speech.
If citizens have no opportunity to speak out their voices, the government cannot pinpoint and tackle the problems, such as corruption and bureaucracy.
If citizens have no opportunity to speak out, the government cannot pinpoint and tackle problems, such as corruption and bureaucracy.
After a long time, people will be disappointed in society and thus the society will be indulgedfall into stagnation.
After a long time, people will be disappointed in society and thus the society will fall into stagnation.
In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running smoothly without laws while imposing harsh regulations may produce negative effects. In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running smoothly without laws while imposing harsh regulations may produce negative effects.
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Laws are a powerful method to manage the public.
From my perospective, a society without laws cannot function well, although too muchany regulations may pose a threat to the society.
From my perspective, a society without laws cannot function well, although too many regulations may pose a threat to society.
If a society doesn’t have effective laws, the society will be chaotic and there iswill be no economic growth.
If a society doesn’t have effective laws, the society will be chaotic and there will be no economic growth.
Laws give people various kinds of rules and regulations to tell every citizen what can do and what cannot do.
Laws give people various kinds of rules and regulations to tell every citizen what can and cannot do.
If people act at their will, it will bring a less efficient society and thus the government budget will be tense. If people act at their will, it will bring a less efficient society and thus the government budget will be tense.
If people simply act according to their own will, society will be less efficient and thus the government budget will be tight.
(General note: what is the relationship between people acting on their own, society running efficiently and the government budget? I am not sure I understand this sentence.)
According to the law about traffic laws, for example, every adult has the responsibility to comply with traffic rules and regulations at anytime anywhere.
According to traffic laws, for example, every adult has the responsibility to comply with traffic rules and regulations at anytime anywhere.
OnlyThis ins this way, cane only way people can go to work on time and be ensure ad smooth traffic, especially during the rush hour.
This is the only way people can go to work on time and be ensured smooth traffic, especially during the rush hour.
Conversely, if people don’t obey traffic rules, some accidents will increase, and being late is not uncommon for themwill become more common, all of which can undermine the economy.
Conversely, if people don’t obey traffic rules, accidents will increase, and being late will become more common, all of which can undermine the economy.
This is a good sentence -- the relationships are clear.
Laws is a good tool for people to build a harmonious society.
Law is a good tool for people to build a harmonious society.
People are more inclined to be driven by the illegal interests without law’s restraints.
People are more inclined to be driven by illegal interests without law’s restraints.
This sentence is also not clear. "Illegal interests without law's restraints" is almost non-sensical. (Illegal is literally "violating the law", so without law nothing can be illegal.)
Maybe better: People will be more inclined to dangerous or destructive behavior without the restraint of the law.
They are more likely to do something hurt others, such as fraudulent and violent activities.
At this moment, law is a powerful weapon to punish those offenders, helping them understand the boundary between right and wrong.
For instance, if a salesperson sellold counterfeit goods to customers, not only could it definitelyit could have an adverse effect on the company’s brand image, but also wimage. With the help of laws, the government would impose a harsh punishment on these business practices.
For instance, if a salesperson sold counterfeit goods to customers, it could have an adverse effect on the company’s image. With the help of laws, the government would impose a harsh punishment on these business practices.
So, there are lessfewer illegal events in people’s daily lifeves due to the law, and our society will beis more healthy and stable.
So, there are fewer illegal events in people’s daily lives due to the law, and our society is more healthy and stable.
However, too muchany rules and regulations can restrict people’s freedom to some extent, which impose acould detrimentally influence ona society’s long-term development.
However, too many rules and regulations can restrict people’s freedom to some extent, which could detrimentally influence a society’s long-term development.
If the authoritygovernment just wants to set complex rules to maintain tha stable society stable without listening to the public’s voice, the citizens will feel they are being ignored and they dwon’t have motivations to contribute the development of the whole society.
If the government just wants to set complex rules to maintain a stable society without listening to the public’s voice, the citizens will feel they are being ignored and they won’t have motivation to contribute the development of the whole society.
One example is the censorship laws that restrict the freedom of speech.
One example is censorship laws that restrict freedom of speech.
If citizens have no opportunity speak out their voices, the government cannot pinpoint and tackle the problems, such as corruption and bureaucracy.
If citizens have no opportunity speak out, the government cannot pinpoint and tackle problems such as corruption and bureaucracy.
After a long time, people will be disappointed in society and thus the society will be indulged inbecome stagnationt.
After a long time, people will be disappointed in society and the society will be become stagnant.
In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running smoothly without laws while imposing harsh regulations may produce negative effect.
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Very good! Good laws are hard to write...
The pros and cons aboutof having laws in society
The pros and cons of having laws in society
Laws are a powerful methodtool to manage [the public].
Laws are a powerful tool to manage [the public].
“The public” seems odd in this context, because laws affect both public and private behavior, and both rulers and the ruled. I’m not sure what you’re trying to say, but maybe you could use “society” or “people’s behavior” instead of “the public.”
From my perospective, a society without laws cannot function well, although too much regulations (or: too many regulations) may pose a threat to the society.
From my perspective, a society without laws cannot function well, although too much regulation (or: too many regulations) may pose a threat to the society.
If a society doesn’t have effective laws, the society will be chaotic and there is nolack economic growth.
If a society doesn’t have effective laws, the society will be chaotic and lack economic growth.
Laws give people various kinds of rules and regulations to tell every citizen what he or she can do and what cannot do.
Laws give people various kinds of rules and regulations to tell every citizen what he or she can and cannot do.
If people act atccording to their will, it will bring a less efficient society and thus the government [budget] will be [tense].
If people act according to their will, it will bring a less efficient society and thus the government [budget] will be [tense].
“Budget” and “tense” both sound odd. Maybe you mean that the “budget will be tight,” but I think you need to explain the connection between an inefficient society and the the “government budget.” The logic of this sentence seems weak to me
According to the law about traffic laws, for example, every adult has the responsibility to comply with traffic rules and regulations at anytime, anywhere.
According to the traffic laws, for example, every adult has the responsibility to comply with traffic rules and regulations at anytime, anywhere.
Only in this way, can people go to work on time and ensure a smooth traffic, especially during the rush hour.
Only in this way, can people go to work on time and ensure smooth traffic, especially during the rush hour.
Conversely, if people don’t obey traffic rules, some [accidents will increase and being late is not uncommon for themwill become more common | accidents and lateness will increase], all of which can undermine the economy.
Conversely, if people don’t obey traffic rules, [accidents will increase and being late will become more common | accidents and lateness will increase], all of which can undermine the economy.
Laws isare a good tool for people to build a harmonious society.
Laws are a good tool for people to build a harmonious society.
People are more inclined to be driven by the [illegal interests] without law’s restraints | constraints.
People are more inclined to be driven by [illegal interests] without law’s restraints | constraints.
“Illegal interests” doesn’t make sense because, without laws, nothing is illegal, so there are no “illegal interests.”
They are more likely to do somethings that will hurt others, such as fraudulent and violent activities.
They are more likely to do things that will hurt others, such as fraudulent and violent activities.
At this moment, law is a powerful weapon to punish those offenders, helping them understand the boundary between right and wrong.
For instance, if a salesperson sells counterfeit goods to customers, not only could it definitely have an adverse effect on the company’s brand image, but also with the help of laws, the government wcould impose a harsh punishment on these business practices.
For instance, if a salesperson sells counterfeit goods to customers, not only could it have an adverse effect on the company’s brand image, but also with the help of laws, the government could impose a harsh punishment on these business practices.
I’ve deleted “definitely” and replaced “would” with “could” because neither of these outcomes are certain, since there’s no guarantee that anyone will notice that the goods are counterfeit, and even if someone does notice it, the government might fail to enforce the law.
So, there are lessfewer illegal events in people’s daily lifeves due to the law and our society will bis more healthy and stable m(ore: healthier and more stable).
So, there are fewer illegal events in people’s daily lives due to the law and our society is more healthy and stable (or: healthier and more stable).
However, too muchany rules and regulations can restrict people’s freedom to some extent, which can impose a detrimental influence on society’s long-term development.
However, too many rules and regulations can restrict people’s freedom to some extent, which can impose a detrimental influence on society’s long-term development.
If the authority just wants to set complex rules to maintain the societyal stableility without listening the publiceople’s voice, the citizens will feel they are ignored and they dwon’t [have motivations | be motivated] to contribute the development of the whole society.
If the authority just wants to set complex rules to maintain social stability without listening the people’s voice, the citizens will feel they are ignored and won’t [have motivations | be motivated] to contribute the development of the whole society.
One example is the censorship laws that restrict the freedom of speech.
One example is censorship laws that restrict the freedom of speech.
If citizens have no opportunity to speak out their voiceopinions | thoughts, the government cannot pinpoint and tackle the problems, such as corruption and bureaucracy.
If citizens have no opportunity to speak out their opinions | thoughts, the government cannot pinpoint and tackle the problems, such as corruption and bureaucracy.
After a long time, people will be disappointed in society and thus the society will be indulged in stagnatione.
After a long time, people will be disappointed in society and thus the society will stagnate.
“Indulged” is not the right word here.
In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running smoothly without laws(,) while imposing harsh regulations may produce negative effects. In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running smoothly without laws(,) while imposing harsh regulations may produce negative effects.
The pPros and cCons about lof Laws in sSociety
The Pros and Cons of Laws in Society
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Laws are a powerful method to manage the public.
From my perospective, a society without laws cannot function well, although too muchany regulations may pose a threat to the society.
From my perspective, a society without laws cannot function well, although too many regulations may pose a threat to society.
- Difference between "much" and "many", if you are interested: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/much-many-a-lot-of-lots-of-quantifiers
- It's more natural not to put "the" in front of society, because you are speaking of a general society here.
If a society doesn’t have effective laws, ithe society will be chaotic and there iswill be no economic growth.
If a society doesn’t have effective laws, it will be chaotic and there will be no economic growth.
Changed "is" to "will be" to keep the tenses consistent.
Laws give peoplprovide various kinds of rules and regulations to tellhat instruct every citizen on what they can do and what they cannot.
Laws provide various kinds of rules and regulations that instruct every citizen on what they can do and what they cannot.
- Relative clause "what can do..." is missing a subject, so I added they
- Stylistically the use of "people" and then "citizen" is a bit confusing. I simplified by just using "citizen".
- I changed "tell" for "instruct on", just for stylistic reasons. I think it suits the tone of the writing more. Tell is fine here though.
If people act atccording to their will, it will bring a lessbout a decrease in efficientcy in society and thus the government budget will be tenserestricted.
If people act according to their will, it will bring about a decrease in efficiency in society and thus the government budget will be restricted.
- the phrase is "according to someone's will"
According to the law about trafficTraffics laws, for example, compel every adult has the responsibility to comply with traffic rules and regulations at anytime, anywhere.
Traffics laws, for example, compel every adult to comply with traffic rules and regulations anytime, anywhere.
Only in this way, can people go to work on time and ensure a smooth traffictraffic remains fluid, especially during the rush hour.
Only in this way can people go to work on time and ensure traffic remains fluid, especially during rush hour.
- "rush hour" is a general phrase, it doesn't need "the" in front of it
Conversely, if people don’t obey traffic rules, somethe number of accidents will increase and being late is not uncommon for themwill become commonplace, all of which can undermine the economy's performance.
Conversely, if people don’t obey traffic rules, the number of accidents will increase and being late will become commonplace, all of which can undermine the economy's performance.
- You can also say "accidents will become more frequent"
- Again I changed the second "is" to "will" for consistency
- Good use of "conversely"
Laws is a good tool for people to build a harmonious society.
People are more inclined to be driven by the illegal interests without law’s restrainthe constraints of laws.
People are more inclined to be driven by illegal interests without the constraints of laws.
They are more likely to do something hurts that cause harm to others, such as fraudulent and violent activities.
They are more likely to do things that cause harm to others, such as fraudulent and violent activities.
At this moment, lthe Law is a powerful weapon to punish those offenders, helping them understand the boundary between right and wrong.
At this moment, the Law is a powerful weapon to punish offenders, helping them understand the boundary between right and wrong.
- you can leave out "those" here because you are talking about a general, abstract situation.
For instance, if a salesperson sells counterfeit goods to customers, not only cwould it definitely have an adverse effect on the company’s brand image, but also with the help of laws, the government would impose a harsh punishment on these kinds of business practices.
For instance, if a salesperson sells counterfeit goods to customers, not only would it definitely have an adverse effect on the company’s brand image, but also with the help of laws, the government would impose a harsh punishment on these kinds of business practices.
- "could definitely" is better phrased as "would". However if you left out "definitely", could would be just fine.
So, there are less illegal events in people’s daily life due to the lLaw and our society will beis thus more healthy and stable.
So, there are less illegal events in people’s daily life due to the Law and our society is thus more healthy and stable.
However, too muchany rules and regulations can restrict people’s freedom to some extent, which can impose a detrimental influence on society’s long-term development.
However, too many rules and regulations can restrict people’s freedom to some extent, which can impose a detrimental influence on society’s long-term development.
- If you use "can" in the first phrase, it's best to use "can" in the second as well
If the authorityies just wants to set complex rules to maintain the society stabletability of society without listening to the public’s voice, the citizens will feel they are ignored and they dwon’t have motivations to contribute to the development of the whole society.
If authorities just want to set complex rules to maintain the stability of society without listening to the public’s voice, citizens will feel they are ignored and they won’t have motivations to contribute to the development of the whole society.
- Here's some tips on use if and conditions, if you are interested: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/conditionals-if
One example is the censorship law that restricts the freedom of speech. One example is the censorship law that restricts the freedom of speech.
If citizens have no opportunity speak out their voices, the government cannot pinpoint and tackle theimportant problems, such as corruption and bureaucracy.
If citizens have no opportunity speak out, the government cannot pinpoint and tackle important problems, such as corruption and bureaucracy.
After a long time, people will become disappointed in society and thus the society will be indulgedfall into stagnation.
After a long time, people will become disappointed in society and thus society will fall into stagnation.
- "Indulged" isn't the right word here. You could also say "enter into stagnation", or just "become stagnant"
In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running smoothly without laws, whileereas imposing harsh regulations may also produce negative effects.
In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running smoothly without laws, whereas imposing harsh regulations may also produce negative effects.
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A very interesting and well argued post! You succeeded in providing convincing examples to support your points. It is indeed a difficult balance to find.
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Laws are a powerful method to manage the public. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
Laws are a powerful “The public” seems odd in this context, because laws affect both public and private behavior, and both rulers and the ruled. I’m not sure what you’re trying to say, but maybe you could use “society” or “people’s behavior” instead of “the public.” This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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From my prospective, a society without laws cannot function well, although too much regulations may pose a threat to the society.
From my per - Difference between "much" and "many", if you are interested: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/much-many-a-lot-of-lots-of-quantifiers - It's more natural not to put "the" in front of society, because you are speaking of a general society here.
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If a society doesn’t have effective laws, the society will be chaotic and there is no economic growth.
If a society doesn’t have effective laws, it Changed "is" to "will be" to keep the tenses consistent.
If a society doesn’t have effective laws, the society will be chaotic and
If a society doesn’t have effective laws, the society will be chaotic and there
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Laws give people various kinds of rules and regulations to tell every citizen what can do and what cannot.
Laws - Relative clause "what can do..." is missing a subject, so I added they - Stylistically the use of "people" and then "citizen" is a bit confusing. I simplified by just using "citizen". - I changed "tell" for "instruct on", just for stylistic reasons. I think it suits the tone of the writing more. Tell is fine here though.
Laws give people various kinds of rules and regulations to tell every citizen what he or she can
Laws give people various kinds of rules and regulations to tell every citizen what can
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If people act at their will, it will bring a less efficient society and thus the government budget will be tense.
If people act a - the phrase is "according to someone's will"
If people act a “Budget” and “tense” both sound odd. Maybe you mean that the “budget will be tight,” but I think you need to explain the connection between an inefficient society and the the “government budget.” The logic of this sentence seems weak to me If people act at their will, it will bring a less efficient society and thus the government budget will be tense. If people act at their will, it will bring a less efficient society and thus the government budget will be tense. If people simply act according to their own will, society will be less efficient and thus the government budget will be tight. (General note: what is the relationship between people acting on their own, society running efficiently and the government budget? I am not sure I understand this sentence.)
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According to the law about traffic, for example, every adult has the responsibility to comply with traffic rules and regulations at anytime anywhere.
According to the
According to According to the laws about traffic, for example, every adult has the responsibility to comply with traffic rules and regulations at any time anywhere. According to the laws about traffic, for example, every adult has the responsibility to comply with traffic rules and regulations at any time anywhere. |
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Only in this way, can people go to work on time and ensure a smooth traffic especially during the rush hour.
Only in this way - "rush hour" is a general phrase, it doesn't need "the" in front of it
Only in this way, can people go to work on time and ensure
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Conversely, if people don’t obey traffic rules, some accidents will increase and being late is not uncommon for them, all of which can undermine the economy.
Conversely, if people don’t obey traffic rules, - You can also say "accidents will become more frequent" - Again I changed the second "is" to "will" for consistency - Good use of "conversely"
Conversely, if people don’t obey traffic rules,
Conversely, if people don’t obey traffic rules, This is a good sentence -- the relationships are clear.
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Laws is a good tool for people to build a harmonious society. This sentence has been marked as perfect!
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People are more incline to driven by the illegal interests without law’s restrains.
People are more inclined to be driven by
People are more inclined to be driven by “Illegal interests” doesn’t make sense because, without laws, nothing is illegal, so there are no “illegal interests.”
People are more inclined to be driven by This sentence is also not clear. "Illegal interests without law's restraints" is almost non-sensical. (Illegal is literally "violating the law", so without law nothing can be illegal.) Maybe better: People will be more inclined to dangerous or destructive behavior without the restraint of the law.
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They are more likely to do something hurt others, such as fraudulent and violent activities.
They are more likely to do
They are more likely to do This sentence has been marked as perfect! They are more likely to do something to hurt others, such as fraudulent and violent activities. They are more likely to do something to hurt others, such as fraudulent and violent activities. |
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At this moment, law is a powerful weapon to punish those offenders, helping them understand the boundary between right and wrong.
At this moment, - you can leave out "those" here because you are talking about a general, abstract situation. This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! This sentence has been marked as perfect! |
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For instance, if salesperson sell counterfeit goods to customers, not only could it definitely have an adverse effect on the company’s brand image, but also with the help of laws, the government would impose a harsh punishment on these business practices.
For instance, if a salesperson sells counterfeit goods to customers, not only - "could definitely" is better phrased as "would". However if you left out "definitely", could would be just fine.
For instance, if a salesperson sells counterfeit goods to customers, not only could it I’ve deleted “definitely” and replaced “would” with “could” because neither of these outcomes are certain, since there’s no guarantee that anyone will notice that the goods are counterfeit, and even if someone does notice it, the government might fail to enforce the law.
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So, there are less illegal events in people’s daily life due to the law and our society will be more health and stable.
So, there are less illegal events in people’s daily life due to the
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However, too much rules and regulations can restrict people’s freedom to some extent, which impose a detrimental influence on society’s long-term development.
However, too m - If you use "can" in the first phrase, it's best to use "can" in the second as well
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If the authority just wants to set complex rules to maintain the society stable without listening the public’s voice, the citizen feel they are ignored and they don’t have motivations to contribute the development of the whole society.
If - Here's some tips on use if and conditions, if you are interested: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/conditionals-if
If the authority just wants to set complex rules to maintain
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One example is the censorship law that restrict the freedom of speech. One example is the censorship law that restricts the freedom of speech. One example is the censorship law that restricts the freedom of speech.
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One example is One example is the censorship law that restricts the freedom of speech. One example is the censorship law that restricts the freedom of speech. |
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If citizens have no opportunity speak out their voices, the government cannot pinpoint and tackle the problems, such as corruption and bureaucracy.
If citizens have no opportunity speak out
If citizens have no opportunity to speak out their
If citizens have no opportunity speak out
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After a long time, people will be disappointed in society and thus the society will be indulged in stagnation.
After a long time, people will become disappointed in society and thus - "Indulged" isn't the right word here. You could also say "enter into stagnation", or just "become stagnant"
After a long time, people will be disappointed in society and thus the society will “Indulged” is not the right word here.
After a long time, people will be disappointed in society and
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In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running smoothly without laws while imposing harsh regulations may produce negative effect.
In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running smoothly without laws, wh In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running smoothly without laws(,) while imposing harsh regulations may produce negative effects. In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running smoothly without laws(,) while imposing harsh regulations may produce negative effects. This sentence has been marked as perfect! In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running smoothly without laws while imposing harsh regulations may produce negative effects. In conclusion, it would be difficult to keep a society running smoothly without laws while imposing harsh regulations may produce negative effects. |
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