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The New Mission to The Moon

With the Artemis Moon Mission begins a new chapter for human being. One of the goal is to build a permanent base in moon, exactly in the South pole, where there is possibilities to find water. In some moment in future, if all goes well, will birth a first human. This baby, shall become the first native on the moon. And I have a question, in case this baby visit the earth, we could say which he is an alien?

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The New Mission to The Moon

With the Artemis Moon Mission begins a new chapter for human beinglife/for humanity.

One of the goal is to build a permanent base ion moon, on exactly in the South pole, where there is the possibilitiesy to find water.

Can’t build a base inside of the moon, therefore use on

Is -> singular
Are -> plural

You talk of one, therefore ‘is the possibility to find water’, however we would also use ‘possibility’ in this sentence; ‘there is the possibility to find water and aliens’, if you would like more examples let me know

In some moment inthe future, if all goes well, we will birth a create the first human on the Moon.

This baby,human shall become the first native from/on the moon.

And I have a question, in case/query, if this baby happened to visit the earth, we could say which he ishe be an alien?

The earth -> dirt, soil.
Earth -> noun, the name of the planet we live on

Remember to reverse word order if it’s a question

Would is used here, as you are talking about a hypothetical situation. <<< i have picked this up a few times in your writing i believe, if you want to improve, i would highly recommend a post focusing on a few sentences containing this concept, would be happy to mark

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Sept. 9, 2022

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And I have a question, in case/query, if this baby happened to visit the earth, we could say which he ishe be an alien?

The earth -> dirt, soil.
Earth -> noun, the name of the planet we live on

Remember to reverse word order if it’s a question

Would is used here, as you are talking about a hypothetical situation. <<< i have picked this up a few times in your writing i believe, if you want to improve, i would highly recommend a post focusing on a few sentences containing this concept, would be happy to mark

I take note

With the Artemis Moon Mission, begins a new chapter for human beings.

One of the goals is to build a permanent base ion the moon moon, exactly ion the South pole, where there isare possibilities to find water.

In some moment in future, if all goes well, will birth a first humathe first human will be born on the moon.

This baby, shall become the first native on the moon.

And I have a question, in case this baby visits the eEarth, we could we say which he is an alien?

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Great work! Interesting questions

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Ducky

Sept. 9, 2022

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Thanks a lot. Yes, I think they are interesting questions.

The New Mission to Tthe Moon

With the Artemis Moon Mission begins a new chapter for human beings.

One of the goals is to build a permanent base inon the moon, exactly in the Sat its south pole, where there i's possibilitiestential to find water.

InAt some moment intime in the future, if all goes well, will birth a first humathe first human will be born on the moon.

This baby, shall become the moon's first native on the moon.

And I have a question, in casef this baby visit the es Earth, we could we say which s/he is an alien?

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Nice work!

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Ducky

Sept. 9, 2022

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Thanks.

The New Mission to The Moon

The New Mission to Tthe Moon

With the Artemis Moon Mission begins a new chapter for human being.

With the Artemis Moon Mission, begins a new chapter for human beings.

With the Artemis Moon Mission begins a new chapter for human beings.

With the Artemis Moon Mission begins a new chapter for human beinglife/for humanity.

One of the goal is to build a permanent base in moon, exactly in the South pole, where there is possibilities to find water.

One of the goals is to build a permanent base ion the moon moon, exactly ion the South pole, where there isare possibilities to find water.

One of the goals is to build a permanent base inon the moon, exactly in the Sat its south pole, where there i's possibilitiestential to find water.

One of the goal is to build a permanent base ion moon, on exactly in the South pole, where there is the possibilitiesy to find water.

In some moment in future, if all goes well, will birth a first human.

In some moment in future, if all goes well, will birth a first humathe first human will be born on the moon.

InAt some moment intime in the future, if all goes well, will birth a first humathe first human will be born on the moon.

In some moment inthe future, if all goes well, we will birth a create the first human on the Moon.

This baby, shall become the first native on the moon.

This baby, shall become the first native on the moon.

This baby, shall become the moon's first native on the moon.

This baby,human shall become the first native from/on the moon.

And I have a question, in case this baby visit the earth, we could say which he is an alien?

And I have a question, in case this baby visits the eEarth, we could we say which he is an alien?

And I have a question, in casef this baby visit the es Earth, we could we say which s/he is an alien?

And I have a question, in case/query, if this baby happened to visit the earth, we could say which he ishe be an alien?

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