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teachvil

Dec. 2, 2019

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The local chidhood store around my block.

Every person in the world is suppose to have a memory of the block where he live his lives. There are memories of the colors in the houses, and the smells in summers or winters, and the vision of the sky where the sun is yellow and the rest is blue, with the clouds flying east towards west and viceversa, and in the streets, the vision of the local dogs in stray situations who live well with the other who are property of the owners, and in general, the typic picture a memory of the childhood has when you remember. The edifices are of various natures, because in only one block can have the one for the meats, the other for repairs the cars, the hospital, and the bakers for the morning biscuit. All together in the space of a block, like an ecosystem in essential balance to support others. I know this because my block in the childhood had the bakers store, and the tortilla store, and the bicycle store, and the favorite of all the childrens was the local store for candies, snacks, fruits, cold beverages, and artesanal syrup for to put in a bag of fruits that all childrens believed it a feast for the senses. All boys who had a life in the block, asks the mother of each for a coin of various denominations that can to be 1 cent, 5 cent, 10 cent, 25, cent, 50 cent, or 100 cent that we call with the name of the national flying bird that we call eagle and you have to not confusion with the eagle from the bigger country in the direction North in relation to the latitude of the block of my childhood. If the mother of the kid gives the coin of the 100, that is like giving naturals powers because you now have the power of shopping almost ten times more than the childrens who only receive the coin of 10 cents. I am always in the center. My fathers were very very very cool all times because they put in my hand a coin of 50 scents and when I put in my pocket it feels like it has much power of purchase. (all candies and fruits and snacks were as cheap as only 3 cents a pop) so 50 was like millionaire in the vision of a children who only knows coins for after school.
The local store in the center of my story was legends most important because of the lady who owners the store. She was loving all the time, to assist, to prepare the syrups, to incorporate the promotions of the sodas with the caps of the bottles, or the stickers of soccer football during the mundials cups, and i remember specials the Italy 90 for the pet that mundial was a boy of squares with the head of a soccer football ball. Ciao is the name, that is translates to good byes. So this lady never lost a chance to make your days specials, and when the day of the summer were with us, she makes delicious icecreams that she puts in bags, and you will suck the bag as you runs playing soccer football, or a game of tags. She has a name special for each of the childrens like cauliflower head for the kids with curlys in his hair who has a patch of white hair on the top. She calls Hammock face the kid that laughters with the mouth open and moves in motions to left and right. She calls mama mia the girl that has a mother that hears ABBA all days, and you can listen from the outside of her house. She calls water bottle the kid that always carries a bottle old of purification water that out of the blue he takes with him every place he goes and she calls this boy water bottle. This was my favorite special name, because in my idiom this translations to little bottle of little water, and is funny. She was a stapler in my town, she was an institute in my neighbors, she was a wisdom in my block.
She is very religions and you can see all around from the second you enters by the doors in all the walls. She has the pictures of all saints she believes, and she never eliminates, only contributions more to the posters on the walls. Special is when during the week holly, when all the roads are covered in carpets of shavings, and fruits the contain as many colors of two times the colors of the rainbow, and she obtains one more poster for the wall on the store, and it looks fantastic now because it all does many sense. All looks like collaging together, and give mystical emotion to the room with the bars and the snacks, and ever the bell sounds more ceremony now after the addition of the new poster.
The break through comes when she begins to serve lunches before and after the noon, and all now can come in and sit to eat. The smells are covering all the air and no nose is abandoned or ignored because you can resist, you cannot resist the fragance of the chickens boiling in the water, and the vegetables cooking in the kitchen, and the tortillas burning on top of the giant disk where to make tortillas of corn, and i'm telling you, it is precious to see this sight, because all childrens who are now adults and remember this store can agreement with me in so that she transported you to other universe with the aromas she covers the store now, specially in the days of the weekend because she cooks cakes of figs that are covering with orchata syrup, which is a syrup that she makes with the tradition drink of my town, and all persons from other blocks will come walking like zombies attracting by the frangance of the figs, and it flavors, o my goodness, like nothing is there outside. Her name was Abuela Mirna, and the store has a big letter yellow and blue with also the name of the store: TIENDA MIRNA, and no person can forget this letter even it is no there no more, because the store is no exist in this place after Abuela Mirna has to go for another place to live. She neves says the godbyes to no person, all you know she has the store open one day and cooks delicios food and give warm welcomes to the childrens and the persons that visit, and you close your eyes and when open, she is away, and the edifice is now a different color and the big letter with the name up the door of the store is in other place, and the door never opens again.
All the childrens that plays their in the years before Italy ninety who are now adults remember from affections the sentiments in their hearts that born from the permanence in this place enjoying the snacks, and the figs, and the syrups with the fruits. This is before the inventions of the internet so there are no pictures or films but you must to believe mine words, it is a lovely place that lives in the memory of the local children who lives there in the past.

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The local childhood store around mythe block.

Every person in the world is supposed to have a memory of the block where he live his lives.

There are memories of the colors inof the houses, and the smells in summers or winters, and the visionsight of the sky wheren the sun is yellow and the rest is blue, with the clouds flying from east towards west and vice-versa,; and in the streets, the visionsight of the local dogs in stray situationstray dogs who live well with the other who are property of thdogs who have owners,; and in general, the typical picture a memory of the childhood has when you rememberof a childhood memory.

The edificebuildings are of various natures, because in only ona single block can have the one for theone can find a store for buying meats, the another for car repairs the cars, thea hospital, and the bakers forbakeries where breads are made in the morning biscuit.

(This is) All together in the space of a block, like an ecosystem in essential balance to support others.

Without "This is," it's an incomplete sentence. However, if you're going for a more poetic feel, it isn't really incorrect.

I know this because my block in the childchildhood neighborhood had thea bakers store, and they, a tortilla store, and thea bicycle store,; and the favorite of all the childrens was the local store forwhere they could buy candies, snacks, fruits, cold beverages, and arteisanal syrup for to put in a bag of fruits that all. All of the childrens believed it to be a feast for the senses.

All boys who had a life in the block, asks the mother of eachEach boy on the block would ask his mother for a coin of various denominations that can to. It could be 1 cent, 5 cents, 10 cents, 25, cent, 50 cents, or 100 cent that we call withs. We would call the coins by the name of theour national flying bird, that we call eagle and you have toe eagle. It was important not to confusione it with the eagle from the bigger country into the direction North in relation to the latitude of the block of my childhoodnorth.

This sentence was too long and hard to break down. Shorter, more concise sentences are better.

If theone's mother of the kid gives the coin of the 100gave him a 100 cent coin, that iwas like giving naturalssuper powers, because you now have the power of shoppingthat person would then have almost ten times more shopping power than the childrens who only receive the coin ofd 10 cent coins.

I amwas always in the center.

My fathers wereas very, very very cool all timescool because they put in my hand a coin of would give me a 50 scents and w coin. When I put in my pocket, it feelslt like it has much power of purchaseI could buy anything.

(aAll candies and, fruits, and snacks were as cheap as only 3 cents a pop), so 50 was like being a millionaire in the visioneyes of a children who only knowsew coins for usage after school.

The local store in the center of my story was legendsary most importantly because of the lady who owners the stored it.

She was loving all the time, to assist, to and helped with prepareing the syrups, to incorporate the promotions of the and promoting sodas with thbottle caps, of the bottles, or the stickers of soccer footballr with soccer stickers during the mundials cWorld Cups, and i remember specials the Italy 90 for the pet that mundialI especially remember the mascot for the 1990 Italy World Cup, which was a boy of squares with the head of a soccer football ball.

"Ciao is the name, that is", which translates to "good byes", was his name.

So, this lady never lost a chance to make your days specials, and when the day of the summer were with us, sheit was summer, she would makes delicious ice creams that she puts in bags, and you will suck the bag as you rthat one could suck on as they ran arounsd playing soccer football, or a game of tags.

She hasd a name special for each of the childrens, like "cauliflower head" for the kids with curlys in his hair who has a patch of hair with a white hairpatch on the top.

She calls Hammock faced the kid that laughtersed with thehis mouth open and moves in motions toswinging left andto right. "hammock face."

She calls mama mia the girl that has a mother that hearsed the girl whose mother listen to ABBA all days, and you can listento the point that you could hear it from the outside of her house., "mamma mia."

She calls water bottled the kid thatwho always carriesd a bottle old off old purificationed water that out of the blue he takes with him every place he goes and she calls this boy "water bottle".

This was my favorite special nickname, because in my idiomlanguage this translationes to "little bottle of little water", and it is funny.

She was a stapler in my town, she was an institute in my neighbors, she was ahood, a figure of wisdom ion my block.

She iwas very religionsus, and you canould see it all around you on the walls from the second you enters byed the doors in all the walls.

She has thed pictures of all saints she believesd in, and she never eliminates, only contributions more to thremoved any, only added more posters on the walls.

Special is whenIt was special during the week hollyHoly Week, when all the roads awere covered in carpets of shavings, and fruits the contain as many colors of two times the colors of the rainbow, and she obtainswere twice as colorful as the rainbow. She would get one more poster for the wall on the store wall, and it looksed fantastic now because it all does many sense.

I don't know what you mean by "carpets of shavings".

All looks like collaging together, and giveIt all seemed to blend together, and it gave a sense of mystical emotion to the room with the bars and the snacks, and evern the bell soundsed more ceremony nowious after the addition of the new poster.

The break through coames when she beginsan to serve lunches before and after the noon, and all now cancould come in and sit to eat.

The smells are covering allfilled the air, and no nose is abandoned or ignorwas missed, because you can resist, you cannotnobody could resist the fragrance of the chickens boiling in the water, and, the vegetables cooking in the kitchen, and the tortillas burning on top of the giant disk where to make tortillas of corn, and ion which they were made. I'm telling you, it iwas precious to see this sight, because all the childrens who are now adults and remember this store can agreement with me in so that she transported you to another universe with the aromas she coversscents of the store now, , and especially in the days ofon the weekends, because she cooks cakes of figs that aremade fig cakes coveringed with orchata syrup, which is a syrup that she makesde with the traditional drink of my town, and all p. Eversyonse from other blocks willould come walking like zombies attracting by the frangrance of the figs, and its flavors, o my goodness, like nothing is there outsid were like nothing else.

Her name was Abuela Mirna, and the store has a big letter yellow and blue with also the name of the store: TIENDA MIRNA, and no personletters with its name: TIENDA MIRNA. Nobody can forget thisose letter even it is nothough they are no molonger there, because the store is nostopped exist in this placeg after Abuela Mirna has to go for another place to livemoved away.

She nevesr says theid goodbyes to no person, all you knowanyone. All we know is that she hasd the store open one day and cooksed delicious food and give warm welcomes to the childrens and othe persons thatr visit,ors; and then you close your eyes, and when opeyou open them again, she is awaygone, and the edificebuilding is now a different color and the big letters with the name upabove the door of the store is in other placare gone, and the door never opens again.

All the childrens that playsed theire in the years before Italy ninetythe 1990 Italy World Cup and who are now adults remember from affections the sentiments in their hearts that born from the permanence in this placately the memories born in their hearts while enjoying the snacks, and the figs, and the syrups with the fruits.

This iwas before the inventions of the internet so there are no pictures or films of this place, but you must to believe miney words, it i. It was a lovely place that lives in the memoryies of the local children who livesd there in the past.

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teachvil

Dec. 2, 2019

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Special is whenIt was special during the week hollyHoly Week, when all the roads awere covered in carpets of shavings, and fruits the contain as many colors of two times the colors of the rainbow, and she obtainswere twice as colorful as the rainbow. She would get one more poster for the wall on the store wall, and it looksed fantastic now because it all does many sense.

I don't know what you mean by "carpets of shavings".

carpets of wood shavings are traditions from where i come from, they make a carpet of many color to carry the statues of church all around the town.

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Bees

Dec. 2, 2019

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That sounds really interesting! Thank you for the clarification :)

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Jacque

Dec. 3, 2019

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Are you from Spain? I was just there in July and got to see a profession in Selliva! I think what you are referring to are the "pasos" yes? If so, I would use the term "platform" instead of carpet. Platforms are rigid structures, and carpets is fabric that you walk upon in a building. Another word you can use would be "pedestal" which was how they were explained to me when I was in Spain (pedestal is the name for a platform in which statues are placed)

Every person in the world is supposed to have a memory of the block where they live his livesd.

A memory would mean it took place in the past. I think you are trying to say:


"Every person in the world is supposed to have a memory of the block where they grew up."


English generally uses "they" to convey either male or female instead of saying "he" or "she" when the gender is unknown or could be either or.


As for "suppose" vs "supposed" please look at this site: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/supposed-to/

There are memories of the colors inof the houses, and the smells in summers orand winters, and the vision. Memories of the sky where the sun is yellow and the rest is blue, with the clouds flying east towards west and vice versa, and in the streets, the vision. The memories of dogs living ofn the local dogs in stray situationsstreets as strays and who live well with the others who are property of the owners, and in general, the typical picture a memory of the childhood has when you remember it.

Be careful of run-on sentences! For each new concept you introduce you must start a new sentence. You can use a semicolon ";" to connect like phrases talking about similar topics such as:

There are memories of the sky in the summer and the cold of winter; memories of how the colours of the houses gleamed in the sun.

You are also using "the" too much, which is required in Spanish but not in English. "The" is used to indicate a specific item (the book on the table, the dog in the yard) and usually is dropped when talking about unspecific collective nouns ("The memories of dogs playing in the yards and sleeping in the streets"). The exemption of "the" from dogs here are you are talking about dogs in general and not specific dogs that you know or can see presently.

I know this because my block in the childhood had the bakers store, and the tortilla store, and the bicycle store, and but the favorite of all the childrens was the local store for candies, snacks, fruits, cold beverages, and artesanal syrup for to put in a bag of fruits that all childrens believed it a feast for the senses.

When making a list, you only need and before the last item in the list.

Children is already plural. Child is the singular form, Children is the plural. It is an irregular plural noun. No need for the "s" at the end!

All boys who had a life ilived on the block, asks the mother of each for a coin of various denominations that can to be 1 cent, 5 cent, 10 cent, 25, cent, 50 cent, or 100 cent that we call with the name of the national flying bird that we call eagle and you have to not confusion with the eagle from the bigger country in the direction North in relation to the latitude of the block of my childhood.

Might be a colloquial thing, but where I am located, we would say "on the block" or "in the neighborhood" but not "in the block" or "on the neighborhood". It's some unspoken rule, I guess!

My fathers were very very very cool all timesalways extremely cool because they put in my hand a coin of 50 scents and when I put in my pocket it feels like it has much power of purchase.

Very very very is incorrect grammar. "extremely" is a stronger word of very. Though, you could also say "very cool" it just wouldn't convey how strong it was

Other examples would be: "very tired" = "exhausted"
very happy = "ecstatic"
etc.

always sounds better here.
"all times" is incorrect, "all the time" is the correct phrase for that.

Feedback

I'll have to correct more another time as I am going to work. Thanks for telling us about where you grew up!

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teachvil

Dec. 2, 2019

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Every person in the world is supposed to have a memory of the block where they live his livesd.

A memory would mean it took place in the past. I think you are trying to say:


"Every person in the world is supposed to have a memory of the block where they grew up."


English generally uses "they" to convey either male or female instead of saying "he" or "she" when the gender is unknown or could be either or.


As for "suppose" vs "supposed" please look at this site: https://www.grammarly.com/blog/supposed-to/

I will investigate more on the runs ons sentences, thanks to you

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teachvil

Dec. 2, 2019

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My fathers were very very very cool all timesalways extremely cool because they put in my hand a coin of 50 scents and when I put in my pocket it feels like it has much power of purchase.

Very very very is incorrect grammar. "extremely" is a stronger word of very. Though, you could also say "very cool" it just wouldn't convey how strong it was

Other examples would be: "very tired" = "exhausted"
very happy = "ecstatic"
etc.

always sounds better here.
"all times" is incorrect, "all the time" is the correct phrase for that.

That is clever insights, thanks to you

The local chidhood store around my block.

The local childhood store around mythe block.

Every person in the world is suppose to have a memory of the block where he live his lives.

Every person in the world is supposed to have a memory of the block where they live his livesd.

Every person in the world is supposed to have a memory of the block where he live his lives.

There are memories of the colors in the houses, and the smells in summers or winters, and the vision of the sky where the sun is yellow and the rest is blue, with the clouds flying east towards west and viceversa, and in the streets, the vision of the local dogs in stray situations who live well with the other who are property of the owners, and in general, the typic picture a memory of the childhood has when you remember.

There are memories of the colors inof the houses, and the smells in summers orand winters, and the vision. Memories of the sky where the sun is yellow and the rest is blue, with the clouds flying east towards west and vice versa, and in the streets, the vision. The memories of dogs living ofn the local dogs in stray situationsstreets as strays and who live well with the others who are property of the owners, and in general, the typical picture a memory of the childhood has when you remember it.

There are memories of the colors inof the houses, and the smells in summers or winters, and the visionsight of the sky wheren the sun is yellow and the rest is blue, with the clouds flying from east towards west and vice-versa,; and in the streets, the visionsight of the local dogs in stray situationstray dogs who live well with the other who are property of thdogs who have owners,; and in general, the typical picture a memory of the childhood has when you rememberof a childhood memory.

The edifices are of various natures, because in only one block can have the one for the meats, the other for repairs the cars, the hospital, and the bakers for the morning biscuit.

The edificebuildings are of various natures, because in only ona single block can have the one for theone can find a store for buying meats, the another for car repairs the cars, thea hospital, and the bakers forbakeries where breads are made in the morning biscuit.

All together in the space of a block, like an ecosystem in essential balance to support others.

(This is) All together in the space of a block, like an ecosystem in essential balance to support others.

I know this because my block in the childhood had the bakers store, and the tortilla store, and the bicycle store, and the favorite of all the childrens was the local store for candies, snacks, fruits, cold beverages, and artesanal syrup for to put in a bag of fruits that all childrens believed it a feast for the senses.

I know this because my block in the childhood had the bakers store, and the tortilla store, and the bicycle store, and but the favorite of all the childrens was the local store for candies, snacks, fruits, cold beverages, and artesanal syrup for to put in a bag of fruits that all childrens believed it a feast for the senses.

I know this because my block in the childchildhood neighborhood had thea bakers store, and they, a tortilla store, and thea bicycle store,; and the favorite of all the childrens was the local store forwhere they could buy candies, snacks, fruits, cold beverages, and arteisanal syrup for to put in a bag of fruits that all. All of the childrens believed it to be a feast for the senses.

All boys who had a life in the block, asks the mother of each for a coin of various denominations that can to be 1 cent, 5 cent, 10 cent, 25, cent, 50 cent, or 100 cent that we call with the name of the national flying bird that we call eagle and you have to not confusion with the eagle from the bigger country in the direction North in relation to the latitude of the block of my childhood.

All boys who had a life ilived on the block, asks the mother of each for a coin of various denominations that can to be 1 cent, 5 cent, 10 cent, 25, cent, 50 cent, or 100 cent that we call with the name of the national flying bird that we call eagle and you have to not confusion with the eagle from the bigger country in the direction North in relation to the latitude of the block of my childhood.

All boys who had a life in the block, asks the mother of eachEach boy on the block would ask his mother for a coin of various denominations that can to. It could be 1 cent, 5 cents, 10 cents, 25, cent, 50 cents, or 100 cent that we call withs. We would call the coins by the name of theour national flying bird, that we call eagle and you have toe eagle. It was important not to confusione it with the eagle from the bigger country into the direction North in relation to the latitude of the block of my childhoodnorth.

If the mother of the kid gives the coin of the 100, that is like giving naturals powers because you now have the power of shopping almost ten times more than the childrens who only receive the coin of 10 cents.

If theone's mother of the kid gives the coin of the 100gave him a 100 cent coin, that iwas like giving naturalssuper powers, because you now have the power of shoppingthat person would then have almost ten times more shopping power than the childrens who only receive the coin ofd 10 cent coins.

I am always in the center.

I amwas always in the center.

My fathers were very very very cool all times because they put in my hand a coin of 50 scents and when I put in my pocket it feels like it has much power of purchase.

My fathers were very very very cool all timesalways extremely cool because they put in my hand a coin of 50 scents and when I put in my pocket it feels like it has much power of purchase.

My fathers wereas very, very very cool all timescool because they put in my hand a coin of would give me a 50 scents and w coin. When I put in my pocket, it feelslt like it has much power of purchaseI could buy anything.

(all candies and fruits and snacks were as cheap as only 3 cents a pop) so 50 was like millionaire in the vision of a children who only knows coins for after school.

(aAll candies and, fruits, and snacks were as cheap as only 3 cents a pop), so 50 was like being a millionaire in the visioneyes of a children who only knowsew coins for usage after school.

The local store in the center of my story was legends most important because of the lady who owners the store.

The local store in the center of my story was legendsary most importantly because of the lady who owners the stored it.

She was loving all the time, to assist, to prepare the syrups, to incorporate the promotions of the sodas with the caps of the bottles, or the stickers of soccer football during the mundials cups, and i remember specials the Italy 90 for the pet that mundial was a boy of squares with the head of a soccer football ball.

She was loving all the time, to assist, to and helped with prepareing the syrups, to incorporate the promotions of the and promoting sodas with thbottle caps, of the bottles, or the stickers of soccer footballr with soccer stickers during the mundials cWorld Cups, and i remember specials the Italy 90 for the pet that mundialI especially remember the mascot for the 1990 Italy World Cup, which was a boy of squares with the head of a soccer football ball.

Ciao is the name, that is translates to good byes.

"Ciao is the name, that is", which translates to "good byes", was his name.

So this lady never lost a chance to make your days specials, and when the day of the summer were with us, she makes delicious icecreams that she puts in bags, and you will suck the bag as you runs playing soccer football, or a game of tags.

So, this lady never lost a chance to make your days specials, and when the day of the summer were with us, sheit was summer, she would makes delicious ice creams that she puts in bags, and you will suck the bag as you rthat one could suck on as they ran arounsd playing soccer football, or a game of tags.

She has a name special for each of the childrens like cauliflower head for the kids with curlys in his hair who has a patch of white hair on the top.

She hasd a name special for each of the childrens, like "cauliflower head" for the kids with curlys in his hair who has a patch of hair with a white hairpatch on the top.

She calls Hammock face the kid that laughters with the mouth open and moves in motions to left and right.

She calls Hammock faced the kid that laughtersed with thehis mouth open and moves in motions toswinging left andto right. "hammock face."

She calls mama mia the girl that has a mother that hears ABBA all days, and you can listen from the outside of her house.

She calls mama mia the girl that has a mother that hearsed the girl whose mother listen to ABBA all days, and you can listento the point that you could hear it from the outside of her house., "mamma mia."

She calls water bottle the kid that always carries a bottle old of purification water that out of the blue he takes with him every place he goes and she calls this boy water bottle.

She calls water bottled the kid thatwho always carriesd a bottle old off old purificationed water that out of the blue he takes with him every place he goes and she calls this boy "water bottle".

This was my favorite special name, because in my idiom this translations to little bottle of little water, and is funny.

This was my favorite special nickname, because in my idiomlanguage this translationes to "little bottle of little water", and it is funny.

She was a stapler in my town, she was an institute in my neighbors, she was a wisdom in my block.

She was a stapler in my town, she was an institute in my neighbors, she was ahood, a figure of wisdom ion my block.

She is very religions and you can see all around from the second you enters by the doors in all the walls.

She iwas very religionsus, and you canould see it all around you on the walls from the second you enters byed the doors in all the walls.

She has the pictures of all saints she believes, and she never eliminates, only contributions more to the posters on the walls.

She has thed pictures of all saints she believesd in, and she never eliminates, only contributions more to thremoved any, only added more posters on the walls.

Special is when during the week holly, when all the roads are covered in carpets of shavings, and fruits the contain as many colors of two times the colors of the rainbow, and she obtains one more poster for the wall on the store, and it looks fantastic now because it all does many sense.

Special is whenIt was special during the week hollyHoly Week, when all the roads awere covered in carpets of shavings, and fruits the contain as many colors of two times the colors of the rainbow, and she obtainswere twice as colorful as the rainbow. She would get one more poster for the wall on the store wall, and it looksed fantastic now because it all does many sense.

All looks like collaging together, and give mystical emotion to the room with the bars and the snacks, and ever the bell sounds more ceremony now after the addition of the new poster.

All looks like collaging together, and giveIt all seemed to blend together, and it gave a sense of mystical emotion to the room with the bars and the snacks, and evern the bell soundsed more ceremony nowious after the addition of the new poster.

The break through comes when she begins to serve lunches before and after the noon, and all now can come in and sit to eat.

The break through coames when she beginsan to serve lunches before and after the noon, and all now cancould come in and sit to eat.

The smells are covering all the air and no nose is abandoned or ignored because you can resist, you cannot resist the fragance of the chickens boiling in the water, and the vegetables cooking in the kitchen, and the tortillas burning on top of the giant disk where to make tortillas of corn, and i'm telling you, it is precious to see this sight, because all childrens who are now adults and remember this store can agreement with me in so that she transported you to other universe with the aromas she covers the store now, specially in the days of the weekend because she cooks cakes of figs that are covering with orchata syrup, which is a syrup that she makes with the tradition drink of my town, and all persons from other blocks will come walking like zombies attracting by the frangance of the figs, and it flavors, o my goodness, like nothing is there outside.

The smells are covering allfilled the air, and no nose is abandoned or ignorwas missed, because you can resist, you cannotnobody could resist the fragrance of the chickens boiling in the water, and, the vegetables cooking in the kitchen, and the tortillas burning on top of the giant disk where to make tortillas of corn, and ion which they were made. I'm telling you, it iwas precious to see this sight, because all the childrens who are now adults and remember this store can agreement with me in so that she transported you to another universe with the aromas she coversscents of the store now, , and especially in the days ofon the weekends, because she cooks cakes of figs that aremade fig cakes coveringed with orchata syrup, which is a syrup that she makesde with the traditional drink of my town, and all p. Eversyonse from other blocks willould come walking like zombies attracting by the frangrance of the figs, and its flavors, o my goodness, like nothing is there outsid were like nothing else.

Her name was Abuela Mirna, and the store has a big letter yellow and blue with also the name of the store: TIENDA MIRNA, and no person can forget this letter even it is no there no more, because the store is no exist in this place after Abuela Mirna has to go for another place to live.

Her name was Abuela Mirna, and the store has a big letter yellow and blue with also the name of the store: TIENDA MIRNA, and no personletters with its name: TIENDA MIRNA. Nobody can forget thisose letter even it is nothough they are no molonger there, because the store is nostopped exist in this placeg after Abuela Mirna has to go for another place to livemoved away.

She neves says the godbyes to no person, all you know she has the store open one day and cooks delicios food and give warm welcomes to the childrens and the persons that visit, and you close your eyes and when open, she is away, and the edifice is now a different color and the big letter with the name up the door of the store is in other place, and the door never opens again.

She nevesr says theid goodbyes to no person, all you knowanyone. All we know is that she hasd the store open one day and cooksed delicious food and give warm welcomes to the childrens and othe persons thatr visit,ors; and then you close your eyes, and when opeyou open them again, she is awaygone, and the edificebuilding is now a different color and the big letters with the name upabove the door of the store is in other placare gone, and the door never opens again.

All the childrens that plays their in the years before Italy ninety who are now adults remember from affections the sentiments in their hearts that born from the permanence in this place enjoying the snacks, and the figs, and the syrups with the fruits.

All the childrens that playsed theire in the years before Italy ninetythe 1990 Italy World Cup and who are now adults remember from affections the sentiments in their hearts that born from the permanence in this placately the memories born in their hearts while enjoying the snacks, and the figs, and the syrups with the fruits.

This is before the inventions of the internet so there are no pictures or films but you must to believe mine words, it is a lovely place that lives in the memory of the local children who lives there in the past.

This iwas before the inventions of the internet so there are no pictures or films of this place, but you must to believe miney words, it i. It was a lovely place that lives in the memoryies of the local children who livesd there in the past.

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