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basiliomagno

Aug. 14, 2021

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The Hard Task of Video Editing

A good video looks natural and smooth, the images come one after another with ease. However, achieving that is quite difficult. I have been trying to edit a video for a friend. And, besides the complex task of choosing an editor, the actual editing process is the real deal. I know the order in which I arrange the images isn't working, but I don't know why it is so.

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The Hard Task of Video Editing

A good video looks natural and smooth, theand in it, images come one after another with easeeasily.

Run-on sentences occur when two sentences are written together without a period or conjunction. To fix this, you can end the sentence or add a conjunction and a comma if necessary. In English, it is not necessary to use an article adjective on plural nouns, so you can use the word "images" by itself. The phrase "with ease" describes how the images come after one another so it can be replaced by the adverb "easily" since it means the same. A tip for efficient English writing is to use the most precise and sharp words you can find.

And, bBesides the complex task of choosing an editor, the actual editing process is the real deal.

The word "and" is not necessary.

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Your English is close to perfect! Just remember the grammar rules since it is always the little things we forget the most. Your vocabulary is outstanding.

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basiliomagno

Aug. 14, 2021

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Thank you! Your corrections help me a lot

The Hard Task of Video Editing

A good video looks natural and smooth, the images come one after another with ease.

A good video looks natural and smooth, theand in it, images come one after another with easeeasily.

However, achieving that is quite difficult.

I have been trying to edit a video for a friend.

And, besides the complex task of choosing an editor, the actual editing process is the real deal.

And, bBesides the complex task of choosing an editor, the actual editing process is the real deal.

I know the order in which I arrange the images isn't working, but I don't know why it is so.

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