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Dec. 21, 2021

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The Evil Seed

There is a science fiction movie named "Voyagers" that talks about this topic. Well, not, but it is look like. The topic that talk is about wickedess. Is does the evil inherent to human being or the man is good for nature? Is a good question. Usually the truth is not white or black, is in a grey tone.
The genetic could bring the evil seed? Could be, but in my opinion, a traumatic and hard life could also affect, to worse, in the normal behavior of a human being.

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The Evil Seed

There is a science fiction movie named "Voyagers" that talks aboutbrings up this topic.

When you say a piece of writing is dealing with a topic, you could say many things, e.g: "brings up", "deals with", "handles the topic of ...", "discusses ..." Its really your choice.

Well, not, but it is look like exactly this, but something similar.

The topic that talk is aboutheme brought up is wickedess.

Usually if a work is using a topic as a side-point, and not a main point (like for example, this novel is about a story, with wickedness only being discussed as one of many themes), then we usually call those "themes". Like "This novel deals with the theme of wickedness", "the theme of human nature", etc.

Is does the evil inherent to human beings or theis man is good forby nature?

It's a good question.

Usually the truth is not white or black, isbut somewhere in athe grey tone.

"but in a grey area" can also work.

ThePerhaps genetics could bring the evil seedan act as a seed of evil?

I changed your sentence to what I found more natural, but it doesn't have to be so, you could just change it to "Perhaps genetics can bring out this "evil seed"?" (I said "this "evil seed"" because you haven't brought up the image of an "evil seed" earlier, so you're introducing it here. "the evil seed" is also not a common expression in English, as far as I know.

Could be, but in my opinion, a traumatic and hard life could also affect, to worse, in the normal behavior of a human being to a worse degree.

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Well-written! Good effort. :)

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Ducky

Dec. 22, 2021

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Thanks a lot for your feedbacks.

The Evil Seed

There is a science fiction movie named "Voyagers" that talks about this topic.

There is a science fiction movie named "Voyagers" that talks aboutbrings up this topic.

Well, not, but it is look like.

Well, not, but it is look like exactly this, but something similar.

The topic that talk is about wickedess.

The topic that talk is aboutheme brought up is wickedess.

Is does the evil inherent to human being or the man is good for nature?

Is does the evil inherent to human beings or theis man is good forby nature?

Is a good question.

It's a good question.

Usually the truth is not white or black, is in a grey tone.

Usually the truth is not white or black, isbut somewhere in athe grey tone.

The genetic could bring the evil seed?

ThePerhaps genetics could bring the evil seedan act as a seed of evil?

Could be, but in my opinion, a traumatic and hard life could also affect, to worse, in the normal behavior of a human being.

Could be, but in my opinion, a traumatic and hard life could also affect, to worse, in the normal behavior of a human being to a worse degree.

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