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This story is about when I learned about tea manner for the first time.

My friend's mother was a master of the tea manner.

When my friend and I visited his house, she used to treat green tea.

One day, she suggested us to learn about the tea manner.

The tea, which she gave us were excellent and full aroma, so we had a curious about the tea manner as well.

When I drink tea, I should use four fingers of my right hand for holding a next of the cup.

I should use three fingers of my left hand for supporting a bottom of the cup.

I should not drink tea at a time.

Before drinking tea, I smell the tea.

When drinking it, I taste the tea, which has five flavors.

After swallowing it, I can taste the remaining flavor in my mouth.

This experience was really impressed for me, so I can remind the scene and the feeling.

If you have a chance, I recommend the tea manner.

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Before drinking tea, I smell the tea.

When drinking it, I taste the tea, which has five flavors.

After swallowing it, I can taste the remaining flavor in my mouth.

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This story is about when I learned about tea manner for the first time.


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My friend's mother was a master of the tea manner.


My friend's mother was a master of the tea manneretiquette of pouring tea. My friend's mother was a master of the etiquette of pouring tea.

When my friend and I visited his house, she used to treat green tea.


When my friend and I visited his house, she used to treatgive us green tea. When my friend and I visited his house, she used to give us green tea.

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One day, she suggested us to learn about the tea manner.


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The tea, which she gave us were excellent and full aroma, so we had a curious about the tea manner as well.


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When I drink tea, I should use four fingers of my right hand for holding a next of the cup.


When I drink tea, I should use four fingers of my right hand forto holding a next of the cup. When I drink tea, I should use four fingers of my right hand to hold the cup.

When Iyou drink tea, I during tea manner, you should use four fingers of myour right hand forto holding a next the side of the cup. When you drink tea during tea manner, you should use four fingers of your right hand to hold the side of the cup.

I changed the pronoun here from "I" to "you", because even though this is your story, you are essentially instructing someone on how they would hold a cup during tea manner.

When I drink tea, I should use four fingers of my right hand forto holding a next of the cup. When I drink tea, I should use four fingers of my right hand to hold the cup.

I should use three fingers of my left hand for supporting a bottom of the cup.


I should use three fingers of my left hand forto supporting a the bottom of the cup. I should use three fingers of my left hand to support the bottom of the cup.

IYou should use three fingers of myour left hand forto supporting a the bottom of the cup. You should use three fingers of your left hand to support the bottom of the cup.

I should use three fingers of my left hand forto supporting a the bottom of the cup. I should use three fingers of my left hand to support the bottom of the cup.

I should not drink tea at a time.


I should not drink all tea at a timonce. I should not drink all tea at once.

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I am not completely sure what you mean by "at a time".

I should not drink tea at a time.all the tea at once. (?) I should not drink all the tea at once. (?)

This sentence is a little unclear, so I took a guess. :)

Before drinking tea, I smell the tea.


Before drinking tea, I should smell the tea. Before drinking tea, I should smell the tea.

Before drinking the tea at my friend's housea, I smell the teaed it. Before drinking the tea at my friend's house, I smelled it.

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When drinking it, I taste the tea, which has five flavors.


When drinking it, I tasteshould savour the tea, which has five flavors. When drinking it, I should savour the tea, which has five flavors.

Whilen drinking it, I could taste the tea, which has fivefive different flavors. While drinking it, I could taste five different flavors.

Shortened the sentence to sound more natural. You could also add a colon (:) and mention some of the flavors you remember. For example, "I tasted many flavors: turmeric, orange, mint, and rose."

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After swallowing it, I can taste the remaining flavor in my mouth.


After swallowing it, I canould taste the remaining flavor in my mouth. After swallowing it, I could taste the remaining flavor in my mouth.

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This experience was really impressed for me, so I can remind the scene and the feeling.


This experience was really impressived for me, soand I can remindstill remember the scene and the my feeling.s. This experience was really impressive for me, and I can still remember the scene and the my feelings.

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This experience was really left an impressed forion on me, so I can remindvividly remember the scene and the feeling. This experience really left an impression on me, so I vividly remember the scene and the feeling.

If you have a chance, I recommend the tea manner.


If you have a chance, I highly recommend the tea manneretiquette of drinking tea. If you have a chance, I highly recommend the etiquette of drinking tea.

If you have a chance, I recommend trying the tea manner. If you have a chance, I recommend trying the tea manner.

If you (ever) have a chance, I recommend trying the tea manner. If you (ever) have a chance, I recommend trying the tea manner.

Or: If you (ever) get a chance, I recommend trying the tea manner.

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