Jan. 20, 2022
Talking about Cafe
Today, I got the third day of my over the phone English class.
In the class, I talked about cafe which is not easy to describe.
Because I am not familiar with coffee houses, but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, and the questions were about coffee houses.
With my lack experiences, it wasn't easy to answer them.
Instead, I tried to answer about tea houses because I prefer to drink tea.
I talked about Korea traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea.
Moreover, I told when I had learned about tea manner for the first time.
It had been a heartwarming moment for me.
After the class, I made up my mind to practice this topic more.
Talking about a Cafe
Today, I gotcompleted the third day of my over the phone English class.
In the class, I talked about a cafe, which is not easy to describe.
Or: During class, I talked about a cafe, which is not easy to describe.
Because I am not familiar with coffee houses, but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffeeMost of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, but I am not familiar with coffee houses, and the questions were about coffee houses.
With my lack experiences, it wasn't easy to answer them.
Instead, I tried to answer about tea houses because I prefer to drink tea.
I talked about Korean traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea.
Or: I talked about Korea's traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea.
Moreover, I toldalked about when I had learned about tea manner for the first time.
It had been a heartwarming moment for me.
After the class, I made up my mind to practice this topic more.
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Yay, great work! :)
Jan. 21, 2022
Thank you so much.
Talking about Cafes
Today, I gothad the third day of my over the phone English class.
In the class, I talked about cafes which isare not easy to describe.
Or "a cafe".
Because I am not familiar with coffee houses, but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, and the questions were about coffee houses.
I'm a bit confused. I guess this "because" gives a reason why cafes are difficult to describe, but it seems like you can descibe cafes, and are less familiar with coffee houses.
With my lack of experiences, it wasn't easy to answer them.
Instead, I tried to answer about tea houses because I prefer to drink tea.
I talked about Korean traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea.
Moreover, I told them when I had learned about tea manners for the first time.
or "the tutor".
It had been a heartwarming moment for me.
After the class, I made up my mind to practice this topic more.
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I've never had Korean traditional tea, but it sounds interesting. Thank you for sharing!
Jan. 20, 2022
Thank you so much.
Talking about Cafe
Today, I gotfinished the third day of my over the phone English class on the phone.
In theDuring class, I talked about cafes, which isare not easy to describe.
I changed it from "cafe" to "cafes" since in this sentence, you are talking about "cafes" as a concept, not a specific cafe that you visited/saw/etc.
BecauseMost of the questions were about coffee houses (a topic that I am unot familiar with coffee houses), but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, and the questions were about coffee houses.
I re-worded the sentence to sound more natural.
With my lack experienBecause I don't have much experience with these places, it wasn't easy to answer them questions.
Instead, I tried to answer about tea houses because I prefer to drink tea.
I talked about Korea traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea.
Moreover, I told when I had learned about tea manners for the first time.
It had been a heartwarming moment for me.
After the class, I made up my mind to practice this topic more.
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잘 했습니다! 저도 커피보다 차는 더 좋아해요. This was a very interesting post! Maybe you could write a journal about the first time you went to a tea house?
Jan. 20, 2022
Of course. I will write about the experience. Thank you!
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In the class, I talked about cafe which is not easy to describe. In the class, I talked about cafes which Or "a cafe".
I changed it from "cafe" to "cafes" since in this sentence, you are talking about "cafes" as a concept, not a specific cafe that you visited/saw/etc.
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Because I am not familiar about coffee houses, but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, and the questions were about coffee houses. |
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With my lack experiences, it wasn't easy to answer them. With my lack of experience
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Instead, I tried to answer about tea houses because I prefer to drink tea. |
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I talked about Korea traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea. I talked about Korean traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea. I talked about Korean traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea. Or: I talked about Korea's traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea.
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Moreover, I told when I had learned about tea manner for the first time. Moreover, I told them when I had learned about tea manners for the first time. or "the tutor".
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It had been a heartwarming moment for me. |
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After the class, I made up my mind to practice this topic more. |
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Because I am not familiar with coffee houses, but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, and the questions were about coffee houses. Because I am not familiar with coffee houses, but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, and the questions were about coffee houses. I'm a bit confused. I guess this "because" gives a reason why cafes are difficult to describe, but it seems like you can descibe cafes, and are less familiar with coffee houses.
I re-worded the sentence to sound more natural.
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