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Jan. 20, 2022

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Talking about Cafe

Today, I got the third day of my over the phone English class.

In the class, I talked about cafe which is not easy to describe.

Because I am not familiar with coffee houses, but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, and the questions were about coffee houses.

With my lack experiences, it wasn't easy to answer them.

Instead, I tried to answer about tea houses because I prefer to drink tea.

I talked about Korea traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea.

Moreover, I told when I had learned about tea manner for the first time.

It had been a heartwarming moment for me.

After the class, I made up my mind to practice this topic more.

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Instead, I tried to answer about tea houses because I prefer to drink tea.

It had been a heartwarming moment for me.

After the class, I made up my mind to practice this topic more.

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Jan. 21, 2022

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Talking about Cafe

Instead, I tried to answer about tea houses because I prefer to drink tea.

I talked about Korea traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea.

It had been a heartwarming moment for me.

After the class, I made up my mind to practice this topic more.

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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 20, 2022

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Instead, I tried to answer about tea houses because I prefer to drink tea.

It had been a heartwarming moment for me.

After the class, I made up my mind to practice this topic more.

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SummerTeaWater

Jan. 20, 2022

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Talking about Cafe


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In the class, I talked about cafe which is not easy to describe.


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I changed it from "cafe" to "cafes" since in this sentence, you are talking about "cafes" as a concept, not a specific cafe that you visited/saw/etc.

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Or: During class, I talked about a cafe, which is not easy to describe.

Because I am not familiar about coffee houses, but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, and the questions were about coffee houses.


With my lack experiences, it wasn't easy to answer them.


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With my lack experiences, it wasn't easy to answer them. With my lack experience, it wasn't easy to answer them.

Instead, I tried to answer about tea houses because I prefer to drink tea.


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I talked about Korea traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea.


I talked about Korean traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea. I talked about Korean traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea.

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I talked about Korean traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea. I talked about Korean traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea.

Or: I talked about Korea's traditional herbal teas such as corn silk tea and barley tea.

Moreover, I told when I had learned about tea manner for the first time.


Moreover, I told them when I had learned about tea manners for the first time. Moreover, I told them when I had learned about tea manners for the first time.

or "the tutor".

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Moreover, I toldalked about when I had learned about tea manner for the first time. Moreover, I talked about when I learned about tea manner for the first time.

It had been a heartwarming moment for me.


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After the class, I made up my mind to practice this topic more.


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Because I am not familiar with coffee houses, but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, and the questions were about coffee houses.


Because I am not familiar with coffee houses, but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, and the questions were about coffee houses. Because I am not familiar with coffee houses, but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, and the questions were about coffee houses.

I'm a bit confused. I guess this "because" gives a reason why cafes are difficult to describe, but it seems like you can descibe cafes, and are less familiar with coffee houses.

BecauseMost of the questions were about coffee houses (a topic that I am unot familiar with coffee houses), but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, and the questions were about coffee houses. Most of the questions were about coffee houses (a topic that I am unfamiliar with), but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffee.

I re-worded the sentence to sound more natural.

Because I am not familiar with coffee houses, but most of the cafes in Korea serve coffeeMost of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, but I am not familiar with coffee houses, and the questions were about coffee houses. Most of the cafes in Korea serve coffee, but I am not familiar with coffee houses, and the questions were about coffee houses.

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