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sho

July 26, 2022

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I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook! ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ
I want to speak like a native speaker!! Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?
You can change whatever you want!
It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!
I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang! ๐Ÿ™
Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.
I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ


A: It's cool and comfortable today.
How do you feel ?
B: Isn't it a bit cold?
A: Really?, Feels perfect to me.
B: If it were any colder, I wouldn't be able to get out of bed.
A: True. But I don't like hot weather. Do you prefer hot to cold?
B: Yes!
A: Omg. But there are definitely more people who like hot than people who like cold, right?
B: Yeah, I think so, but people I know, there are more people who say they like cold.
A: You have good friends.
B: Yeah, maybe, haha but you can't judge someone by whether they prefer hot or cold weather.
A: I can. Guys who like hot whether are bad. 'Cause cold areas have less crime. Maybe. Probably. Sigh... Wish I lived in a country that's cold all year round.
I am dreading the upcoming months and really want to run away.

Corrections

Talking 2

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: It's cool and comfortablenice out today.

US

HowWhat do you feel think?

US

B: Isn't it a bit cold?

A: Really?, Feels perfect to me.

B: If it were any colder, I wouldn't be able to get out of bed.

A: True.

But I don't like hot weather.

Do you prefer hot to cold?

B: Yes!

A: Omg.

But there are definitely more people who like hot than people who likemore than cold, right?

This sounds more natural in the US.

B: Yeah, I think so, but people I know, there are more people who say they like coldthe cold better.

This isn't really grammatically correct but we say it a lot in the US.

A: You have good friends.

B: Yeah, maybe, haha, but you can't judge someone by whether they preferlike hot or cold weather.

A: I can.

Guys who like hot whether are bad.

'Cause cold areas have less crime.

Maybe.

Probably.

Sigh...

Wish I lived in a country that's cold all year round.

I am dreading the upcoming months and really want to run away.

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sho

July 30, 2022

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A: Really?, Feels perfect to me.

B: If it were any colder, I wouldn't behave been able to get out of bed.

Do you prefer hot tover cold?

B: Yeah, I think so, but of the people I know, there are more people who say they like cold.

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sho

July 27, 2022

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Thank you so much!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

Talk 2

Talking 2

I want to speak English naturally, not like a textbook!

๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ

I want to speak like a native speaker!!

Seriously!!๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ™‡โ€โ™‚๏ธ๐Ÿ”ฅ๐Ÿ”ฅ

Would you please help me by correcting anything that's wrong or sounds unnatural in these sentences?

You can change whatever you want!

It's alright if you change an entire sentence!!

I'd like to learn some common phrases and slang!

๐Ÿ™

Also, I'd like to hear your advice on how to have conversations with English speakers.

I'm looking forward to your constructive criticism.โœ๏ธ

A: It's cool and comfortable today.

A: It's cool and comfortablenice out today.

How do you feel ?

HowWhat do you feel think?

B: Isn't it a bit cold?

A: Really?, Feels perfect to me.

A: Really?, Feels perfect to me.

A: Really?, Feels perfect to me.

B: If it were any colder, I wouldn't be able to get out of bed.

B: If it were any colder, I wouldn't behave been able to get out of bed.

A: True.

But I don't like hot weather.

Do you prefer hot to cold?

Do you prefer hot tover cold?

B: Yes!

A: Omg.

But there are definitely more people who like hot than people who like cold, right?

But there are definitely more people who like hot than people who likemore than cold, right?

B: Yeah, I think so, but people I know, there are more people who say they like cold.

B: Yeah, I think so, but of the people I know, there are more people who say they like cold.

B: Yeah, I think so, but people I know, there are more people who say they like coldthe cold better.

A: You have good friends.

B: Yeah, maybe, haha but you can't judge someone by whether they prefer hot or cold weather.

B: Yeah, maybe, haha, but you can't judge someone by whether they preferlike hot or cold weather.

A: I can.

Guys who like hot whether are bad.

'Cause cold areas have less crime.

Maybe.

Probably.

Sigh...

Wish I lived in a country that's cold all year round.

I am dreading the upcoming months and really want to run away.

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