Oct. 24, 2021
I went to bed very early last night, as a result, I woke up early as well. I had breakfast, read some information of international students, washed sheets. The neighbor became noisy again. I strongly played the drums and felt relieved. After lunch, I rode my bike to Auntie De.
Though it was sunny, it was a little cold. It was so comfortable. The main road's construction was nearly finished, therefor, it was convinient a lot.
I chatted with Auntie De and Auntie Xian, I told them the incident about my mom. They blamed me that it was wrong to stop the neighbor. I told them that it was illegal of them to be too noisy, the police wouldn't deal with things like this, though. I still had the right to interfere, and at least I tried. I had knew what the workers like, then I would hnow how to get with them next.
At three p.m, they went to work separately. I was studying German under the tree, and took care of the little geese from time to time. What I needed to do was to keep them away from the chickens and dogs. It was quite relaxing. I went to the field at dusk. The rice was going to be havested. It was so gold under the sunshine.
After having dinner with Auntie Xian, I rode back to home and went to work.
I had a good time today.
Sunday
I went to bed very early last night, a. As a result, I woke up early as well.
I had breakfast, read some information of international students,stuff about studying abroad, and washed my sheets.
I assume that's what you mean, as opposed to "news about international students," because of your plans.
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I strongly played the drums intensely and felt relieved.
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Though it was sunny, it was a little cold.
It was sovery comfortable.
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I chatted with Auntie De and Auntie Xian, and I told them about the incident aboutwith my mom.
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意思不清楚
At three p.m., theymy Aunties each went to work separately.
I was studyingstudied German under thea tree, and took care of the little geese from time to time.
WhatAll I needed to do was to keep them away from the chickens and dogs.
It was quite relaxing.
I went to the field at dusk.
The rice was going to be harvested soon.
It was so gold underlooked golden in the sunshine.
After having dinner with Auntie Xian, I rode back to home and went to work.
I had a good time today.
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Glad you had a good day! Sorry for the late correction on this one
I went to bed very early last night, and as a result, I woke up early as well.
You need a conjunction to link the two parts of this sentence, since both independent clauses.
I had breakfast, read some information ofabout international students, washed sheets.
The neighbor becamewas noisy again.
I strongly played the drums vigorously and felt relieved.
After lunch, I rode my bike to Auntie De's house.
In English, a person is not typically a destination, so saying that you are riding your bike to Auntie De, instead of where Auntie De is, sounds strange.
The main road's construction was nearly finished, therefor,so it was more convienient a lotto travel on.
Side note, the correct spelling of "therefor" is therefore.
I chatted with Auntie De and Auntie Xian, and I told them the incident about my mom.
Once again, you need a conjunction. Both parts of this sentence are independent clauses.
They blametold me that it was wrong to stop the neighbor.
I told them that it was illegal of them to be too noisy, and the police wouldn't deal with things like this, though.
I had knew what the workers liked, then I would hknow how to get with them next.
The meaning of this sentence is unclear; not sure what you are trying to say about the workers.
What I needed to do was to keep them away from the chickens and dogs.
The rice was going to be harvested.
It was so golden under the sunshine.
Feedback
Very nice! Understandable for the most part. It sounds like you had a lovely day!
Sunday |
I went to bed very early last night, as a result, I woke up early as well. I went to bed very early last night, and as a result, I woke up early as well. You need a conjunction to link the two parts of this sentence, since both independent clauses.
I went to bed very early last night |
I had breakfast, read some information of international students, washed sheets. I had breakfast, read some information I had breakfast, read some I assume that's what you mean, as opposed to "news about international students," because of your plans.
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The neighbor became noisy again. The neighbor The construction crew at the neighbor |
I strongly played the drums and felt relieved. I I |
After lunch, I rode my bike to Auntie De. After lunch, I rode my bike to Auntie De's house. In English, a person is not typically a destination, so saying that you are riding your bike to Auntie De, instead of where Auntie De is, sounds strange.
After lunch, I rode my bike to Auntie De's. |
Though it was sunny, it was a little cold. |
It was so comfortable. It was |
The main road's construction was nearly finished, therefor, it was convinient a lot. The main road's construction was nearly finished, Side note, the correct spelling of "therefor" is therefore.
The |
I chatted with Auntie De and Auntie Xian, I told them the incident about my mom. I chatted with Auntie De and Auntie Xian, and I told them the incident about my mom. Once again, you need a conjunction. Both parts of this sentence are independent clauses.
I chatted with Auntie De and Auntie Xian, and I told them about the incident |
They blamed me that it was wrong to stop the neighbor. They They blamed me, and said that it was wrong to stop the neighbor's construction crew. |
I told them that it was illegal of them to be too noisy, the police wouldn't deal with things like this, though. I told them that it was illegal of them to be too noisy I told them that it was illegal |
I still had the right to interfere, and at least I tried. I |
I had knew what the workers like, then I would hnow how to get with them next. I The meaning of this sentence is unclear; not sure what you are trying to say about the workers.
I 意思不清楚
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At three p.m, they went to work separately. At three p.m., |
I was studying German under the tree, and took care of the little geese from time to time. I |
What I needed to do was to keep them away from the chickens and dogs.
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It was quite relaxing. |
I went to the field at dusk. |
The rice was going to be havested. The rice was going to be harvested. The rice was going to be harvested soon. |
It was so gold under the sunshine. It was It |
After having dinner with Auntie Xian, I rode back to home and went to work. |
I had a good time today. |
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