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daiki

Aug. 15, 2021

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Summer vacation

I went to the beach and had a barbecue with my friends yesterday. It was sunny and too hot, so it's a perfect day for bathing and barbecuing. I drunk alcohol, it's better than drinking indoors. Why is alcohol more delicious when you drink outsides? I guess the blue sky and the ocean wind made beverages tastier.
I had a good time with my friends, so I made wonderful summer memories.


私は昨日友達とビーチに行きバーベキューをしました。天気は晴れでとても暑く、海水浴とバーベキューをするにはピッタリの日でした。私はお酒を飲んだのですが、屋内で飲むよりもおいしかったです。なぜお酒は外で飲むとよりおいしいのでしょうか?私は青空と海風が飲み物をよりおいしくしたのだと思います。私は友人たちと充実した時間を過ごし、素晴らしい夏の思い出が出来ました。

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Summer vacation

I went to the beach and had a barbecue with my friends yesterday.

It was sunny and toovery hot, so it' was a perfect day for bathing and barbecuing.

Be careful - "too hot" means "暑すぎる".

I (drunk alcohol, i/had a few drinks). It's better than drinking indoors.

Why is alcohol more delicious when you drink (it) outsides?

I guess the blue sky and the ocean wind madke beverages (tastier/taste better).

I had a good time with my friends, so I made some wonderful summer memories.

Summer vacation

I went to the beach and had a barbecue with my friends yesterday.

It was sunny and too hot, so it's a perfect day for bathing and barbecuing.

It was sunny and toovery hot, so it' was a perfect day for bathing and barbecuing.

I drunk alcohol, it's better than drinking indoors.

I (drunk alcohol, i/had a few drinks). It's better than drinking indoors.

Why is alcohol more delicious when you drink outsides?

Why is alcohol more delicious when you drink (it) outsides?

I guess the blue sky and the ocean wind made beverages tastier.

I guess the blue sky and the ocean wind madke beverages (tastier/taste better).

I had a good time with my friends, so I made wonderful summer memories.

I had a good time with my friends, so I made some wonderful summer memories.

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