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Aug. 15, 2021

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Summer vacation

I went to the beach and had a barbecue with my friends yesterday. It was sunny and too hot, so it's a perfect day for bathing and barbecuing. I drunk alcohol, it's better than drinking indoors. Why is alcohol more delicious when you drink outsides? I guess the blue sky and the ocean wind made beverages tastier.
I had a good time with my friends, so I made wonderful summer memories.


私は昨日友達とビーチに行きバーベキューをしました。天気は晴れでとても暑く、海水浴とバーベキューをするにはピッタリの日でした。私はお酒を飲んだのですが、屋内で飲むよりもおいしかったです。なぜお酒は外で飲むとよりおいしいのでしょうか?私は青空と海風が飲み物をよりおいしくしたのだと思います。私は友人たちと充実した時間を過ごし、素晴らしい夏の思い出が出来ました。

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Summer vacation

I went to the beach and had a barbecue with my friends yesterday.

Summer vacation


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I went to the beach and had a barbecue with my friends yesterday.


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It was sunny and too hot, so it's a perfect day for bathing and barbecuing.


It was sunny and toovery hot, so it' was a perfect day for bathing and barbecuing. It was sunny and very hot, so it was a perfect day for bathing and barbecuing.

Be careful - "too hot" means "暑すぎる".

I drunk alcohol, it's better than drinking indoors.


I (drunk alcohol, i/had a few drinks). It's better than drinking indoors. I (drunk alcohol/had a few drinks). It's better than drinking indoors.

Why is alcohol more delicious when you drink outsides?


Why is alcohol more delicious when you drink (it) outsides? Why is alcohol more delicious when you drink (it) outside?

I guess the blue sky and the ocean wind made beverages tastier.


I guess the blue sky and the ocean wind madke beverages (tastier/taste better). I guess the blue sky and the ocean wind make beverages (tastier/taste better).

I had a good time with my friends, so I made wonderful summer memories.


I had a good time with my friends, so I made some wonderful summer memories. I had a good time with my friends, so I made some wonderful summer memories.

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