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suziannabyun

July 26, 2022

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Summer has arrived

When the sunlight begins to feel too hot, when I can't spend a minute outside without wiping sweat or fanning my face, when sneakers become too uncomfortable to wear, I know summer has arrived.

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When the sunlight begins to feel too hot, when I can't spend a minute outside without wiping away sweat or fanning my face, and when my sneakers become too uncomfortable to wear, I know summer has arrived.

The "and" that I added is not necessary if you intended your entry to sound more poetic. I kind of like how it sounds without it.

Summer has arrived

When the sunlight begins to feel too hot, when I can't spend a minute outside without wiping sweat or fanning my face, when sneakers become too uncomfortable to wear, I know summer has arrived.

When the sunlight begins to feel too hot, when I can't spend a minute outside without wiping away sweat or fanning my face, and when my sneakers become too uncomfortable to wear, I know summer has arrived.

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