July 2, 2022
Summary of Chapter 2: Willy Wonka
In this second chapter one of the grandparents of Charlie is making stories about Willy Wonka and his sweets. Every evening, Charlie went to the grandparents bedroom to hear their stories. Granpa Joe, the oldest one, was telling him about the best inventions of Wonka. Granpa Joe got excited when he started telling to Charlie the different sweets, bubble gums and other inventions of Willy Wonka. One of the most incredible ones was that he made an ice cream that did not get runny for hours. What Granpa Joe was doing was standing out all that Willy Wonka had made that anyone else could not. As Grampa Joe made the stories the others grandparents agreed. Charlie was really eager about know more.
I am reading Charlie and The Chocolate Factory children book and making summaries to practice my reading, comprehension, and writing skills.
Summary of Chapter 2: Willy Wonka
In thise second chapter one of theCharlie's grandparents of Charlie is makis telling stories about Willy Wonka and his sweets.
"Charlie's grandparents" sounds a lot more natural in English than "the grandparents of Charlie."
Every evening, Charlie went to the grandparents' bedroom to hear their stories.
Grandpa Joe, the oldest one, was telling him about theWonka's best inventions of Wonka.
Grandpa Joe got excited when he started telling to Charlie about the different sweets, bubble gums and Willy Wonka's other inventions of Willy Wonka.
One of the most incredible ones was that he made an ice cream that did not get runny for hours.
"That he made" isn't needed, since it's already known that they are discussing Willy Wonka's inventions.
What Grandpa Joe was doing was standing outdescribing all that Willy Wonka had made that anyno one else could not.
"Standing out" is usually used to mean that something is very noticeable compared to other things surrounding it, or that are associated with it. For example:
"The tall student stood out among his shorter classmates."
"His idea stood out from the others because it was so creative."
As Gramndpa Joe madetold the stories, the others grandparents agreed.
Charlie was really eager abouto know more.
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Good job on your writing! I remember this story from when I was still in school! :D
July 2, 2022
What Grandpa Joe was doing was standing outdescribing all that Willy Wonka had made that anyno one else could not.
"Standing out" is usually used to mean that something is very noticeable compared to other things surrounding it, or that are associated with it. For example:
"The tall student stood out among his shorter classmates."
"His idea stood out from the others because it was so creative."
Ohh, get it. Thank you so much for the feedback.
Summary of Chapter 2: Willy Wonka
In thise second chapter, one of theCharlie's grandparents of Charlie is makingtells stories about Willy Wonka and his sweets.
Every evening, Charlie wentould go to thehis grandparent's bedroom to hear their stories.
Grandpa Joe, the oldest one, was tellingtold him about theWonka's best inventions of Wonka.
Grandpa Joe got excited when he started telling to Charlie theabout Wonka's different sweets, bubble gums, and other inventions of Willy Wonka.
One of thehis most incredible inventiones was that he made an ice cream that did not get runnymelt for hours.
What Grandpa Joe was doing was listanding out alleverything that Willy Wonka had made that anyno one else could not.
As Gramndpa Joe madetold the stories the others grandparents agreed.
Charlie was really eager abouto know more.
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Granpa Joe got excited when he started telling to Charlie the different sweets, bubble gums and other inventions of Willy Wonka. Grandpa Joe got excited when he started telling Grandpa Joe got excited when he started telling |
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One of the most incredible ones was that he made an ice cream that did not get runny for hours. One of the most incredible ones was "That he made" isn't needed, since it's already known that they are discussing Willy Wonka's inventions.
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What Granpa Joe was doing was standing out all that Willy Wonka had made that anyone else could not. What Grandpa Joe was doing was "Standing out" is usually used to mean that something is very noticeable compared to other things surrounding it, or that are associated with it. For example:
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