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Since I started studying in a specialized secondary school, I have stopped studying seriously as I did in middle school because I already got the opportunity to work for the government, so I didn't need to study that hard any more.

In the first year of the school, I studied the courses that I should have studied in high school, which include Chinese, Math, Physics, Chemistry, English and so on.

In the second year of the school, I studied the professional basic courses, such as Mechanical design, Metal technology, Mechanical drawing, and the tolerance and fittings.

In the third year of the school, I started the professional courses: Tractor and Automobile, Agricultural machinery and the management of it.

When I graduated from that school, I was assigned to work in the agricultural machinery bureau of a county at another prefecture level city.

Before I went to report for duty, I needed to finish some work, such as the transfer of my id information, the transfer of my personal grain and food oil supply information. The most important document was the dispatch certificate released by the agricultural department and the human resource department of my province.

At the end of August of that year, I brought the documents mentioned above and went to the first work unit of mine to start my career for my entire life.

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Study in theg at a Specialized Secondary School

S(Ever) since I started studying inat a specialized secondary school, I have stopped studying as seriously as I did in middle school. That is because I have already gotten the opportunity to work for the government, so I didon't need to study that hard any more.

Your original sentence is quite long, so I broke it in half.

In the first year of the school, I studied the courses that I should have studied in high school, which include Chinese, Mmath, Pphysics, Cchemistry, English and so on.

In the second year of the school, I studied the professional basic courses, such as Mmechanical design, Mmetal technology, Mmechanical drawing, and the tolerance and fittings.

In the third year of the school, I started the professional courses: Ttractor and Aautomobile, Aagricultural machinery and the management of it.

When I graduated from that school, I was assigned to work in the agricultural machinery bureau of a county at another prefecture level city.

Before I went to report for duty, I needed to finish some work, such as the transfer of my idID information, and the transfer of my personal grain and food oil supply information.

The most important document was the dispatch certificate released by the agricultural department and the human resource department of my province.

At the end of August of that year, I brought the documents mentioned above and went to the first work unit of mine to start mythe career for my entireI will have for the rest of my life.

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Jack

Nov. 24, 2022

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Study in theg at a Specialized Secondary School

Why is it At but not In?

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Nov. 24, 2022

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At the end of August of that year, I brought the documents mentioned above and went to the first work unit of mine to start mythe career for my entireI will have for the rest of my life.

Can I say “to start the career I would have ~” ? Because I am describing the things that are in the past.

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Jack

Nov. 24, 2022

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Thank you so much.

Study in the Specialized Secondary School

Study in theg at a Specialized Secondary School

Since I started studying in a specialized secondary school, I have stopped studying seriously as I did in middle school because I already got the opportunity to work for the government, so I didn't need to study that hard any more.

S(Ever) since I started studying inat a specialized secondary school, I have stopped studying as seriously as I did in middle school. That is because I have already gotten the opportunity to work for the government, so I didon't need to study that hard any more.

In the first year of the school, I studied the courses that I should have studied in high school, which include Chinese, Math, Physics, Chemistry, English and so on.

In the first year of the school, I studied the courses that I should have studied in high school, which include Chinese, Mmath, Pphysics, Cchemistry, English and so on.

In the second year of the school, I studied the professional basic courses, such as Mechanical design, Metal technology, Mechanical drawing, and the tolerance and fittings.

In the second year of the school, I studied the professional basic courses, such as Mmechanical design, Mmetal technology, Mmechanical drawing, and the tolerance and fittings.

In the third year of the school, I started the professional courses: Tractor and Automobile, Agricultural machinery and the management of it.

In the third year of the school, I started the professional courses: Ttractor and Aautomobile, Aagricultural machinery and the management of it.

When I graduated from that school, I was assigned to work in the agricultural machinery bureau of a county at another prefecture level city.

Before I went to report for duty, I needed to finish some work, such as the transfer of my id information, the transfer of my personal grain and food oil supply information.

Before I went to report for duty, I needed to finish some work, such as the transfer of my idID information, and the transfer of my personal grain and food oil supply information.

The most important document was the dispatch certificate released by the agricultural department and the human resource department of my province.

At the end of August of that year, I brought the documents mentioned above and went to the first work unit of mine to start my career for my entire life.

At the end of August of that year, I brought the documents mentioned above and went to the first work unit of mine to start mythe career for my entireI will have for the rest of my life.

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