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Teaching computers reasoning like human is a fantastic idea. This reminds me of a science anime about an AI Diva called Vivy, created for one daunting mission to make everyone happy by singing from heart. Because it is too vague for an AI to understand what is heart. It took her one hundred years to understand how to sing from heart. At the beginning of her 100-year journey, her songs were not with any emotion and cannot move the human audiences at all. After she struggled on the many dilemmas between human and AI, she eventually found the meaning of heart and saved the world. Although we cannot create such powerful AI nowadays, we still made a small progress on AI technology. Just like Vivy, she needs to find what was heart to her so that she could sing from heart. If an AI has same ability of reasoning like human, it may be possible for them to understand human’s behaviors and emotions. But I still a little worry about the plots in the science fictions like Asimov’s “I, robot” will come true. We still need to seriously consider the ethical problems of AI’s technology.

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Some feelings after reading the homework articlesarticles for homework

Teaching computers to reasoning like humans is a fantastic idea.

ThisIt reminds me of a science anime about an AI Diva called Vivy, created for onea daunting mission: to make everyone happy by singing from her heart.

Because itThe notion of 'heart' is too vague for an AI to understand what is heart.

IBecause of this, it took her one hundred years to understand how to sing from the heart.

At the beginning of her 100-year journey, her songs were not with anywithout emotion and canould not move the human audiences at all.

After she struggled onto reconcile the many dilemmafferences between human and AI, she eventually found the meaning of heart and saved the world.

Although we cannot create such powerful AIs nowadays, we have still made asome small progress on AI technology.

Just likeas Vivy, she needsed to find what was hdeart to her so that she could sing from the heart.,

If an AI has same ability of reasoning like human, it may be possible for themwith similar reasoning capacity to a human might be able to understand human’s behaviors and emotions.

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But I still worry a little worry about the plots in theat science fiction plots like Asimov’s “I, robot” will come trueo pass.

We must still need to seriously consider the ethical problems of AI’s technology.

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Ivy

Sept. 13, 2021

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But I still worry a little worry about the plots in theat science fiction plots like Asimov’s “I, robot” will come trueo pass.

Thank you a lot! But I am wondering why "come to pass" is better than "come true"?

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sivanc

Sept. 13, 2021

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Thank you a lot! But I am wondering why "come to pass" is better than "come true"?

'Come true' is more for like 'a dream/wish come true', 'come to pass' has more of a negative connotation.

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Ivy

Sept. 13, 2021

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'Come true' is more for like 'a dream/wish come true', 'come to pass' has more of a negative connotation.

Thank you a lot!

Some feelings after reading the homework articles

Some feelings after reading the homework articlesarticles for homework

Teaching computers reasoning like human is a fantastic idea.

Teaching computers to reasoning like humans is a fantastic idea.

This reminds me of a science anime about an AI Diva called Vivy, created for one daunting mission to make everyone happy by singing from heart.

ThisIt reminds me of a science anime about an AI Diva called Vivy, created for onea daunting mission: to make everyone happy by singing from her heart.

Because it is too vague for an AI to understand what is heart.

Because itThe notion of 'heart' is too vague for an AI to understand what is heart.

It took her one hundred years to understand how to sing from heart.

IBecause of this, it took her one hundred years to understand how to sing from the heart.

At the beginning of her 100-year journey, her songs were not with any emotion and cannot move the human audiences at all.

At the beginning of her 100-year journey, her songs were not with anywithout emotion and canould not move the human audiences at all.

After she struggled on the many dilemmas between human and AI, she eventually found the meaning of heart and saved the world.

After she struggled onto reconcile the many dilemmafferences between human and AI, she eventually found the meaning of heart and saved the world.

Although we cannot create such powerful AI nowadays, we still made a small progress on AI technology.

Although we cannot create such powerful AIs nowadays, we have still made asome small progress on AI technology.

Just like Vivy, she needs to find what was heart to her so that she could sing from heart.

Just likeas Vivy, she needsed to find what was hdeart to her so that she could sing from the heart.,

If an AI has same ability of reasoning like human, it may be possible for them to understand human’s behaviors and emotions.

If an AI has same ability of reasoning like human, it may be possible for themwith similar reasoning capacity to a human might be able to understand human’s behaviors and emotions.

But I still a little worry about the plots in the science fictions like Asimov’s “I, robot” will come true.

But I still worry a little worry about the plots in theat science fiction plots like Asimov’s “I, robot” will come trueo pass.

We still need to seriously consider the ethical problems of AI’s technology.

We must still need to seriously consider the ethical problems of AI’s technology.

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