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ipekkrm

Dec. 19, 2021

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Social factors of honesty or dishonesty

I don't think it is related to inherency but it is a matter of social circumstances of the society in which people are born to. Starting from the childhood, the social environment we live in can shape our core values, beliefs and subsequently, our behaviour. If a society's core values, where themes and effectiveness of the education about moral concepts are usually unadequate, are mostly based on social prejudice and hierarchy. When coupled by public trust issues, it is inevitable that most of the people feel insecure about their life circumstances, and thus, this may lead to trust issues between individuals of the society as well. Justice is also a crucial point in sustaining public trust among individuals. Personal dishonest or honesty is depend on whether public trust is ensured by the government that built up a strong judicial sytem or not. If most of the people feel insecure in a society due to economic, social, moral and ethnic factors, and usually don't trust the objectivity of judicial system, then it is reasonable that why people are often dishonest. In the opposite version, this time, the degree of honesty on a personal scale may be observed.

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I don't think it is related tosomething inherencyt but it israther a matter of social circumstances of the society in which people are born into.

Starting from the childhood, the social environment we live in can shape our core values, beliefs and subsequently, our behaviour.

If aA society's core values, where themes and effectiveness of the education about moral concepts are usually uinadequate, are mostly based on social prejudice and hierarchy.

This may be different from what you meant to say, but you didn't have a "then" statement after the if statement (you don't have to use then, but there was no follow up).

When coupled by public trust issues, it is inevitable that most of the people feel insecure about their life circumstances, and thus, this may lead to trust issues between individuals of the society as well.

Personal dishonesty or honesty is depends on whether public trust is ensured by whether the government that built up a strong judicial system or not.

It's usually more natural to write honesty and dishonesty in that order and not the other way around.

If most of the peoplepeople usually don't trust the objectivity of its judicial system and feel insecure in a society due to economic, social, moral and ethnic factors, and usually don't trust the objectivity of judicial system, then it is reasonable that whyfor people areto often be dishonest.

I switched the order to make the sentence easier to read and stop it from being a run on sentence.

In the opposite verssituation, (this time, thee/a high) degree of honesty on a personal scale may be observed.

There is almost always a degree of honesty in interaction regardless of the society, so I put high here to emphasize that it might be higher.

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ipekkrm

Dec. 22, 2021

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Thank you very much for your revision!

Social factors of honesty or dishonesty

I don't think it is related to inherency but it is a matter of social circumstances of the society in which people are born to.

I don't think it is related tosomething inherencyt but it israther a matter of social circumstances of the society in which people are born into.

Starting from the childhood, the social environment we live in can shape our core values, beliefs and subsequently, our behaviour.

Starting from the childhood, the social environment we live in can shape our core values, beliefs and subsequently, our behaviour.

If a society's core values, where themes and effectiveness of the education about moral concepts are usually unadequate, are mostly based on social prejudice and hierarchy.

If aA society's core values, where themes and effectiveness of the education about moral concepts are usually uinadequate, are mostly based on social prejudice and hierarchy.

When coupled by public trust issues, it is inevitable that most of the people feel insecure about their life circumstances, and thus, this may lead to trust issues between individuals of the society as well.

When coupled by public trust issues, it is inevitable that most of the people feel insecure about their life circumstances, and thus, this may lead to trust issues between individuals of the society as well.

Justice is also a crucial point in sustaining public trust among individuals.

Personal dishonest or honesty is depend on whether public trust is ensured by the government that built up a strong judicial sytem or not.

Personal dishonesty or honesty is depends on whether public trust is ensured by whether the government that built up a strong judicial system or not.

If most of the people feel insecure in a society due to economic, social, moral and ethnic factors, and usually don't trust the objectivity of judicial system, then it is reasonable that why people are often dishonest.

If most of the peoplepeople usually don't trust the objectivity of its judicial system and feel insecure in a society due to economic, social, moral and ethnic factors, and usually don't trust the objectivity of judicial system, then it is reasonable that whyfor people areto often be dishonest.

In the opposite version, this time, the degree of honesty on a personal scale may be observed.

In the opposite verssituation, (this time, thee/a high) degree of honesty on a personal scale may be observed.

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