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Skiing, Part 5

The continue of my story... so we were waiting for our dinner. It was a little table, where were served different foods not an appetizing way. It contained canned beans, green beans, cabbage salad with rice or pasta.
In any case nobody wanted a regular dose from this.
We noticed ( we were 18) it three waiters for all the guests, but neither of them came to us.
Suddenly came the waitress to pick up our order. We ordered the drinks first, what were beer, cola, and water. She wrote these and after that gave us a piece of paper which written on the optional meals.
One piece of paper for eighteen people. We ask for an english version, but she tried to say they have not. She hadn't got any voice. We told her, didn't get what can we eat because we didn't understand the italien language.
She took the paper back and wrote next to the write in english... We selected the meals that wanted to consume and she took away.
The whole prozess was so weird.
It took one hour so as to get our first course. It was not delicious, neither the second. The dessert was the most acceptable.
We were disappointed especially about the waiters. When we asked for something the waiter just shrugged.
We hoped the breakfast will be better, but it wasn't.
One of us, who signed the contract with the travel angency made a phone call on the second third day...

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Skiing, Part 5

Theo continue of my story.

sSo we were waiting for our dinner.

ItThere was a little table, where were servon which were presented different foods, not in an appetizing way.

It containincluded canned beans, green beans, and cabbage salad with rice or pasta.

Contained implies being inside something.

In any case nNobody wanted a regular dose from thisny of this food.

"Dose" is normally used for medicine.

We noticed ( wthat there were 18) itonly three waiters for all the guests, but neitherone of them came over to us. We were a group of 18.

I assume you mean you were a group of 18 people, not that you were 18 years old. "Neither" means two people, so can't be used for three waiters.

Suddenly came thea waitress to pick upcame to take our order.

"pick up" is for something physical (or can be used metaphorically). She is "a" waitress, unless you have referred to her before, in which case she is then "the" waitress.

We ordered theour drinks first, whatich were beer, cola, and water.

She wrote these and after thatdown and then gave us a piece of paper on which were written on the optionalchoice of meals.

We ask for an eEnglish version, but she tried to say they didn't have notone.

She hadn't got any voice.

This sentence needs to be better explained.

We told her, didn't get what can we eat we couldn't order because we didn't understand the italien languageItalian.

She took the paper back and wrote the English translation next to the write in englishms.

We selected the meals that we wanted to consume and she took the paper away.

The whole prozcess was so weird.

It took one hour so asjust to get our first course.

It was not delicious,tasty, and neither was the second course.

"delicious" is a strong word, it sounds like you mean it wasn't even nice.

The dessert was the most acceptable.

We were disappointed, especially about the waitersservice.

"the service" refers to how you were treated by the waiters.

When we asked for something the waiter just shrugged.

We hoped the breakfast willould be better, but it wasn't.

One of us, who had signed the contract with the travel angency, made a phone call on the second third day to complain.

Skiing, Part 5

This is the continueation of my story.

soSo, we were waiting for our dinner.

It was at a little table, where we were served different foods not an in a non-appetizing way.

It contained canned beans, green beans, and cabbage salad with rice or pasta.

In any case nobody wanted a regular dose from this.

I didn't understand what you were trying to say here.

We noticed ( we were 18) ita group of 18) there were three waiters for all the guests, but neitherone of them came to us.

Suddenly came, the waitress came to pick up our order.

We ordered the drinks first, w. What were ordered was beer, cola, and water.

She wrote these down, and after that gave us a piece of paper which written on thehad information about optional meals.

OThere was one piece of paper for eighteen people.

We asked for an eEnglish version, but she tried to say they did not have notone.

We told her, we didn't get what can weunderstand what we could eat because we didn't understand the iItaliean language.

She took the paper back and wrote next to the order to write in eEnglish.

We selected the meals that we wanted to consume and she took the papers away.

The whole prozcess was so weird.

It took one hour so as to get our first course.

It was not delicious, and neither was the second.

We were disappointed , especially about the waiters.

When we asked for something, the waiter just shrugged.

We hoped the breakfast willould be better, but it wasn't.

One of us, who signed the contract with the travel angency, made a phone call on the second third day.

In any case nobody wanted a regular dose from this.

In any case nobody wanted a regular dose from this.

In any case nNobody wanted a regular dose from thisny of this food.

Skiing, Part 5

The continue of my story.

Theo continue of my story.

This is the continueation of my story.

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so we were waiting for our dinner.

soSo, we were waiting for our dinner.

sSo we were waiting for our dinner.

It was a little table, where were served different foods not an appetizing way.

ItThere was a little table, where were servon which were presented different foods, not in an appetizing way.

It was at a little table, where we were served different foods not an in a non-appetizing way.

It contained canned beans, green beans, cabbage salad with rice or pasta.

It contained canned beans, green beans, and cabbage salad with rice or pasta.

It containincluded canned beans, green beans, and cabbage salad with rice or pasta.

We noticed ( we were 18) it three waiters for all the guests, but neither of them came to us.

We noticed ( we were 18) ita group of 18) there were three waiters for all the guests, but neitherone of them came to us.

We noticed ( wthat there were 18) itonly three waiters for all the guests, but neitherone of them came over to us. We were a group of 18.

Suddenly came the waitress to pick up our order.

Suddenly came, the waitress came to pick up our order.

Suddenly came thea waitress to pick upcame to take our order.

We ordered the drinks first, what were beer, cola, and water.

We ordered the drinks first, w. What were ordered was beer, cola, and water.

We ordered theour drinks first, whatich were beer, cola, and water.

She wrote these and after that gave us a piece of paper which written on the optional meals.

She wrote these down, and after that gave us a piece of paper which written on thehad information about optional meals.

She wrote these and after thatdown and then gave us a piece of paper on which were written on the optionalchoice of meals.

One piece of paper for eighteen people.

OThere was one piece of paper for eighteen people.

We ask for an english version, but she tried to say they have not.

We asked for an eEnglish version, but she tried to say they did not have notone.

We ask for an eEnglish version, but she tried to say they didn't have notone.

She hadn't got any voice.

She hadn't got any voice.

We told her, didn't get what can we eat because we didn't understand the italien language.

We told her, we didn't get what can weunderstand what we could eat because we didn't understand the iItaliean language.

We told her, didn't get what can we eat we couldn't order because we didn't understand the italien languageItalian.

She took the paper back and wrote next to the write in english.

She took the paper back and wrote next to the order to write in eEnglish.

She took the paper back and wrote the English translation next to the write in englishms.

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We selected the meals that wanted to consume and she took away.

We selected the meals that we wanted to consume and she took the papers away.

We selected the meals that we wanted to consume and she took the paper away.

The whole prozess was so weird.

The whole prozcess was so weird.

The whole prozcess was so weird.

It took one hour so as to get our first course.

It took one hour so as to get our first course.

It took one hour so asjust to get our first course.

It was not delicious, neither the second.

It was not delicious, and neither was the second.

It was not delicious,tasty, and neither was the second course.

The dessert was the most acceptable.

We were disappointed especially about the waiters.

We were disappointed , especially about the waiters.

We were disappointed, especially about the waitersservice.

When we asked for something the waiter just shrugged.

When we asked for something, the waiter just shrugged.

We hoped the breakfast will be better, but it wasn't.

We hoped the breakfast willould be better, but it wasn't.

We hoped the breakfast willould be better, but it wasn't.

One of us, who signed the contract with the travel angency made a phone call on the second third day.

One of us, who signed the contract with the travel angency, made a phone call on the second third day.

One of us, who had signed the contract with the travel angency, made a phone call on the second third day to complain.

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