Aug. 5, 2020
Should boys and girls be allowed to play on the same teams?
(Should boys and girls be allowed to play on the same sports teams?)
Girls and boys have always been separated when they play sports, and I believe this should be continued. In the first place, generally men are stronger and have more body strength than women. For example, the fastest runner in the world is a man, and the world record holders of most sports are men. It is true that some girls are strong enough to play sports with boys, but most girls are not. If they play with boys, they may end up losing confidence.
Moreover, when boys play on the same teams as girls, they might not be able to do their best. This is because boys may try not to hurt girls, and thus play like they are playing sports with kids.
Should boys and girls be allowed to play on the same teams?
(Should boys and girls be allowed to play on the same sports teams? )
Girls and boys have always been separated when they play sports, and I believe this should be continued.
I don't think your original sentence was wrong, but this sounds a little better.
In the first place, generally men are stronger and have more body strength than women.
For example, the fastest runner in the world is a man, and the world record holders of most sports are men.
It is true that some girls are strong enough to play sports with boys, but most girls are not.
If they play with boys, they may end up losing confidence.
Moreover, when boys play on the same teams as girls, they might not be able to do their best.
This is because boys may try not to hurt girls, and thus play like they are playing sports with kids.
Aug. 6, 2020
Thank you!
Should boys and girls be allowed to play on the same teams?
(Should boys and girls be allowed to play on the same sports teams? )
Girls and boys have always been separated when they play sports, and I believe this should be continued.
In the first place, generally men are stronger and have more body strength than women.
For example, the fastest runner in the world is a man, and the world record holders of most sports are men.
It is true that some girls are strong enough to play sports with boys, but most girls are not.
If they play with boys, they may end up losing confidence.
Moreover, when boys play on the same teams as girls, they might not be able to do their best.
This is because boys may try not to hurt girls, and thus play like they are playing sports with kids.
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Perfect essay! No obvious errors, and nothing sounds awkward!
Aug. 6, 2020
Thank you!!
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Should boys and girls be allowed to play on the same teams? |
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(Should boys and girls be allowed to play on the same sports teams? ) |
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Girls and boys have always been separated when they play sports, and I believe this should be continued. Girls and boys have always been separated when they play sports, and I believe this should I don't think your original sentence was wrong, but this sounds a little better.
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In the first place, generally men are stronger and have more body strength than women. |
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For example, the fastest runner in the world is a man, and the world record holders of most sports are men. |
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It is true that some girls are strong enough to play sports with boys, but most girls are not. |
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If they play with boys, they may end up losing confidence. |
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Moreover, when boys play on the same teams as girls, they might not be able to do their best. |
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This is because boys may try not to hurt girls, and thus play like they are playing sports with kids. |
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