Dec. 23, 2020
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Which pictogram(A or B) do you think is more appropriate for tourist from overseas？ Why do you think so？（sorry i can't show you the picture）
I think that B is appropriate for the following two reasons. First , B is more specific than A, so it is easy for foreigners to make out what the picture say. Second, some foreigners may consider A as something like squid. On the other hand, they will not think B as such.
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I feel like "Short Answer" would be more appropriate than "Short Essay" here.
Which pictogram (A or B) do you think is more appropriate for tourists from overseas？ Why do you think so？（s? (Sorry iI can't show you the picture）).
I think that B is appropriate for the following two reasons.
First of all, B is more specific than A, so it is easyier for foreigners to make out what the picture says.
"It is" is commonly written as "It's".
Second, some foreigners may consider A as something like squid-like.
On the other handHowever, they will not think B as suchthe same of B.
"On the other hand" is kind of when your comparing the pros and cons of one option. If you were using it with "A", then it would make more sense.
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Short Essay1 Short Essay 1 I feel like "Short Answer" would be more appropriate than "Short Essay" here.
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Which pictogram(A or B) do you think is more appropriate for tourist from overseas？ Why do you think so？（sorry i can't show you the picture） Which pictogram (A or B) do you think is more appropriate for tourists from overseas？ |
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I think that B is appropriate for the following two reasons. |
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First , B is more specific than A, so it is easy for foreigners to make out what the picture say. First of all, B is more specific than A, so it is eas "It is" is commonly written as "It's".
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Second, some foreigners may consider A as something like squid. Second, some foreigners may consider A as something |
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On the other hand, they will not think B as such.
"On the other hand" is kind of when your comparing the pros and cons of one option. If you were using it with "A", then it would make more sense.
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