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Runny Nose

ponta 222 · March 11

Target Language - English

I have hay fever. The main symptoms are runny nose, itchy eyes, and sneeze. Among them, runny nose and sneeze are terrible, so I spend tons of tissue. The worst time is after waking up. It's the intense runny nose like I accumulated while sleeping.



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mari 103 March 13, 2021
Runny Nose
I have hay fever.
The main symptoms are runny nose, itchy eyes, and sneeze.

The main symptoms are runny nose, itchy eyes, and sneezeing.

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This sounds more natural in the US. Our television commercials say this all the time.
Among them, runny nose and sneeze are terrible, so I spend tons of tissue.

Among them, the runny nose and sneezeing are terrible, so I spenduse tons of tissue.

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This sounds more natural in the US.
The worst time is after waking up.
It's the intense runny nose like I accumulated while sleeping.

It's the intense runny nose like Iwhich seems to have accumulated while I was sleeping.

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I'm not sure how to say this because my correction doesn't sound natural for the US either.

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It's the intense runny nose which seems to have been compounded while I was sleeping.
It's the intense runny nose which seems to accumulate while I sleep.

Overall feedback & comment:

Good job! 頑張ってくださいね。
Comment added on 03/13/2021