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March 12, 2021

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Runny Nose

I have hay fever. The main symptoms are runny nose, itchy eyes, and sneeze. Among them, runny nose and sneeze are terrible, so I spend tons of tissue. The worst time is after waking up. It's the intense runny nose like I accumulated while sleeping.

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Runny Nose

I have hay fever.

The main symptoms are runny nose, itchy eyes, and sneezeing.

This sounds more natural in the US. Our television commercials say this all the time.

Among them, the runny nose and sneezeing are terrible, so I spenduse tons of tissue.

This sounds more natural in the US.

The worst time is after waking up.

It's the intense runny nose like Iwhich seems to have accumulated while I was sleeping.

I'm not sure how to say this because my correction doesn't sound natural for the US either.

or

It's the intense runny nose which seems to have been compounded while I was sleeping.
It's the intense runny nose which seems to accumulate while I sleep.

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Good job! 頑張ってくださいね。

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ponta

March 14, 2021

217

ありがとうございます!

Runny Nose

I have hay fever.

The main symptoms are runny nose, itchy eyes, and sneeze.

The main symptoms are runny nose, itchy eyes, and sneezeing.

Among them, runny nose and sneeze are terrible, so I spend tons of tissue.

Among them, the runny nose and sneezeing are terrible, so I spenduse tons of tissue.

The worst time is after waking up.

It's the intense runny nose like I accumulated while sleeping.

It's the intense runny nose like Iwhich seems to have accumulated while I was sleeping.

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