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ozymandias99

Aug 16

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Role of computers in human life

Some people think computers are making everyone lazier. Whereas others believe these devices provide notorious benefits in human life. I, myself, agree with the latter. Computers have made life easier and more convenient for three compelling reasons.

First of all, computers are able to provide a plethora of invaluable information. Through the internet, which can be accessed using a computer, an individual has the opportunity to research a particular subject. For instance, there are highly reputable open-access scientific journals such as Elsevier or IEEE which are available online. Thus, people can research from their lab or even their home without going through the burden of going to a library or waiting for a journal to arrive home, as it was done before computers.

Aside from that, more and more humans are communicating with people all around the globe thanks to the sole existence of computers. Through these devices, I have interacted with people of other countries, which helped me learn about their culture and language. Using computers, I have communicated with my sister who lives in another country. Not only computers have allowed me to learn about new cultures, but also helped me to communicate with my sister in Europe.

In closing, certain jobs have got easier since the existence of computers. For instance, spreadsheets are largely used in almost every department in an enterprise. Moreover, an artificial intelligence is being trained to detect and deal with mild diseases. This allows doctors to focus only on the hard cases and patients to get faster and more accurate treatment for common maladies.

To sum up, I firmly believe that human lives have been absolutely improved by computers. People have access to a vast amount of information written in open-access scientific journals. In addition, through computers, humans can interact with each other from any part of the world. Finally, these machines have made jobs easier for people.

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1

Some people think computers are making everyone lazier.

Some people think computers are making everyonpeople lazier.

Usage

Some people think that computers are making everyone lazier, whereas others believe these devices provide many benefits in everyday life.

Usage Stylistic

Some people think computers are making everyone lazier whereas others believe these devices provide enormous benefits to the lives of humans.

"Notorious" has a negative connotation.

Whereas others believe these devices provide notorious benefits in human life.

Whereas others believe these devices provide notoriumerous benefits in human life.

Usage

Whereas others believe these devices provide notorious benefits in human life.

Whereas others believe these devices provide notoriousonly benefits into human life.

'notorious' means famous but for negative reasons

Whereas others believe these devices provide notorious benefits in human life.

This is not a complete sentence so I added this clause to the previous sentence.
Grammar
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I, myself, agree with the latter.

I, myself, agree with the latter.

Usage
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Computers have made life easier and more convenient for three compelling reasons.

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First of all, computers are able to provide a plethora of invaluable information.

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Through the internet, which can be accessed using a computer, an individual has the opportunity to research a particular subject.

Through the internet, which can be accessed using a computer, an individual has the opportunity to research a particular subject.

Unnecessary information
Stylistic

Through the internet, which can be easily accessed usingwith a computer, an individual has the opportunity to research a particular subject.

Stylistic
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For instance, there are highly reputable open-access scientific journals such as Elsevier or IEEE which are available online.

For instance, there are several highly reputable open-access scientific journals such as Elsevier or IEEE which are available online.

Grammar Stylistic

For instance, there are highly reputable open-access scientific journals such as Elsevier or IEEE, which are available online.

Grammar

For instance, there are highly reputable open-access scientific journals such as Elsevier or IEEE which are available online.

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Thus, people can research from their lab or even their home without going through the burden of going to a library or waiting for a journal to arrive home, as it was done before computers.

Thus, people can research from their lab or even their home without going through the burden of going to a library or waiting for a journal to arrive home, as it was done before the age of computers.

Stylistic

Thus, people can research from their lab or even their home without going through the burden of going to a library or waiting for a journal to arrive homebe delivered, as it was done before computers.

Thus, people can do research from their labs or even their homes without going through the burden of going to a library or waiting for a journal to arrive home, as it was done before computers.

plural parallel construction
Grammar
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Aside from that, more and more humans are communicating with people all around the globe thanks to the sole existence of computers.

Aside from that, more and more humanspeople are communicating with people all around the globe thanks to the sole existence of computers.

Usage

Aside from that, more and more humans are communicating with people all around the globe thanks to the sole existence of computers.

Stylistic

Aside from that, more and more humanspeople are communicating with people all around the globe thanks solely to the sole existence of computers.

Through these devices, I have interacted with people of other countries, which helped me learn about their culture and language.

Through these devices, I have interacted with people ofrom other countries, which helped me learn about their culture and language.

Grammar

Through these devices, I have interacted with people of other countries, which has helped me learn about their culture and language.

Grammar

Through these devices, I have interacted with people ofrom other countries, which helped me learn about their culture and language.

Through these devices, I have interacted with people of other countries, which has helped me learn about their culture and language.

Usage
2

Using computers, I have communicated with my sister who lives in another country.

Using computersAdditionally, I have communicated with my sister who lives in another country.

Grammar Usage

Using computers, I have even communicated with my sister who lives in another country.

Usage Stylistic

Not only computers have allowed me to learn about new cultures, but also helped me to communicate with my sister in Europe.

Not only have computers have allowed me to learn about new cultures, but also helped me to communicate with my sister in Europe.

Grammar

Not only computers have allowed me to learn about new cultures, but also helped me to communicate with my sister in Europe.

I would remove this, since you discuss both ideas in the previous sentences.
Stylistic

Not only have computers have allowed me to learn about new cultures, but also helped me to communicate with my sister in Europe.

Not only cComputers have not only allowed me to learn about new cultures, but they also helped me to communicate with my sister in Europe.

"not only ... but also" grammar construction
Grammar

In closing, certain jobs have got easier since the existence of computers.

In closingonclusion, certain jobs have gotten easier since the existencebirth of computers.

Grammar Usage

In closingFurthermore, certain jobs have gotten easier since the existence of computers.

Stylistic

In closing, certain jobs have gotbecome easier since the existencwidespread use of computers.

I think 'widespread use' is more accurate. Computers were around for a while before they provided much benefit to non-academics.

In closing, certain jobs have gotbecome easier since the existenceinvention of computers.

or (but this is colloquial and not for a formally written paper):

In closing, certain jobs have gotten easier since the invention of computers.
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For instance, spreadsheets are largely used in almost every department in an enterprise.

For instance, spreadsheets are largely used inby almost every department inof an enterprise.

For instance, spreadsheets are largely used in almost every department in an enterprise company.

or

For instance, spreadsheets are largely used in almost every business.
Usage
1

Moreover, an artificial intelligence is being trained to detect and deal with mild diseases.

Moreover, an artificial intelligence is being trained to detect and deal with mild diseases.

Usage

Moreover, an artificial intelligence is being trained to detect and deal with mild diseases.

Moreover, an artificial intelligence is being trained to detect and deal with mild diseases.

Grammar
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This allows doctors to focus only on the hard cases and patients to get faster and more accurate treatment for common maladies.

This allows doctors to focus only on the hard cases and for patients to get faster and more accurate treatment for common maladies.

Usage

This allows doctors to focus only on the hard cases, and allows patients to get faster and more accurate treatment for common maladies.

This allows doctors to focus only on the hard cases and difficult cases while allowing patients to getreceive faster and more accurate treatment for common maladies.

parallel construction
Grammar
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To sum up, I firmly believe that human lives have been absolutely improved by computers.

To sum up, I firmly believe that human lives have been absolutely improved by computers.

Grammar Usage

To sum up, I firmly believe that human lives have been absolutely improved by computers.

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People have access to a vast amount of information written in open-access scientific journals.

People now have access to a vast amount of information written in open-access scientific journals.

Grammar Usage Stylistic
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In addition, through computers, humans can interact with each other from any part of the world.

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Finally, these machines have made jobs easier for people.

Finally, these machines have made people's jobs easier for people.

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