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isaac

Jan. 14, 2023

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Review: Holidays

My experience with the appartment in Sordo Street 7 in Cazalla de la Sierra

I have spend a week with my girlfriend on Christmas holidays in a lovely appartment in Cazalla de la Sierra and it was pleasant to find out such a renting and for a lower price than I expected for the Christmas holidays, so why should I try it with other places or regions?
First of all, I have to say that the welcome by the owner, Pedro, has been excellent, mostly because he was aware of any details we needed or question we had about, however much unimportant it looked like.
Regarding to the accomodation, despite of the tiny size of the house, which fits properly for a couple, it was everything on hand and fully prepared for a short stay, that is: indispensable furniture in the living room, a good equipped kitchen and a bathroom which looked like a spa.
Beyond the described above, the neighbourhood was silent and people very welcoming and charming. As an example, we got lost at first to find the location, because of works in the road next to the place, and a group of workers let us cross over it and even helped us to carry our luggages.
Finally, I highly recommend to visit the village‘s castle, where landscapes are atonishing, specially if you want to spend a recovery time surrounded by nature. Not far away you will find an endless list of hiking routes, so it is perfect for people appasionated by the environment.
On summary, after our stay in this really nice location we have no doubts that we will come back in the next holidays.


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Review: Holidays

My experience with the appartment ion Sordo Street 7 in Cazalla de la Sierra

I have spendt a week with my girlfriend on Christmas holidays in a lovely appartment in Cazalla de la Sierra and it was pleasant to find out such a renting andthat I could rent for a lower price than I expected for the Christmas holidays, so why should I try it withto go to other places or regions?

First of all, I have to say that the welcome by the owner, Pedro, hasd been excellent, mostly because he was aware of any details we needed or questions we had about, however much unimportant it looked likeseemed.

Regarding to the accommodation, despite of the tiny size of the house, which fits properlywas appropriately fit for a couple, it washad everything on hand and was fully prepared for a short stay, t. That is: indispens, comfortable furniture in the living room, a goodwell equipped kitchen and a bathroom which looked like a spa.

We don't really describe furniture in a vacation house as "indispensable."

Beyond theat described above, the neighbourhood was silenquiet and the people were very welcoming and charming.

We describe a neighborhood as "quiet" and not as "silent" in the US.

As an example, we got lost at first to find the location, because of works in the road next to the place, andlooking for the rental house because of the road construction near it so a group of workers let us cross over the road to it and even helped us to carry our luggages.

Finally, I highly recommend toa visit to the village‘s castle, where landscapes are astonishing, especially if you want to spend a recovery timerelax surrounded by nature.

Not far away you will find an endless lisamount of hiking routes, so it is perfect for people appasionated by the environmentwho like the outdoors.

OIn summary, after our stay ing at this really nice location, we have no doubts that we will come back infor the next holidays.

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isaac

April 23, 2023

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Thanks again Mari for your corrections
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Review: Holidays

My eExperience with the aAppartment in Sordo Street 7 in Cazalla de la Sierra

I have spendt a week with my girlfriend on Christmas holidays in a lovely appartment in Cazalla de la Sierra and it was pleasant to. It was such a pleasant experience find outing such a renting and for a lower price than I expected forlow rent during the Christmas holidays, sseasons. So why shwould I try it with other places othis in other regions?

I am not sure if you mean that you stayed over at someone's apartment. Do you mean something like Airbnb? Also, after getting further into the piece of writing the question at the end does not correlate as you end up talking about why you would recommend this apartment specifically and not apartments in different areas.

First of all, I have to say that thewe had an excellent welcome by the owner, Pedro, has been excellent, mostly because he was aware of anythe details we needed orof what was needed beforehand. He would also answer any questions we had about, however much unimportant it looked likeno matter how unimportant they would seem.

I am not sure about this sentence.

Regarding to the accomodations, despite of the tiny size of the house, space (which fits properly for a couple), it was everything was readily on hand and fully prepared for a short stay, that is: indispensable furniture. Essential furniture were placed in the living room, a goodwell equipped kitchen and a bathroom which looked likewas provided, and there was even a bathroom that resembled a spa.

What do you mean by indispensable furniture?

Beyond theAlong with what was described above, the neighbourhood was silenpleasantly quiet and the people vwerye welcoming and charming.

As an example,One act of generosity of the locals was when we got lost at first to finding the location, at first because of construction works i on the road next to the place, and a group of workers let us cross over itapartment. The workers at teh scene let us cross over the road being worked on and even helped us to carry our luggages.

Finally, I highly recommend to visiting the village‘s castle, where landscapes areboasting an astonishing landscape, especially if you want to spend a recovery timesome time relaxing surrounded by nature.

Not far away you will find an endless list of hiking routes, so it is perfect for people appasionated by the environmentfond of nature.

On summaryverall, after our stay in this really nice location we have no doubts that we will come back in the nextduring future holidays.

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isaac

April 23, 2023

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Thank eqeos for your corrections

Review: Holidays

My experience with the appartment in Sordo Street 7 in Cazalla de la Sierra

My eExperience with the aAppartment in Sordo Street 7 in Cazalla de la Sierra

My experience with the appartment ion Sordo Street 7 in Cazalla de la Sierra

I have spend a week with my girlfriend on Christmas holidays in a lovely appartment in Cazalla de la Sierra and it was pleasant to find out such a renting and for a lower price than I expected for the Christmas holidays, so why should I try it with other places or regions?

I have spendt a week with my girlfriend on Christmas holidays in a lovely appartment in Cazalla de la Sierra and it was pleasant to. It was such a pleasant experience find outing such a renting and for a lower price than I expected forlow rent during the Christmas holidays, sseasons. So why shwould I try it with other places othis in other regions?

I have spendt a week with my girlfriend on Christmas holidays in a lovely appartment in Cazalla de la Sierra and it was pleasant to find out such a renting andthat I could rent for a lower price than I expected for the Christmas holidays, so why should I try it withto go to other places or regions?

First of all, I have to say that the welcome by the owner, Pedro, has been excellent, mostly because he was aware of any details we needed or question we had about, however much unimportant it looked like.

First of all, I have to say that thewe had an excellent welcome by the owner, Pedro, has been excellent, mostly because he was aware of anythe details we needed orof what was needed beforehand. He would also answer any questions we had about, however much unimportant it looked likeno matter how unimportant they would seem.

First of all, I have to say that the welcome by the owner, Pedro, hasd been excellent, mostly because he was aware of any details we needed or questions we had about, however much unimportant it looked likeseemed.

Regarding to the accomodation, despite of the tiny size of the house, which fits properly for a couple, it was everything on hand and fully prepared for a short stay, that is: indispensable furniture in the living room, a good equipped kitchen and a bathroom which looked like a spa.

Regarding to the accomodations, despite of the tiny size of the house, space (which fits properly for a couple), it was everything was readily on hand and fully prepared for a short stay, that is: indispensable furniture. Essential furniture were placed in the living room, a goodwell equipped kitchen and a bathroom which looked likewas provided, and there was even a bathroom that resembled a spa.

Regarding to the accommodation, despite of the tiny size of the house, which fits properlywas appropriately fit for a couple, it washad everything on hand and was fully prepared for a short stay, t. That is: indispens, comfortable furniture in the living room, a goodwell equipped kitchen and a bathroom which looked like a spa.

Beyond the described above, the neighbourhood was silent and people very welcoming and charming.

Beyond theAlong with what was described above, the neighbourhood was silenpleasantly quiet and the people vwerye welcoming and charming.

Beyond theat described above, the neighbourhood was silenquiet and the people were very welcoming and charming.

As an example, we got lost at first to find the location, because of works in the road next to the place, and a group of workers let us cross over it and even helped us to carry our luggages.

As an example,One act of generosity of the locals was when we got lost at first to finding the location, at first because of construction works i on the road next to the place, and a group of workers let us cross over itapartment. The workers at teh scene let us cross over the road being worked on and even helped us to carry our luggages.

As an example, we got lost at first to find the location, because of works in the road next to the place, andlooking for the rental house because of the road construction near it so a group of workers let us cross over the road to it and even helped us to carry our luggages.

Finally, I highly recommend to visit the village‘s castle, where landscapes are atonishing, specially if you want to spend a recovery time surrounded by nature.

Finally, I highly recommend to visiting the village‘s castle, where landscapes areboasting an astonishing landscape, especially if you want to spend a recovery timesome time relaxing surrounded by nature.

Finally, I highly recommend toa visit to the village‘s castle, where landscapes are astonishing, especially if you want to spend a recovery timerelax surrounded by nature.

Not far away you will find an endless list of hiking routes, so it is perfect for people appasionated by the environment.

Not far away you will find an endless list of hiking routes, so it is perfect for people appasionated by the environmentfond of nature.

Not far away you will find an endless lisamount of hiking routes, so it is perfect for people appasionated by the environmentwho like the outdoors.

On summary, after our stay in this really nice location we have no doubts that we will come back in the next holidays.

On summaryverall, after our stay in this really nice location we have no doubts that we will come back in the nextduring future holidays.

OIn summary, after our stay ing at this really nice location, we have no doubts that we will come back infor the next holidays.

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