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Glomerulonephritis

1. Signs
Acute Glomerulonephritis
Swelling in your face, eyes in the early stage. Ankles, feet and legs are swelling later.
Pink or brown-colored urine or decrease in the amount of urine
Increase in blood pressure

Chronic Glomerulonephritis
Swelling in your face, eyes, ankles, feet and legs

2. Symptoms
Acute Glomerulonephritis
Swelling in your face, eyes in the early stage. Ankles, feet and legs are swelling later.
Pink or brown-colored urine or decrease in the amount of urine
Drowsiness and fatique
Vomiting
Chronic Glomerulonephritis
Swelling in your face, eyes, ankles, feet and legs

3. Examination findings
Urine test: checking for blood, protein, white blood cells and red blood cells in the urine.
Blood test: taking a blood sample to check the levels of waste in the blood.
Imaging tests: having an X-ray or ultrasound or CT scan to check the condition of the kidneys.
Kidney biopsy: taking the tissue sample to check for glomerulonephritis

4. Causes
Acute Glomerulonephritis
Acute glomerulonephritis often occurs as a complication of an infection of the pharynx or skin caused by streptococci, a type of bacteria. Other bacterial infections can also lead to the development of acute glomerulonephritis: staphylococci and pneumococcal. Viral infections such as chickenpox and parasitic infections such as malaria) can be causes of acute glomerulonephritis.
Acute glomerulonephritis can also be caused by other infection including mesmeric proliferative glomerulonephritis, IgA(immunoglobulin A)、nephropathy,IgA-associated vasculitis, systemic lupus erythematosus, clioglobulinemia, Goodpasture syndrome, and polyangiochromatosis

Chronic Glomerulonephritis
Many chronic glomerulonephritis is caused by acute glomerulonephritis, such as IgA nephropathy and mesopharyngeal nephritis. In some cases, acute glomerulonephritis may become prolonged (chronic). It can also be caused by hereditary nephritis, a hereditary disease. However, in many cases, the cause of chronic glomerulonephritis cannot be identified

5. Epidemiology
Acute Glomerulonephritis
It is common in children between the ages of 4 and 10, but it rarely develops in adults or the elderly. It becomes chronic when it develops in adults, but it often heals
Chronic Glomerulonephritis
The cases of chronic kidney disease (CKD) are very high worldwide due to the aging society today. Many patients are suffering from hypertension, diabetes, and other chronic diseases

6. The process of inflammetion
Inflammation often occurs due to abnormal immune responses. There are two types 2 of such reactions:

1. Antibodies bind to antigens outside the kidneys, and after the antigen and antibody complexes (immune complexes) are transported into the kidneys in the bloodstream, they are trapped in glomeruli and cause inflammation. If a significant number of glomerulus is damaged, the function of the kidneys will decrease. As a result, the amount of urine made decreases and waste products accumulate in the blood. In addition, when the damage becomes severe, inflammatory cells and damaged glomerular cells accumulate, and the capillaries of the glomerulus are compressed, preventing blood throphysation. When fibrous tissue called scarring is formed, renal function is impaired and the amount of urine made is reduced. A small mass of blood (microthrombus) is formed in a thin blood vessel, which can cause further decline in renal function.

2. When it is caused by a hereditary disease.

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Swelling in your face, and eyes in the early stage.

Ankles, feet and legs are swelling later.

Pink or brown-colored urine or a decrease in the amount of urine

IAn increase in blood pressure

Swelling in your face, eyes, ankles, feet, and legs

Swelling in your face, and eyes in the early stage.

Ankles, feet and legs are swelling later.

Pink or brown-colored urine or a decrease in the amount of urine

Drowsiness and fatiqgue

Swelling in your face, eyes, ankles, feet, and legs

Urine test: cCheckinged for blood, protein, white blood cells and red blood cells in the urine.

Because it says "Examination findings", I would guess that the examination already occurred, so you would use the past tense.

Blood test: takingTook a blood sample to check the levels of waste in the blood.

Imaging tests: hHaving an X-ray or ultrasound or CT scan to check the condition of the kidneys.

Based on the phrasing I'm assuming that this hasn't happened yet, so the present works here.

Kidney biopsy: tTaking thea tissue sample to check for glomerulonephritis

Viral infections such as chickenpox and parasitic infections (such as malaria) can be causes of acute glomerulonephritis.

Acute glomerulonephritis can also be caused by other infections including mesmeric proliferative glomerulonephritis, IgA (immunoglobulin A),nephropathy, IgA-associated vasculitis, systemic lupus erythematosus, clioglobulinemia, Goodpasture syndrome, and polyangiochromatosis

I don't know what any of these are so I can't really correct here.

Many chronic glomerulonephritis isnfections (?) are caused by acute glomerulonephritis, such as IgA nephropathy andor mesopharyngeal nephritis.

However, in many cases, the cause of chronic glomerulonephritis cannot be identified.

You can also say "can't" instead of "cannot".

It is common in children between the ages of 4 and 10, but it rarely develops in adults or the elderly.

You can say "it's" instead of "it is".

It becomes chronic when it develops in adults, but it often heals.

The cases of chronic kidney disease (CKD) are very high worldwide due to the today's aging society today.

1. Antibodies bind to antigens outside the kidneys, and after the antigen and antibody complexes (immune complexes) are transported into the kidneys in the bloodstream, they are trapped in glomeruli and cause inflammation.

You can say "they're" instead of "they are".

If a significant number of glomerulus isi (?) are damaged, the functioning ability of the kidneys will decrease.

2. When it is caused by a hereditary disease.

(You can say "It's" instead of "It is". This isn't a full sentence so I can't really understand what you're trying to say.

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Great Job! I made just a few corrections! I'm not an expert on biology or diseases so I can only really correct the simpler sentences, though I tried my best.

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profitendieu

Oct. 26, 2020

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Swelling in your face, eyes, ankles, feet, and legs

The original would have been acceptable under styles that omit the Oxford comma

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Lala

Oct. 28, 2020

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Thank you for taking your time to correct my report. it is very helpful!

Swelling in your face, and eyes in the early stages.

Ankles, feet and legs arbecome sweollingen later.

Pink or brown-colored urine or a decrease in the amount of urine

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Oct. 28, 2020

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Thank you for correcting my report. I appreciate your help!

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Glomerulonephritis

1. Signs

Acute Glomerulonephritis

Swelling in your face, eyes in the early stage.

Swelling in your face, and eyes in the early stages.

Swelling in your face, and eyes in the early stage.

Ankles, feet and legs are swelling later.

Ankles, feet and legs arbecome sweollingen later.

Ankles, feet and legs are swelling later.

Pink or brown-colored urine or decrease in the amount of urine

Pink or brown-colored urine or a decrease in the amount of urine

Pink or brown-colored urine or a decrease in the amount of urine

Increase in blood pressure

IAn increase in blood pressure

Chronic Glomerulonephritis

Swelling in your face, eyes, ankles, feet and legs

Swelling in your face, eyes, ankles, feet, and legs

2. Symptoms

Acute Glomerulonephritis

Swelling in your face, eyes in the early stage.

Swelling in your face, and eyes in the early stage.

Ankles, feet and legs are swelling later.

Ankles, feet and legs are swelling later.

Pink or brown-colored urine or decrease in the amount of urine

Pink or brown-colored urine or a decrease in the amount of urine

Drowsiness and fatique

Drowsiness and fatiqgue

Vomiting

Chronic Glomerulonephritis

Swelling in your face, eyes, ankles, feet and legs

Swelling in your face, eyes, ankles, feet, and legs

3. Examination findings

Urine test: checking for blood, protein, white blood cells and red blood cells in the urine.

Urine test: cCheckinged for blood, protein, white blood cells and red blood cells in the urine.

Blood test: taking a blood sample to check the levels of waste in the blood.

Blood test: takingTook a blood sample to check the levels of waste in the blood.

Imaging tests: having an X-ray or ultrasound or CT scan to check the condition of the kidneys.

Imaging tests: hHaving an X-ray or ultrasound or CT scan to check the condition of the kidneys.

Kidney biopsy: taking the tissue sample to check for glomerulonephritis

Kidney biopsy: tTaking thea tissue sample to check for glomerulonephritis

4. Causes

Acute Glomerulonephritis

Acute glomerulonephritis often occurs as a complication of an infection of the pharynx or skin caused by streptococci, a type of bacteria.

Other bacterial infections can also lead to the development of acute glomerulonephritis: staphylococci and pneumococcal.

Viral infections such as chickenpox and parasitic infections such as malaria) can be causes of acute glomerulonephritis.

Viral infections such as chickenpox and parasitic infections (such as malaria) can be causes of acute glomerulonephritis.

Acute glomerulonephritis can also be caused by other infection including mesmeric proliferative glomerulonephritis, IgA(immunoglobulin A)、nephropathy,IgA-associated vasculitis, systemic lupus erythematosus, clioglobulinemia, Goodpasture syndrome, and polyangiochromatosis

Acute glomerulonephritis can also be caused by other infections including mesmeric proliferative glomerulonephritis, IgA (immunoglobulin A),nephropathy, IgA-associated vasculitis, systemic lupus erythematosus, clioglobulinemia, Goodpasture syndrome, and polyangiochromatosis

Chronic Glomerulonephritis

Many chronic glomerulonephritis is caused by acute glomerulonephritis, such as IgA nephropathy and mesopharyngeal nephritis.

Many chronic glomerulonephritis isnfections (?) are caused by acute glomerulonephritis, such as IgA nephropathy andor mesopharyngeal nephritis.

In some cases, acute glomerulonephritis may become prolonged (chronic).

It can also be caused by hereditary nephritis, a hereditary disease.

However, in many cases, the cause of chronic glomerulonephritis cannot be identified

However, in many cases, the cause of chronic glomerulonephritis cannot be identified.

5. Epidemiology

Acute Glomerulonephritis

It is common in children between the ages of 4 and 10, but it rarely develops in adults or the elderly.

It is common in children between the ages of 4 and 10, but it rarely develops in adults or the elderly.

It becomes chronic when it develops in adults, but it often heals

It becomes chronic when it develops in adults, but it often heals.

Chronic Glomerulonephritis

The cases of chronic kidney disease (CKD) are very high worldwide due to the aging society today.

The cases of chronic kidney disease (CKD) are very high worldwide due to the today's aging society today.

Many patients are suffering from hypertension, diabetes, and other chronic diseases

6. The process of inflammetion

Inflammation often occurs due to abnormal immune responses.

There are two types 2 of such reactions:

1. Antibodies bind to antigens outside the kidneys, and after the antigen and antibody complexes (immune complexes) are transported into the kidneys in the bloodstream, they are trapped in glomeruli and cause inflammation.

1. Antibodies bind to antigens outside the kidneys, and after the antigen and antibody complexes (immune complexes) are transported into the kidneys in the bloodstream, they are trapped in glomeruli and cause inflammation.

If a significant number of glomerulus is damaged, the function of the kidneys will decrease.

If a significant number of glomerulus isi (?) are damaged, the functioning ability of the kidneys will decrease.

As a result, the amount of urine made decreases and waste products accumulate in the blood.

In addition, when the damage becomes severe, inflammatory cells and damaged glomerular cells accumulate, and the capillaries of the glomerulus are compressed, preventing blood throphysation.

When fibrous tissue called scarring is formed, renal function is impaired and the amount of urine made is reduced.

A small mass of blood (microthrombus) is formed in a thin blood vessel, which can cause further decline in renal function.

2. When it is caused by a hereditary disease.

2. When it is caused by a hereditary disease.

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