Report about the excursion of this weekend (C1 CAE) Report about the excursion this weekend (C1 CAE)

You have just returned from leading an aAdventure wWeekend with your school. You have just returned from leading an Adventure Weekend with your school.

Reading this, it feels like "adventure weekend" is the specific name for an activity so I went and capitalized it. Otherwise, it should be "weekend adventure" instead.

In preparation for an assessment meeting, you have been asked to write a report for the head of the school. In preparation for an assessment meeting, you have been asked to write a report for the head of the school.

Your report should explain what you feel the weekend achieved for students and teachers alike achieved during the weekend, describe any problems you may have had, and suggest any changes you would like to make to the aAdventure wWeekend that wouldo make it more interesting for everyone. Your report should explain what you feel students and teachers alike achieved during the weekend, describe any problems you may have had, and suggest any changes you would like to make to the Adventure Weekend to make it more interesting for everyone.

(What couldwill make it sound more natural? ) (What will make it sound more natural? )

Report about the excursion of this weekend. Report about the excursion this weekend.

The aim of this report is to describe the activities that took place in The Jerte Valley during the currently annual aAdventure wWeekend with the students of the third course of the secondary schoolecondary school's third course students. The aim of this report is to describe the activities that took place in The Jerte Valley during the current annual Adventure Weekend with the secondary school's third course students.

IOverall, it was a good trip overall, despite some setbacks in our schedule related to students' behaviour, as I will explain below. Overall, it was a good trip despite some setbacks in our schedule related to students' behavior, as I will explain below.

It was a good trip overall, despite some setbacks in our schedule related tocaused by the students' behaviour, as I will explain below. It was a good trip overall, despite some setbacks in our schedule caused by the students' behaviour, as I will explain below.

This has been an extraordinary opportunity to improve communications between the different groups in both classes (A and B) for this course, and especially between the teachers involved and students. This has been an extraordinary opportunity to improve communications between the different groups in both classes (A and B) for this course, especially between the teachers and students.

This has been an extraordinaryincredible opportunity to improve communication between the different groups in both classes (A and B) for this course, and especially between the students and teachers involved and students. This has been an incredible opportunity to improve communication between the different groups in both classes (A and B) for this course, and especially between the students and teachers involved.

both classes (plural)

For example, throughout during the hike up to the valley's lake, students ofrom both classes helped one to another to go up throughclimb the hardest slopes, crossing over the river, etc. For example, during the hike up to the valley's lake, students from both classes helped one to another to climb the hardest slopes, cross the river, etc.

For example, throughout during the hike up toalong the valley's lake, students of both classes helped one to another to go up through the hardest slopes, crossing over the river, etc. For example, during the hike along the valley's lake, students of both classes helped one another to go up the hardest slopes, crossing over the river, etc.

help- presente, helped- pasado

It was stimulating for a teacher to see how students that have almost notnever interacted before atin school can cooperate and have fun. It was stimulating for a teacher to see how students that have never interacted before in school can cooperate and have fun.

It was stimulaexciting for a teacher to see how students that have almost not interacted before at school cooperate and have fun. It was exciting for a teacher to see how students that have almost not interacted before at school cooperate and have fun.

AsIn regards (it is corrected from Write&Improve website as "As regards to")to the teachers, we could get to know our students beyond the daily class context, what led us to acontext of daily classes, which helped us to communicate in better and more personal communicationways. In regards to the teachers, we could get to know our students beyond the context of daily classes, which helped us to communicate in better and more personal ways.

As regards (it is corrected from Write&Improve website as "As regards to") teachers, we couldgot to know our students beyond the daily class contextclassroom, whatich led us to ato better and more personal communication. As regards (it is corrected from Write&Improve website as "As regards to") teachers, we got to know our students beyond the classroom, which led to better and more personal communication.

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Moreover, theystudents were able to put some theoryetical concepts, mostly from the natural sciences subject, into practice. Moreover, students were able to put some theoretical concepts, mostly from the natural sciences, into practice.

There hadve been some problems with a littlesmall group of thein class A. There have been some problems with a small group in class A.

There had beenwere some problems with a littlesmall group of thefrom class A. There were some problems with a small group from class A.

They managed to hide a couple of whiskey bottles with the purpose of drinking them once the teachers were asleeping. They managed to hide a couple of whiskey bottles with the purpose of drinking them once the teachers were asleep.

They managed to hide a couple offew whiskey bottles with the purpose of drinking them oncas the teachers were sleepingt. They managed to hide a few whiskey bottles with the purpose of drinking them as the teachers slept.

"a couple of" es muy informal

However, I couldwas able to catch them oin time, so I avoidprevented the situation gotfrom getting worse. However, I was able to catch them in time, so I prevented the situation from getting worse.

However, I couldwas able to catch them on time, so I avoided making the situation got worse. However, I was able to catch them on time, so I avoided making the situation worse.

I have just takenmade an appointment with their parents in order to have another meeting and inform them about this wrong-doing. I have just made an appointment with their parents in order to have another meeting and inform them about this wrong-doing.

I have just takenscheduled an appointment with their parents in order to have another meetingmeet them and inform them about this wrong-doing.eir children's misconduct. I have just scheduled an appointment with their parents in order to meet them and inform them about their children's misconduct.

Therefore, as a suggestion for the future, I onsimply propose we look in their backpacks before the travelip starts. Therefore, as a suggestion for the future, I simply propose we look in their backpacks before the trip starts.

Therefore, as a suggestion for the future, I only propose look in their backpackswould only like to propose a backpack inspection before the travel startip. Therefore, as a suggestion for the future, I would only like to propose a backpack inspection before the trip.

All in all, these adventureous days have been a really useful experienced that helped us all to get closer to each other and get to know us out ofeach other outside of the classroom. All in all, these adventurous days have been a really useful experience that helped us all get closer and get to know each other outside of the classroom.

All in all, these days of adventure days have been a really useful experienced that has helped us all to get closer to each other and get to know us out of classroom.to forge stronger bonds between one another. All in all, these days of adventure have been a really useful experience that has helped us to forge stronger bonds between one another.

"experience" es tanto el sustantivo como el verbo, sin embargo no lleva "ed" si quieres escribir la palabra como un sustantivo