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bsteck

Feb. 16, 2022

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Seriuosly?
Just take some time eachone for him/her selfe. Maybe also consider taking a short break from eachother. It will hwlp the both of you to grasp clear thoughts and will put the whole situation in an other light.
You might be able seeing the arguement through your partners point of view, whitch will enable your selfe to understand him/her better.
We all know that for a relationship there are always two people needed, likewise for an arguement. Therefor you must step a little bit back from your opinion and try to grasp your partners point of you. You'll be able to understand way better why he/she reacted that way or said some thing. On the other hand I'd suggest you to explain your selfe without, and that is really important, accuding your partner. Do not say things like: You lied at me, so I (...)
Try more to explain to your partner how you felt and why you acted like you did. I'm sure you will be able to solve some misunderstandings.
But first, take yourselfe time to think, to reflect and don't take desicions now, you will regret later. Don't give up on eachother to quickly, that for your relationship is way to precious.

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Seriuously?

Just take some time eachone for him/her selfeaway from one another.

Maybe also consider taking a short break from eachother.

It will hwelp the both of you to grasp clear thoughtclear your heads and will put the whole situation in an whole other light.

You might be able to seeing the arguement through your partners point of view, whitch will enable your selfe to understand him/her better.

We all know that for a relationship there are always two people needed, likewise for an arguement.

Therefore you must step a little bit backaway from your opinion and try to grasp your partners point of youview.

You'll be able to understand waymuch better as to why he/she reacted that way or said some thing.

On the other hand, I'd suggest for you to explain your selfe without, and thatis is really important, accudsing your partner.

Do not say things like: You lied ato me, so I (...)

Try moreinstead to explain to your partner how you felt and why you acted likethe way you did.

I'm sure you will be able to solve some misunderstandings.

But first, take some time to yourselfe time to think, to reflect, and don't take desicactions now, as you will regret them later.

Don't give up on each other too quickly, that foras your relationship is way too precious.

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Seriuously?

Just take some time eachalone for him/her selfe.rom each other

Maybe also consider taking a short break from each other.

It will hwelp the both of you to grasp clear your thoughts and will put the whole situation in an other light.

You might be ablecan also try seeing the arguement through your partners point of view, whitch will enable your selfe to understand him/her better.

We all know that for a relationship there are always two people needed, likewise for an arguement.

Therefore you must step a little bit back from your opinion and try to grasp your partners point of youview.

You'll also be able to understand way better why he/she reacted that way or said somethat thing.

On the other hand I'd suggest you to explain your selfe without, and that is really important, accuding your partner.

don't really understand what your trying to say here

Do not say things like: You lied ato me, so I (...)

Try more to explain to your partner how you felt and why you acted like you did.

But first, takgive yourselfe time to think, to reflect and don't take desiccisions now, as you will regret it later.

Don't give up on each other too quickly, that foras your relationship is way too precious.

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Good Job! However, this journal has many spelling and grammar mistakes, so I suggest you work on that.

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bsteck

March 2, 2022

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Thank you. Verry helpful!

Realationship

relationship

Seriuosly?

seriously?

Maybe also consider taking a short break from eachother.

each other

It will hwlp the both of you to grasp clear thoughts and will put the whole situation in an other light.

help

You might be able seeing the arguement through your partners point of view, whitch will enable your selfe to understand him/her better.

yourself

We all know that for a relationship there are always two people needed, likewise for an arguement.

Therefor you must step a little bit back from your opinion and try to grasp your partners point of you.

You'll be able to understand way better why he/she reacted that way or said some thing.

On the other hand I'd suggest you to explain your selfe without, and that is really important, accuding your partner.

yourself
accuding?? according?

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bsteck

March 2, 2022

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Thanks for correcting!

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bsteck

March 2, 2022

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Thanks for correcting!

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I would add something like an article or an s at the end.

Seriuously?

Just take some time eachone for him/her selfefor yourselves.

Maybe you could also consider taking a short break from each other.

It will hwelp the both of you to grasp clear thoughts and will put the whole situation in an other lightclearly understand what is going on, what are you thinking about it... It would let you gain some perspective.

"grasp clear thoughts" doesn't sound right to me. My suggestion:

You might be able to seeing the arguement through your partner's point of vieweyes, whitch will enable your selfeallow you to understand him/her better.

We all know that for a relationship therwo people are always two people needed, likewiseneeded, as well as for an arguement.

Therefore you must step a little bit back from your opinion and try to grasp your partners point of you.

I am not sure if "step back from your opinion a little" would be better or even possible.

You'll be able to understand a way better why he/she reacted that way or said some thing.

or perhaps much better

On the other hand I'd suggest you to explain to your selfe without, and that is really important, accudingtalking to your partner.

Do not say things like: You lied ato me, so I (...)

But first, take yourselfe time to think, to reflect, and don't take desiccisions now, you will regret later.

Don't give up on each other too quickly, that for your relationship is a way to precious.

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It was a good answer. My apologies if I made a mistake with the corrections. I am not a native speaker. It was a difficult topic to talk about, but interesting. Would you like similar prompts?

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bsteck

March 2, 2022

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Thank you verry much! I may be write some more.

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Seriuously?

This has an aggressive tone, which might not be what you want when talking to your friend. It sounds like, "I can't believe you would be so stupid as to do this." Which might be what you want, I don't know!

Just take some time eachone for him/her selfefor yourselves.

"Just take some time, each one to his/her self" is fine, but "for yourselves" is shorter and means the same thing.
Also, self doesn't have a trailing 'e'.

Maybe also consider taking a short break from each other.

In English, "each one" and "each other" are separate words. Don't know why.

It will hwelp the both of you to grasp clear thoughts and will put the whole situation in an other light.

And "another" is one word, for some reason. Sorry about my language.

I would probably rewrite this as "It will help you both think clearly, and put the whole situation in another light."
"help the both of you to grasp" -> "help you both think"
"will" in both parts of the sentence -> "will" just in the first part, and join the two halves with a comma
"grasp clear thoughts" -> "think clearly"

You might be able to seeing the arguement throughfrom your partner's point of view, whitch will enable your selfe to understand him/her better.

A shorter version of this sentence could be:
"You might see the argument from your partner's point of view and understand him/her better."
It is also becoming much more common to use "them"/"they"/"theirs" instead of "him/her", "he/she", and "his/hers" when the gender is unknown.

We all know that for a relationship there are alwayneeds two people needed,; likewise for an arguement.

This could also be:
"We all know that a relationship needs two people, and likewise for an argument."
or -
"We all know that two people are always needed for a relationship; likewise for an argument."

Therefore, you must step a little bit back from your opinion and try to grasp your partner's point of youview.

You'll be able to understand way better why he/she reacted that way or said somethat thing.

"reacted that way" -> reacted in one specific way
"said some thing" -> said any thing
We want these two to agree, and we want to understand why the partner did or said a specific hurtful thing, so we use "said that thing."

On the other hand I'd suggest you to explain your selfe without, and thatis is really important, accudsing your partner.

Do not say things like: , "You lied ato me, so I (...)"

small punctuation things - doesn't matter much
In English we lie *to* people, not *at* them. Same with talking.

Actually, both are used, though "at" is much less common. When we are talking *to* someone, the other person is listening, or paying attention. When we talk *at* someone, they are not actually listening. It's like throwing a ball - if you throw a ball to your friend, you mean for them to catch it. If you throw a ball at your friend, you mean for it to hit them.

Try moreharder to explain to your partner how you felt and why you acted like you did.

I'm sure you will be able to resolve some misunderstandings.

But first, takgive yourselfe time to think, to and reflect and d. Don't tmake desiccisions now, you will regret them later.

Don't give up on each other too quickly, that for your relationship is way too precious for that.

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I can definitely understand what you're saying, it just sounds a little off in various places.

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bsteck

March 2, 2022

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Thank you!

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Seriuosly?

Seriuously?

Seriuously?

Seriuosly?

Seriuously?

Seriuously?

Just take some time eachone for him/her selfe.

Just take some time eachone for him/her selfefor yourselves.

Just take some time eachone for him/her selfefor yourselves.

Just take some time eachalone for him/her selfe.rom each other

Just take some time eachone for him/her selfeaway from one another.

Maybe also consider taking a short break from eachother.

Maybe you could also consider taking a short break from each other.

Maybe also consider taking a short break from each other.

Maybe also consider taking a short break from eachother.

Maybe also consider taking a short break from each other.

It will hwlp the both of you to grasp clear thoughts and will put the whole situation in an other light.

It will hwelp the both of you to grasp clear thoughts and will put the whole situation in an other lightclearly understand what is going on, what are you thinking about it... It would let you gain some perspective.

It will hwelp the both of you to grasp clear thoughts and will put the whole situation in an other light.

It will hwlp the both of you to grasp clear thoughts and will put the whole situation in an other light.

It will hwelp the both of you to grasp clear your thoughts and will put the whole situation in an other light.

It will hwelp the both of you to grasp clear thoughtclear your heads and will put the whole situation in an whole other light.

You might be able seeing the arguement through your partners point of view, whitch will enable your selfe to understand him/her better.

You might be able to seeing the arguement through your partner's point of vieweyes, whitch will enable your selfeallow you to understand him/her better.

You might be able to seeing the arguement throughfrom your partner's point of view, whitch will enable your selfe to understand him/her better.

You might be able seeing the arguement through your partners point of view, whitch will enable your selfe to understand him/her better.

You might be ablecan also try seeing the arguement through your partners point of view, whitch will enable your selfe to understand him/her better.

You might be able to seeing the arguement through your partners point of view, whitch will enable your selfe to understand him/her better.

We all know that for a relationship there are always two people needed, likewise for an arguement.

We all know that for a relationship therwo people are always two people needed, likewiseneeded, as well as for an arguement.

We all know that for a relationship there are alwayneeds two people needed,; likewise for an arguement.

Therefor you must step a little bit back from your opinion and try to grasp your partners point of you.

Therefore you must step a little bit back from your opinion and try to grasp your partners point of you.

Therefore, you must step a little bit back from your opinion and try to grasp your partner's point of youview.

Therefore you must step a little bit back from your opinion and try to grasp your partners point of youview.

Therefore you must step a little bit backaway from your opinion and try to grasp your partners point of youview.

You'll be able to understand way better why he/she reacted that way or said some thing.

You'll also be able to understand way better why he/she reacted that way or said somethat thing.

You'll be able to understand a way better why he/she reacted that way or said some thing.

You'll be able to understand way better why he/she reacted that way or said somethat thing.

You'll be able to understand waymuch better as to why he/she reacted that way or said some thing.

On the other hand I'd suggest you to explain your selfe without, and that is really important, accuding your partner.

On the other hand I'd suggest you to explain to your selfe without, and that is really important, accudingtalking to your partner.

On the other hand I'd suggest you to explain your selfe without, and thatis is really important, accudsing your partner.

On the other hand I'd suggest you to explain your selfe without, and that is really important, accuding your partner.

On the other hand I'd suggest you to explain your selfe without, and that is really important, accuding your partner.

On the other hand, I'd suggest for you to explain your selfe without, and thatis is really important, accudsing your partner.

Do not say things like: You lied at me, so I (...)

Do not say things like: You lied ato me, so I (...)

Do not say things like: , "You lied ato me, so I (...)"

Do not say things like: You lied ato me, so I (...)

Do not say things like: You lied ato me, so I (...)

Try more to explain to your partner how you felt and why you acted like you did.

Try moreharder to explain to your partner how you felt and why you acted like you did.

Try more to explain to your partner how you felt and why you acted like you did.

Try moreinstead to explain to your partner how you felt and why you acted likethe way you did.

I'm sure you will be able to solve some misunderstandings.

I'm sure you will be able to resolve some misunderstandings.

But first, take yourselfe time to think, to reflect and don't take desicions now, you will regret later.

But first, take yourselfe time to think, to reflect, and don't take desiccisions now, you will regret later.

But first, takgive yourselfe time to think, to and reflect and d. Don't tmake desiccisions now, you will regret them later.

But first, takgive yourselfe time to think, to reflect and don't take desiccisions now, as you will regret it later.

But first, take some time to yourselfe time to think, to reflect, and don't take desicactions now, as you will regret them later.

Don't give up on eachother to quickly, that for your relationship is way to precious.

Don't give up on each other too quickly, that for your relationship is a way to precious.

Don't give up on each other too quickly, that for your relationship is way too precious for that.

Don't give up on each other too quickly, that foras your relationship is way too precious.

Don't give up on each other too quickly, that foras your relationship is way too precious.

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