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nambatsuyoshi

July 20, 2021

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Rainy season

The rainy season was over in Osaka three days ago. It lasted 62 days. This year's rainy season was the longest in the history of observation. It gets particularly hot for ten days after finishing the rainy season. In such a situation, the Tokyo Olympic games are going to start this week. However, it's not exciting at all.


大阪では3日前に梅雨が明けました。梅雨は62日間でした。今年の梅雨は観測史上最長でした。梅雨明けしてから、特に10日間はとても暑くなります。このような状況の中、今週はオリンピックが始まります。でも全く盛り上がっていません。

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Rainy season

The rainy season was over in Osaka ended three days ago.

It lasted 62 days.

This year's rainy season was the longest in the history ofever observationed.

It gets particularly hot for ten days after finishing the rainy season has finished.

IAnd in such a situation, the Tokyo Olympic games are going to start this week.

However, it's not exciting at all.

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Good job :)

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nutty

July 20, 2021

2

PerfectRow object (112066)

You can also write this as
"It lasted for 62 days"
Which will sound more natural to some speakers.

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nambatsuyoshi

July 20, 2021

1

Thank you!

Rainy season

The rainy season was over in Osaka three days ago.

The rainy season was over in Osaka ended three days ago.

It lasted 62 days.

This year's rainy season was the longest in the history of observation.

This year's rainy season was the longest in the history ofever observationed.

It gets particularly hot for ten days after finishing the rainy season.

It gets particularly hot for ten days after finishing the rainy season has finished.

In such a situation, the Tokyo Olympic games are going to start this week.

IAnd in such a situation, the Tokyo Olympic games are going to start this week.

However, it's not exciting at all.

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