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Jun 02

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Rainy Season

According to weather news, it is coming to be in rainy season in my region.
It says that it will be heavy and long rain from tomorrow to several days.
On the other hand it will be sunny and really hot today because of Foehn phenomenon.
I shouldn't forget to hang out the laundry, which I skipped yesterday.

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    June 13, 2021, 1:52 p.m.

    Thank you for detailed correcting!

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According to weather news, it is coming to be in rainy season in my region.

According to the weather newsreport, it is comgoing to be ina rainy season in my region.

Grammar Usage

According to weather news, ithere is comgoing to be ina rainy season in my region.

Grammar

It says that it will be heavy and long rain from tomorrow to several days.

It saysid that it will be heavy and long rain from tomorrow tostarting tomorrow, there will be long and heavy rain that will last for several days.

The weather report was already done, so you have to write "said" instead of "says".

Also, this might be an interesting read for you: https://dictionary.cambridge.org/grammar/british-grammar/adjectives-order
Grammar Stylistic

It says that ithere will be heavy and long rain from tomorrow to several days.

Grammar

On the other hand it will be sunny and really hot today because of Foehn phenomenon.

On the other hand, it will be sunny and really hot and sunny today because of the Foehn phenomenonwinds.

Usage Stylistic

On the other hand, it will be sunny and really hot today because of the Foehn phenomenon.

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I shouldn't forget to hang out the laundry, which I skipped yesterday.

I shouldn't forget to hang out the laundry out, which I skipped yesterday.

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