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kiwy

Jan 17

English

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Rainy and Cold

It was cloudy in the morning, a little cold. When I went to some offices to apply some documents in the afternoon, it started to rain and become colder. I travelled for several times by bike. However, all my applications were failed, so I felt sad.

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It was cloudy in the morning, a little cold.

It was a little cold and cloudy in the morning, a little cold.

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When I went to some offices to apply some documents in the afternoon, it started to rain and become colder.

When I went to some offices to applyrequest some documents in the afternoon, it started to rain and becomeget colder.

"request" you asked for the documents.

When I went to some offices to apply some documents in the afternoon, it started to rain and becomeit got colder.

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I travelled for several times by bike.

I travelled for several timesa lot by bike.

"I travelled a lot by bike," means that on that day you travelled by bike a lot. It doesn't really refer to other times here.

I travelled for several times by bike.

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However, all my applications were failed, so I felt sad.

However, all my applications were failrejected, so I felt sad.

However, all my applications were failrejected, so I felt sad.

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