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ponta 310 · May 23

Target Language - English

One of my favorite TV programs is "Professional." It closely covers a person who is outstanding in a certain field. The field is various, for example, a courier, a swordsmith, a YouTuber, a doctor, or a chef. It's interesting to know about a profession that I don't familiar with. I admire people who dedicate all their effort, whatever their job. I also think I have to work hard after watching the program.


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will_im_not 0 May 23, 2021
Professional
One of my favorite TV programs is "Professional."
It closely covers a person who is outstanding in a certain field.
The field is various, for example, a courier, a swordsmith, a YouTuber, a doctor, or a chef.

The field iss are various, for example, a courier, a swordsmith, a YouTuber, a doctor, or a chef.

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It's interesting to know about a profession that I don't familiar with.

It's interesting to knowlearn about a profession that I don''m not familiar with.

I admire people who dedicate all their effort, whatever their job.
I also think I have to work hard after watching the program.

Overall feedback & comment:

For the last sentence you could say, "Watching the program makes me want to work just as hard". What you wrote was fine though.
Comment added on 05/23/2021