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karasawa

Dec. 8, 2020

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Procrastination

I had booked a Private Lesson with Chris from 3am to 4am on Wednesday a fortnight ago, but I had worked on a college assignment until 3am the day before Wednesday and didn't get to bed until after 4am.
I woke up at 1pm the next morning, had a late lunch at home and was fiddling with my phone when I remembered that I had an English lesson booked, and when I looked at the clock it was already past 4am and the lesson was over.
I felt very sorry to Chris for not calling him and making him wait for an hour.
I thought I'd booked a private lesson with Chris from 3:00 to 5:00 tomorrow, but I'd booked two lessons, one from 1:00 to 2:00 and the other from 3:00 to 4:00, and now I had to kill an hour of my time between 2:00 and 3:00 somewhere in Yokohama.
I feel like I've been making a lot of mistakes lately due to the lack of sleep, and if it's my fault, I deserve it, but I don't want to bother my family and friends with my mistakes.
I'm going to go to bed early today and try not to lose any sleep.


2週間前に、水曜日の3時から4時のクリス先生のPrivate Lessonを予約していたが、水曜日の前日に大学の課題を夜中の3時までやっていて、寝たのが4時過ぎだった。
次の日の午後1時に目が覚め、家で遅めの昼食をとって、スマホをいじっていると、英語の授業を予約していたことを思い出し、時計を見ると4時をすでに過ぎていて、授業は終わっていた。
クリス先生に何も連絡をせず、1時間待たせてしまったことが、クリス先生に迷惑をかけてとても申し訳ないと思った。
明日はクリス先生のプライベートレッスンがあるが、3時から5時まで予約したつもりだったが、1時から2時と3時から4時までのレッスンを予約してしまっていて、2時から3時の1時間を横浜のどこかで、暇をつぶさなくてはならなくなってしまった。
最近、寝不足のせいかミスが多い気がする、自分が損するなら自業自得だが、自分のミスで家族や友人に迷惑をかけるの避けたい。
今日は早く寝て、寝不足にならないようにしようと思う。

Corrections

Procrastination

I had booked a Private Lesson with Chris from 3am to 4am on Wednesday a fortnight ago, but I had worked on a college assignment until 3am the day before Wednesday and didn't get to bed until after 4am.

"I had" is commonly written as "I'd".

I woke up at 1pm the next morning, had a late lunch at home and was fiddling with my phone when I remembered that I had an English lesson booked, and when I looked at the clock it was already past 4am, and the lesson was over.

I felt very sorry tofor Chris for not calling him and making him wait for an hour.

I thought I'd booked a private lesson with Chris from 3:00 to 5:00 tomorrow, but I'd already booked two lessons, one from 1:00 to 2:00 and the other from 3:00 to 4:00, and now I hadve to kill an hour of my time between 2:00 and 3:00 somewhere in Yokohama.

You could say "from 3:00 to 4:00" but another common way is to say "between 3 and 4".

I feel like I've been making a lot of mistakes lately due to the lack of sleep, and if it's my fault, I deserve it, but I don't want to bother my family and friends with my mistakes.

The "the" in "due to lack of sleep" might not be wrong, but I generally hear people say "due to lack of sleep" instead.

I'm going to go to bed early today and tryam trying not to lose any sleep.

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Great Job! Just a few corrections!

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karasawa

Dec. 10, 2020

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I appreciate it. thank you!!!

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karasawa

Dec. 10, 2020

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thank you for correcting my sentences !

Procrastination

I had booked a Private Lesson with Chris from 3am to 4am on Wednesday a fortnight ago, but I had worked on a college assignment until 3am the day before Wednesday and didn't get to bed until after 4am.

I had booked a Private Lesson with Chris from 3am to 4am on Wednesday a fortnight ago, but I had worked on a college assignment until 3am the day before Wednesday and didn't get to bed until after 4am.

I woke up at 1pm the next morning, had a late lunch at home and was fiddling with my phone when I remembered that I had an English lesson booked, and when I looked at the clock it was already past 4am and the lesson was over.

I woke up at 1pm the next morning, had a late lunch at home and was fiddling with my phone when I remembered that I had an English lesson booked, and when I looked at the clock it was already past 4am, and the lesson was over.

I felt very sorry to Chris for not calling him and making him wait for an hour.

I felt very sorry tofor Chris for not calling him and making him wait for an hour.

I thought I'd booked a private lesson with Chris from 3:00 to 5:00 tomorrow, but I'd booked two lessons, one from 1:00 to 2:00 and the other from 3:00 to 4:00, and now I had to kill an hour of my time between 2:00 and 3:00 somewhere in Yokohama.

I thought I'd booked a private lesson with Chris from 3:00 to 5:00 tomorrow, but I'd already booked two lessons, one from 1:00 to 2:00 and the other from 3:00 to 4:00, and now I hadve to kill an hour of my time between 2:00 and 3:00 somewhere in Yokohama.

I feel like I've been making a lot of mistakes lately due to the lack of sleep, and if it's my fault, I deserve it, but I don't want to bother my family and friends with my mistakes.

I feel like I've been making a lot of mistakes lately due to the lack of sleep, and if it's my fault, I deserve it, but I don't want to bother my family and friends with my mistakes.

I'm going to go to bed early today and try not to lose any sleep.

I'm going to go to bed early today and tryam trying not to lose any sleep.

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