Sept. 5, 2021
Practice: The Widespread Use of The Internet
The internet has brought about a wide variety of effects on our daily lives in 21th century. Some insist that it makes young people addicted to digital devices and causes serious damages on their eyes or brains. Despite of such negative aspects, we can't live without the internet any more. I'd like to discuss about how essential the internet is.
First, the technology allows us to communicate with people who live even thousands of kilometers far from your country simultaneously. It would have been nearly impossible to meet up with friends without telling the place and the time beforehand. Regarding language learning, it has become common for learners to find and talk with native tutors on the internet. Second, you can look up everything you want to know in detail. Enormous amount of information have been accumulated on the internet so that you can solve the problems with which most people are likely to be faced. Even if you travel abroad without local guides, it helps you to find minor tourism spots or affordable restaurants on the spot. Finally, access to the global information gives people an equal opportunity to become famous, apply for a job, or find a partner.
Practice: The Widespread Use of The Internet
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Practice: The Widespread Use of The Internet |
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The internet has brought about a wide variety of effects on our daily lives in 21th century. The internet has brought about a wide variety of |
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Some insist that it makes young people addicted to digital devices and causes serious damages on their eyes or brains. Some insist that it |
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Despite of such negative aspects, we can't live without the internet any more. Despite |
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I'd like to discuss about how essential the internet is. I'd like to discuss |
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First, the technology allows us to communicate with people who live even thousands of kilometers far from your country simultaneously. Firstly, the If you use "us" at first you have to keep using "us" the whole way through the sentence.
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It would have been nearly impossible to meet up with friends without telling the place and the time beforehand. It would |
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Regarding language learning, it has become common for learners to find and talk with native tutors on the internet. |
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Second, you can look up everything you want to know in detail. Secondly, you can now look up everything you want to know in detail. |
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Enormous amount of information have been accumulated on the internet so that you can solve the problems with which most people are likely to be faced. Enormous amount of information have been accumulated on the internet Once again, match "you" with "you."
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Even if you travel abroad without local guides, it helps you to find minor tourism spots or affordable restaurants on the spot.
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Finally, access to the global information gives people an equal opportunity to become famous, apply for a job, or find a partner. Finally, access to |
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