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Nov. 3, 2022

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I use a variety of applications for work. As I am currently working from home, I use Facebook to contact my coworkers and customers. Just like every remote worker, I also use Zoom for team meetings. It is completely free and very convenient. And of course, we cannot miss out Microsoft's apps such as Word, PowerPoint and Excel when it comes to necessary technologies for work. I think they are an integral part of virtually all office jobs.



What technology do you use when you study?
To me, my laptop is indispensable when it comes to studying. Instead of having a pile of notebooks and textbooks laying around my study table, I download all necessary textbooks’ in pdf form to my laptop and use Google Docs and Microsoft Word for note-taking. I also use my laptop to take online classes. Just like almost all online learners, I downloaded a communications platform called Zoom to my desktop in order to have video lessons with teachers.



What kinds of advertisements do you watch?


I usually do not deliberately look for advertisements, so I only encounter them as commercial breaks on television and Google ads when browsing websites and watching YouTube videos. But I follow some YouTube channels specifically for reviewing products such as clothes, make-up and skin care. These YouTubers are sometimes paid by certain companies to give good reviews for their products. So I consider this to be a type of advertisement too, and I enjoy watching it.



Where can you see advertisements?
I think we can see advertisements everywhere nowadays. You would certainly encounter random posters and banners hung on trees or electric poles when you travel somewhere or commute. Also, when you watch television, browse websites, scroll social media platforms, and even listen to music on mobile phones or computers, adverts keep popping up and sometimes become very irritating. I mean, it is impossible to avoid them.



Do you watch advertisements from the beginning to the end?


Most of the time, I would just wait for the skip-ad button to appear and click it as fast as I can. But rarely, if the adverts appear to be very aesthetic and eye-catching, I would watch them till the end. And part of such ads is for Japanese games, which feature astoundingly beautiful characters and majestic backgrounds.



Have you ever bought something because of its advertisement?


I would say yes if YouTubers reviewing sponsored products can consider a form of advertising. If my favorite YouTubers give great compliments to some products, I would be really tempted to purchase them, even though I know that they may be paid for this. This type of advertisement gives me a sense of credibility because I feel those YouTubers are like my friends who are recommending some of their favo

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pPlease review my essay.

I use a variety of applications for work.

As I am currently working from home, I use Facebook to contact my coworkers and customers.

Just like every other remote worker, I also use Zoom for team meetings.

It is completely free and very convenient.

And of course, we cannot miss out on Microsoft's apps such as Word, PowerPoint and Excel, when it comes to necessary technologies forich are all necessary for my work.

I think they are an integral part of virtually allny office jobs.

What kind of technology do you use when you study?

To me, my laptop is indispensable when it comes to studying.

Instead of having a pile of notebooks and textbooks laying around my study table, I download all necessary textbooks in pdf form to my laptop and use Google Docs and Microsoft Word for note-taking.

I also use my laptop to take online classes.

Just like almost all online learners, I downloaded a communications platform called Zoom to my desktop in order to have video lessons with teachers.

What kinds of advertisements do you watch?

I usually do not deliberately look for advertisements, so I only encounter them as commercial breaks on television and Google ads when browsing websites and watching YouTube videos.

But I follow some YouTube channels specifically for reviewing products such as clothes, make-up and skin care.

These YouTubers are sometimes paid by certain companies to give good reviews for their products.

So I consider this to be a type of advertisement too, andbut I enjoy watching it.

Where cando you see advertisements?

I think weyou can see advertisements everywhere nowadays.

"we" is correct but "you" sounds more natural

You would certainly encounter random posters and banners hung on trees or electric poles when you travel somewhere or commute.

Also, when you watch television, browse websites, scroll through social media platforms, and even listen to music on mobile phones or computers, adverts keep popping up and sometimes become very irritating.

I mean, it is impossible to avoid them.

Do you watch advertisements from the beginning to the end?

Most of the time, I would just wait for the skip-ad button to appear and click it as fast as I can.

But rarely, if the adverts appears to be very aestheticparticularly interesting and eye-catching, I would watch ithem till the end.

And part example of such ads iare the ones for Japanese games, which feature astoundingly beautiful characters and majestic backgrounds.

Have you ever bought something because of its advertisement?

I would say yes if YouTubers reviewing sponsored products can be considered a form of advertising.

If my favorite YouTubers give great compliments to somehighly recommend certain products, I would be really tempted to purchase them, even though I know that they may be paid forto do this.

This type of advertisement gives me a sense of credibility because I feel like those YouTubers are like my friends who are recommending some of their favorite products.

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maymaymay_

Nov. 5, 2022

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Thank you from the bottom of my heart.

please review my essay


pPlease review my essay.

I use a variety of applications for work.


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As I am currently working from home, I use Facebook to contact my coworkers and customers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Just like every remote worker, I also use Zoom for team meetings.


Just like every other remote worker, I also use Zoom for team meetings.

It is completely free and very convenient.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

And of course, we cannot miss out Microsoft's apps such as Word, PowerPoint and Excel when it comes to necessary technologies for work.


And of course, we cannot miss out on Microsoft's apps such as Word, PowerPoint and Excel, when it comes to necessary technologies forich are all necessary for my work.

I think they are an integral part of virtually all office jobs.


I think they are an integral part of virtually allny office jobs.

What technology do you use when you study?


What kind of technology do you use when you study?

To me, my laptop is indispensable when it comes to studying.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Instead of having a pile of notebooks and textbooks laying around my study table, I download all necessary textbooks’ in pdf form to my laptop and use Google Docs and Microsoft Word for note-taking.


Instead of having a pile of notebooks and textbooks laying around my study table, I download all necessary textbooks in pdf form to my laptop and use Google Docs and Microsoft Word for note-taking.

I also use my laptop to take online classes.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Just like almost all online learners, I downloaded a communications platform called Zoom to my desktop in order to have video lessons with teachers.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

What kinds of advertisements do you watch?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I usually do not deliberately look for advertisements, so I only encounter them as commercial breaks on television and Google ads when browsing websites and watching YouTube videos.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But I follow some YouTube channels specifically for reviewing products such as clothes, make-up and skin care.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

These YouTubers are sometimes paid by certain companies to give good reviews for their products.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

So I consider this to be a type of advertisement too, and I enjoy watching it.


So I consider this to be a type of advertisement too, andbut I enjoy watching it.

Where can you see advertisements?


Where cando you see advertisements?

I think we can see advertisements everywhere nowadays.


I think weyou can see advertisements everywhere nowadays.

"we" is correct but "you" sounds more natural

You would certainly encounter random posters and banners hung on trees or electric poles when you travel somewhere or commute.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Also, when you watch television, browse websites, scroll social media platforms, and even listen to music on mobile phones or computers, adverts keep popping up and sometimes become very irritating.


Also, when you watch television, browse websites, scroll through social media platforms, and even listen to music on mobile phones or computers, adverts keep popping up and sometimes become very irritating.

I mean, it is impossible to avoid them.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Do you watch advertisements from the beginning to the end?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Most of the time, I would just wait for the skip-ad button to appear and click it as fast as I can.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

But rarely, if the adverts appear to be very aesthetic and eye-catching, I would watch them till the end.


But rarely, if the adverts appears to be very aestheticparticularly interesting and eye-catching, I would watch ithem till the end.

And part of such ads is for Japanese games, which feature astoundingly beautiful characters and majestic backgrounds.


And part example of such ads iare the ones for Japanese games, which feature astoundingly beautiful characters and majestic backgrounds.

Have you ever bought something because of its advertisement?


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I would say yes if YouTubers reviewing sponsored products can consider a form of advertising.


I would say yes if YouTubers reviewing sponsored products can be considered a form of advertising.

If my favorite YouTubers give great compliments to some products, I would be really tempted to purchase them, even though I know that they may be paid for this.


If my favorite YouTubers give great compliments to somehighly recommend certain products, I would be really tempted to purchase them, even though I know that they may be paid forto do this.

This type of advertisement gives me a sense of credibility because I feel those YouTubers are like my friends who are recommending some of their favo


This type of advertisement gives me a sense of credibility because I feel like those YouTubers are like my friends who are recommending some of their favorite products.

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