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thinkmore

Dec. 20, 2020

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Playing Ring Fit Adventure

I bought Ring Fit Adventure at last Christmas. It's been out of stock for a long time, but I luckily found it on the way back home from grocery shopping. Playing Ring Fit Adventure is pretty tough. I was thinking of play it every day, but I couldn't. I mostly play two stages a day. At the beginning, my muscles were sore the next day. I played it 106 times until today. I've played it for 6 days in a row recently because I started playing rhythm dance mode. It's very fun to do it. I'm sure that I will play it tomorrow too.


去年のクリスマスにリングフィットアドベンチャーを買いました。 長い間に品切れでしたが、買い物から帰りに運良く見つけることができました。 リングフィットアドベンチャーをプレイするのはかなり大変です。 毎日プレイしようと思っていましたが、できませんでした。 私はだいたい1日に2つのステージをプレイします。 初めは翌日筋肉が痛かっです。 今日までに106日プレイしました。 最近リズムダンスモードを始めました。とても楽しいので6日連続でゲームをしています。 明日もプレイします。

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Playing Ring Fit Adventure

I bought Ring Fit Adventure at last Christmas.

It's been out of stock for a long time, but I luckily found it on the way back home from grocery shopping.

Playing Ring Fit Adventure is pretty tough.

I was thinking of playing it every day, but I couldn't.

or, "I was planning to play every day, but I couldn't"
the way you wrote it is how someone might say it when talking, but not how it would typically be written

I mostly play two stages a day.

At the beginning, my muscles were sore the next day.

I played it 106 times until ....

until what?

I've played it for 6 days in a row recently because I started playing rhythm dance mode.

It's very fun to do it.

I'm sure that I will play it tomorrow too.

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thinkmore

Dec. 20, 2020

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Thank you for the cirrections. I was going to write "until today." :)

Playing Ring Fit Adventure


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I bought Ring Fit Adventure at last Christmas.


I bought Ring Fit Adventure at last Christmas.

It's been out of stock for a long time, but I luckily found it on the way back home from grocery shopping.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

Playing Ring Fit Adventure is pretty tough.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I was thinking of play it every day, but I couldn't.


I was thinking of playing it every day, but I couldn't.

or, "I was planning to play every day, but I couldn't" the way you wrote it is how someone might say it when talking, but not how it would typically be written

I mostly play two stages a day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

At the beginning, my muscles were sore the next day.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I played it 106 times until.


I played it 106 times until ....

until what?

I've played it for 6 days in a row recently because I started playing rhythm dance mode.


I've played it for 6 days in a row recently because I started playing rhythm dance mode.

It's pretty fun to do it.


I'm sure that I will play it tomorrow too.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

It's very fun to do it.


This sentence has been marked as perfect!

I played it 106 times until today.


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