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thinkmore

Dec. 20, 2020

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Playing Ring Fit Adventure

I bought Ring Fit Adventure at last Christmas. It's been out of stock for a long time, but I luckily found it on the way back home from grocery shopping. Playing Ring Fit Adventure is pretty tough. I was thinking of play it every day, but I couldn't. I mostly play two stages a day. At the beginning, my muscles were sore the next day. I played it 106 times until today. I've played it for 6 days in a row recently because I started playing rhythm dance mode. It's very fun to do it. I'm sure that I will play it tomorrow too.


去年のクリスマスにリングフィットアドベンチャーを買いました。 長い間に品切れでしたが、買い物から帰りに運良く見つけることができました。 リングフィットアドベンチャーをプレイするのはかなり大変です。 毎日プレイしようと思っていましたが、できませんでした。 私はだいたい1日に2つのステージをプレイします。 初めは翌日筋肉が痛かっです。 今日までに106日プレイしました。 最近リズムダンスモードを始めました。とても楽しいので6日連続でゲームをしています。 明日もプレイします。

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Playing Ring Fit Adventure

I bought Ring Fit Adventure at last Christmas.

It's been out of stock for a long time, but I luckily found it on the way back home from grocery shopping.

Playing Ring Fit Adventure is pretty tough.

I was thinking of playing it every day, but I couldn't.

or, "I was planning to play every day, but I couldn't"
the way you wrote it is how someone might say it when talking, but not how it would typically be written

I mostly play two stages a day.

At the beginning, my muscles were sore the next day.

I played it 106 times until ....

until what?

I've played it for 6 days in a row recently because I started playing rhythm dance mode.

It's very fun to do it.

I'm sure that I will play it tomorrow too.

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thinkmore

Dec. 20, 2020

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Thank you for the cirrections. I was going to write "until today." :)

Playing Ring Fit Adventure

I bought Ring Fit Adventure at last Christmas.

I bought Ring Fit Adventure at last Christmas.

It's been out of stock for a long time, but I luckily found it on the way back home from grocery shopping.

Playing Ring Fit Adventure is pretty tough.

I was thinking of play it every day, but I couldn't.

I was thinking of playing it every day, but I couldn't.

I mostly play two stages a day.

At the beginning, my muscles were sore the next day.

I played it 106 times until.

I played it 106 times until ....

I've played it for 6 days in a row recently because I started playing rhythm dance mode.

I've played it for 6 days in a row recently because I started playing rhythm dance mode.

It's pretty fun to do it.

I'm sure that I will play it tomorrow too.

It's very fun to do it.

I played it 106 times until today.

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