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Jack

April 5, 2021

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Play Table Tennis.

My favorite spot is ping pong. The first time I knew of ping pong was in middle school. I remember that there was a cement ping pong table in front of my classroom. I often played ping pong when I got out of class. Because all of the living conditions were bad back then, we didn't have a professional table tennis bat, the ball net was just a row of bricks. Sometimes, we didn't even have a plank. We had to use our textbook as a bat to play it. I learned about how to play table tennis at that time. Later on, I went to a professional secondary school, where I could play table tennis very often. Therefore, my ball skills improved a lot. Since I attended work, it was not easy to find a place to play table tennis, so I rarely played it since then. Although I almost don't have a chance to play table tennis, I think my ball skill level doesn't drop a lot. If I have a chance, I think I can still play it well.
At the end of this passage, I'd like to share with your guys two ways to fix a flatted ball. One method is to put a ball in boiling water, and then it will become spherical shape by itself again. The other method is to use the back of a table tennis bat, slowly and carefully to squeeze the surface of the ball to fix it. But this method can only be used to fix a ball that has slight problems. If a ball is flat a lot, this method probably doesn't work.

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My favorite sport is ping pong.

The first time I knew ofheard about ping pong was in middle school.

I remember that there was a cement ping pong table in front of my classroom.

I often played ping pong when I got out of class.

Because all of the living conditions were bad back then, we didn't have a professional table tennis bat, and the ball net was just a row of bricks.

Sometimes, we didn't even have a plank.

We had to used our textbook as a bat to play it.

This is how I learned about how to play table tennis at that time.

Later on, I went to a professional secondary school, where I could play table tennis very oftena lot.

Since I attended workNow that I work full time, it whas not been easy to find a place to play table tennis, so I rarely played it since then.

Although I almost don't have a chancemany opportunities to play table tennis, I think my ball skill level doesn't drop a lots haven't dropped much.

If I have a chance, I think I can still play it well.

Alternative:
"Given the opportunity, I think I can still play well."

At the end of this passage, I'd like to will share with your guyseverybody two ways to fix a flatted ball.

One method is to put athe ball in boiling water, and then; it will become spherical shapeagain by itself again.

The other method is to use the back of a table tennis bat, to slowly and carefully to squeeze the surface of the ball to fix it.

But tThis method can only be used to fix a ball that has slight problems.

If a ball is flat a lot, this method probably doeswon't work.

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I learned a lot about table tennis. Thanks!

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Jack

April 9, 2021

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Thank you very much.

Play Table Tennis.

My favorite spot is ping pong.

My favorite sport is ping pong.

The first time I knew of ping pong was in middle school.

The first time I knew ofheard about ping pong was in middle school.

I remember that there was a cement ping pong table in front of my classroom.

I often played ping pong when I got out of class.

Because all of the living conditions were bad back then, we didn't have a professional table tennis bat, the ball net was just a row of bricks.

Because all of the living conditions were bad back then, we didn't have a professional table tennis bat, and the ball net was just a row of bricks.

Sometimes, we didn't even have a plank.

We had to use our textbook as a bat to play it.

We had to used our textbook as a bat to play it.

I learned about how to play table tennis at that time.

This is how I learned about how to play table tennis at that time.

Later on, I went to a professional secondary school, where I could play table tennis very often.

Later on, I went to a professional secondary school, where I could play table tennis very oftena lot.

Therefore, my ball skills improved a lot.

Since I attended work, it was not easy to find a place to play table tennis, so I rarely played it since then.

Since I attended workNow that I work full time, it whas not been easy to find a place to play table tennis, so I rarely played it since then.

Although I almost don't have a chance to play table tennis, I think my ball skill level doesn't drop a lot.

Although I almost don't have a chancemany opportunities to play table tennis, I think my ball skill level doesn't drop a lots haven't dropped much.

If I have a chance, I think I can still play it well.

If I have a chance, I think I can still play it well.

At the end of this passage, I'd like to share with your guys two ways to fix a flatted ball.

At the end of this passage, I'd like to will share with your guyseverybody two ways to fix a flatted ball.

One method is to put a ball in boiling water, and then it will become spherical shape by itself again.

One method is to put athe ball in boiling water, and then; it will become spherical shapeagain by itself again.

The other method is to use the back of a table tennis bat, slowly and carefully to squeeze the surface of the ball to fix it.

The other method is to use the back of a table tennis bat, to slowly and carefully to squeeze the surface of the ball to fix it.

But this method can only be used to fix a ball that has slight problems.

But tThis method can only be used to fix a ball that has slight problems.

If a ball is flat a lot, this method probably doesn't work.

If a ball is flat a lot, this method probably doeswon't work.

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