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Planning a trip to Nagano

thinkmore 0 · Nov. 1

Target Language - English

I’m planning to go to Nagano next week. I will just relax at a hotel and sightsee nearby places. I like to bathe in a hot spring. The hotel has a hot spring on a stream. The picture of the hot spring was beautiful, so I decided to book the hotel.

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来週長野に旅行に行きます。ホテルでのんびりすごしたり、近場を観光する予定です。私は温泉に入るのが好きです。そのホテルは川沿いの露天風呂があって、その写真がすごく素敵だったのでそのホテルを予約しました。

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nsegal 0 Nov. 1, 2020
Planning a trip to Nagano
I’m planning to go to Nagano next week.
I will just relax at a hotel and sightsee nearby places.
I like to bathe in a hot spring.

I like to bathe in a hot springs.

The hotel has a hot spring on a stream.

The hotel has a hot spring onby a stream.

Even if the hot spring is on top of the stream, we would write "by."
The picture of the hot spring was beautiful, so I decided to book the hotel.

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jaicoholic 0 Nov. 1, 2020

Enjoy your trip!

Enjoy your trip!
thinkmore 0 Nov. 1, 2020

Thank you!

Thank you!
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nschafer888 0 Nov. 1, 2020
I’m planning to go to Nagano next week.
I will just relax at a hotel and sightsee nearby places.

I will'm just going to relax at a hotel and do some sightseeing in nearby places.

I like to bathe in a hot spring.

I'd like to bathe in a hot spring.

The hotel has a hot spring on a stream.

The hotel where I'll be staying has a hot spring oin a stream.

The picture of the hot spring was beautiful, so I decided to book the hotel.

The picture of theis hot spring waslooked beautiful, so I decidedthat is why I chose to book theis hotel.

thinkmore 0 Nov. 1, 2020

Thank you! ^^

Thank you! ^^