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ponta

Sept. 25, 2021

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Paid Friends

Today, I got a flier about rental friends. It said you can rent friends, but I wondered the friends were literally friends. I think friends are out of concern interest, so they are not friends as far as you pay for them; the relationship is limited. In addition, I can't imagine the feeling of whom works as a rental friend. While they behave as a friend of a client, do they think and treat the client as their friends? I guess they don't, so I think rental friends are weird and incomprehensible.

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Paid Friends

Today, I gotreceived a flier aboutfor rental friends.

It saidoffered for you canto rent friends, but I wondered if the friends were literally friends.

I think friends arebecome friends out of concermmon interest, so they are not friends as farse ones can't be friends, as you pay for them; the relationship is limited.

In addition, I can't imagine the feeling of those whom works as a rental friends.

Pretty sure 'whom' is incorrect here. You can revise the sentence to '...he who works as a rental friend' but not '...him who works as a rental friend,' and that's how you can tell.

While they behave as a friend of athe client, do they think about and treat their client as theiractual friends?

I guess they don't, so I think. I find the idea of rental friends are weird and incomprehensible.

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Nice writing!

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ponta

Sept. 27, 2021

217

Thank you!

Paid Friends

Today, I got a flier about rental friends.

Today, I gotreceived a flier aboutfor rental friends.

It said you can rent friends, but I wondered the friends were literally friends.

It saidoffered for you canto rent friends, but I wondered if the friends were literally friends.

I think friends are out of concern interest, so they are not friends as far as you pay for them; the relationship is limited.

I think friends arebecome friends out of concermmon interest, so they are not friends as farse ones can't be friends, as you pay for them; the relationship is limited.

In addition, I can't imagine the feeling of whom works as a rental friend.

In addition, I can't imagine the feeling of those whom works as a rental friends.

While they behave as a friend of a client, do they think and treat the client as their friends?

While they behave as a friend of athe client, do they think about and treat their client as theiractual friends?

I guess they don't, so I think rental friends are weird and incomprehensible.

I guess they don't, so I think. I find the idea of rental friends are weird and incomprehensible.

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