Today, I went out with my three friends and enjoyed all daythe whole day with them. Today, I went out with my three friends and enjoyed the whole day with them.

Today, I went out with my three of my friends and enjoyed allthe day. Today, I went out with three of my friends and enjoyed the day.

'my three friends' is a bit unnatural, because it sounds like you only have three friends. You could also say 'I went out with three friends.'

The beginning wasWe started very early; I woke up at 4 AM and left my home 30 minutes later. We started very early; I woke up at 4 AM and left my home 30 minutes later.

I use a motorbike for transportation, so t. There were no cars at such an early time, thenso it was brisquick for me to drive. I use a motorbike for transportation. There were no cars at such an early time, so it was quick for me to drive.

Instead of "so it was quick for me to drive" you could write "it was a brisk drive for me."

I used a motorbike for transportation, soince there were no cars at such an early time, then it was brisk for me to drive. I used a motorbike for transportation, since there were no cars at such an early time.

Not sure about what you mean by 'then it was brisk for me to drive.' Did you mean (riding the motorbike) 'was faster than driving?'

At fFirst, we visited a fish market at 6 AM. First we visited a fish market at 6 AM.

After that, we enjoyed breakfast; w. We choose somea few different kinds of fish and, bought rice, and made an assorted seafood rice bowl. After that, we enjoyed breakfast. We choose a few different kinds of fish, bought rice, and made an assorted seafood rice bowl.

After that, we enjoyed breakfast; we choose somedifferent kinds of fish and bought rice, and made an assorted seafood rice bowl. After that, we enjoyed breakfast; we choose different kinds of fish and bought rice, and made an assorted seafood rice bowl.

Next, we went to Matsushima, whereich is said one of the three most scenic spots in Japan. Next, we went to Matsushima, which is said one of the three most scenic spots in Japan.

Next, we went to Matsushima, whereich is said to be one of the three most scenic spots in Japan. Next, we went to Matsushima, which is said to be one of the three most scenic spots in Japan.

We climbed a small mountain, and the sightseeing was really nice from there. We climbed a small mountain, and the sightseeing was really nice from there.

We climbed a small mountain and the sightseeingview was really nice from there. We climbed a small mountain and the view was really nice from there.

sightseeing is not usually used to describe the scenery.

The road was along with the coast, so it was also pleasant to drive there. The road was along the coast, so it was also pleasant to drive there.

'The road ran along the cost' is also fine.

It was surprising that it was still in the morning even we had done thall those activities. It was surprising that it was still in the morning even we had done all those activities.

It was surprising that it was still in the morning even after we had done the activities. It was surprising that it was still in the morning even after we had done the activities.