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Binh

Jan. 10, 2022

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New year's resolutions

New year's resolution, never in my whole life, did I make one until recently. In Vietnam, right before the new year, we shoot fireworks and, maybe, make a resolution. I unsure about this topic is because I never stay up late enough to watch the firework or make a resolution. Hitherto, I make a resolution at my school's meeting. It's a really half-ass resolution due to the fact that I didn't prepare much up until that point. My shitty resolution won't make you happy so unto the next topic.

When should you stop saying 'happy new year'? I don't think there is a satisfactory answer to this question. But I'm going to give my opinion anyway. There are two situations: online and offline. Let's talk about the former one first. I think you should stop saying 'happy new year' when they don't text you back at all more than three times. I'm confident that they don't care about your greeting. The latter case is a bit more tricky. Usually, people will still respond to your 'happy new year' since they don't want to come across as discourteous regardless of they are happy to hear it or not. I don't think a 'happy new year' is bad so keep at it, someone will eventually appreciate your 'happy new year'.

A 'happy new year' to me is just a conversation opener so unless you hate conversing, there's no reason to end it. :))


<p>'unto' in the last sentence of the first paragraph is intentional btw :)). This is a pretty archaic term though so I'm unsure if it's correct or not :))</p>

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New year's resolutions

New year's resolution, never in my whole life, did I make one until recently.

I had never made one before in my entire life, until recently.

In Vietnam, right before the new year, we shoot fireworks and, maybe, make a resolution.

I am unsure about this topic is because I never stay up late enough to watch the fireworks or make a resolution.

Hitherto, I makde a resolution at my school's meeting.

It's a really a half-assed resolution due to the fact that I didn't prepare much up until that point.

MSo my shitty resolution won't make you happy so unto the next topic.

When should you stop saying 'happy new year'?

I don't think there is a satisfactory answer to this question.

But I'm going to give my opinion anyway.

There are two situations: online and offline.

Let's talk about the former one first.

I think you should stop saying 'happy new year' when they don't text you back at all more than three times.

I'm confident that they don't care about your greeting.

The latter case is a bit more tricky.

Usually, people will still respond to your 'happy new year' since they don't want to come across as discourteous, regardless ofif/(of weather) they are happy to hear it or not.

I don't think a 'happy new year' is bad so keep at it, s. Someone will eventually appreciate your 'happy new year'.

A 'h'Happy new year' to me is just a conversation opener, so unless you hate conversing, there's no reason to end it.

:))

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First of all, thanks for responding to my prompt. Next, you wrote pretty well. Keep it up!😊👏

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Binh

Jan. 11, 2022

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Thank you, grammarly.com doesn't detect my tense mistakes unless I go premium :))

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Binh

Jan. 11, 2022

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Thank you, grammarly.com doesn't detect my tense mistakes unless I go premium :))

NI'd never made a new year's resolution, never in my whole life, did I make one untilbut that changed recently.

In Vietnam, right before the new year, we shoot fireworks and, maybe, make a resolution.

'we shoot fireworks and possibly make a resolution.' also works.

I unsure about this topic is because I never stay up late enough to watch the fireworks or make a resolution.

'or to make resolutions'

HithertoUp until now, I make a resolution at my school's meeting.

no one writes 'Hitherto' anymore. not since the 1800s! you can write 'Previously', or 'Until now' instead.

It' was always a really half-assed resolution due to the fact that I didn't prepare much up until that point.

or, 'due to the fact i didn't do much preparation beforehand.'
'due to the fact I made up resolutions in the spur of the moment'

My shitty resolution woisn't make you happyeven worth mentioning so uonto the next topic.

'so let's move on to the next topic'

WhenHow soon after new years should you stop saying 'happy new year'?

But I'm going to give my opinion anyway.

Don't start a sentence with 'But' when writing. It's just wrong.

You could combine it with the sentence before with a comma:
I don't think there is a satisfactory answer to this question, but I'm going to write my opinion anyway.'

'I'll state my opinion anyway'
'I'll give my opinion all the same'

There are two different situations: online and offline.

Let's talk about the former one first.

'Let's discuss the former one first'

I think you should stop saying 'hHappy new year' when they don't text you back at all more than three times in a row.

I'mAt this point you can confidently assume that they don't care about your greeting.

The latter case isOffline greetings are a bit more tricky.

Mentioning the later many sentences after specifying the former and the latter isn't right. It's better just to remind people.

Usually, people will still respond to your 'happy new year'greeting since they don't want to come across as discourteousimpolite, regardless of whether they are happy to hear it or not.

'discourteous' is a mouthful! impolite is more common.

I don't think athat saying 'hHappy new year' is bad, so keep at it, someone will eventually appreciate your 'happy new year'greeting.

A 'h'Happy new year' to me is just a conversation opener so unless you hate conversing, there's no reason to endnot to say it.

:))

I've heard the second bracket in :)) is supposed to be a double chin! :))

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Well done! Happy new year! I added a few possibilities. Keep it up.

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Binh

Jan. 11, 2022

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The double chin fact is intriguing. And, I love your paraphrasing. Thank you and happy new year :))

New year's resolutions

New year's resolution, never in my whole life, did I make one until recently.

NI'd never made a new year's resolution, never in my whole life, did I make one untilbut that changed recently.

New year's resolution, never in my whole life, did I make one until recently.

In Vietnam, right before the new year, we shoot fireworks and, maybe, make a resolution.

In Vietnam, right before the new year, we shoot fireworks and, maybe, make a resolution.

I unsure about this topic is because I never stay up late enough to watch the firework or make a resolution.

I unsure about this topic is because I never stay up late enough to watch the fireworks or make a resolution.

I am unsure about this topic is because I never stay up late enough to watch the fireworks or make a resolution.

Hitherto, I make a resolution at my school's meeting.

HithertoUp until now, I make a resolution at my school's meeting.

Hitherto, I makde a resolution at my school's meeting.

It's a really half-ass resolution due to the fact that I didn't prepare much up until that point.

It' was always a really half-assed resolution due to the fact that I didn't prepare much up until that point.

It's a really a half-assed resolution due to the fact that I didn't prepare much up until that point.

My shitty resolution won't make you happy so unto the next topic.

My shitty resolution woisn't make you happyeven worth mentioning so uonto the next topic.

MSo my shitty resolution won't make you happy so unto the next topic.

When should you stop saying 'happy new year'?

WhenHow soon after new years should you stop saying 'happy new year'?

I don't think there is a satisfactory answer to this question.

But I'm going to give my opinion anyway.

But I'm going to give my opinion anyway.

There are two situations: online and offline.

There are two different situations: online and offline.

Let's talk about the former one first.

Let's talk about the former one first.

I think you should stop saying 'happy new year' when they don't text you back at all more than three times.

I think you should stop saying 'hHappy new year' when they don't text you back at all more than three times in a row.

I'm confident that they don't care about your greeting.

I'mAt this point you can confidently assume that they don't care about your greeting.

The latter case is a bit more tricky.

The latter case isOffline greetings are a bit more tricky.

Usually, people will still respond to your 'happy new year' since they don't want to come across as discourteous regardless of they are happy to hear it or not.

Usually, people will still respond to your 'happy new year'greeting since they don't want to come across as discourteousimpolite, regardless of whether they are happy to hear it or not.

Usually, people will still respond to your 'happy new year' since they don't want to come across as discourteous, regardless ofif/(of weather) they are happy to hear it or not.

I don't think a 'happy new year' is bad so keep at it, someone will eventually appreciate your 'happy new year'.

I don't think athat saying 'hHappy new year' is bad, so keep at it, someone will eventually appreciate your 'happy new year'greeting.

I don't think a 'happy new year' is bad so keep at it, s. Someone will eventually appreciate your 'happy new year'.

A 'happy new year' to me is just a conversation opener so unless you hate conversing, there's no reason to end it.

A 'h'Happy new year' to me is just a conversation opener so unless you hate conversing, there's no reason to endnot to say it.

A 'h'Happy new year' to me is just a conversation opener, so unless you hate conversing, there's no reason to end it.

:))

:))

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