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Napoleon III, Meiji Emperor, and Shogunate (3)

The Meiji Emperor won another two important foreign wars with big neighborhood countries. They were the first Sino-Japan war (1894-1895) and Russo-Japanese War (1904-1905).

Western countries gradually accepted Japan as their alliance. In 1900, they even invited Japan to join a Military action in China we named Eight-Nation Alliance.

During the period of Emperor Meiji the Great. He was forced to sign unfair agreements opening to western countries; defeated the Shogunate and made the emperor in Japan to be with real power, their ancestors have been living in a lonely palace for over 1,000 years; won two foreign wars and won back an equal position with western countries.

One more my thought about Meiji: the Meiji Restoration is not only aiming to modernize and industrialize Japan but also a revolution to the long-history imperial family, he wanted to catch the golden opportunity to win real power. He achieved two things in one stroke.

From what Meiji has done, it seems he never stopped for a while and has experienced so many critical events; he won every time, however.

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Napoleon III, the Meiji Emperor, and the Shogunate (3)

The Meiji Emperor won another two important foreign wars withwars against big neighborhooding countries.

They were the first Sino-Japan war (1894-1895) and the Russo-Japanese War (1904-1905).

Western countries gradually accepted Japan as their alliancey.

また、

Western countries gradually accepted Japan into their alliance.

In 1900, they even invited Japan to join a Mmilitary action in China we named the Eight-Nation Alliance.

During the period of Emperor Meiji the Great.

This is a sentence fragment so I deleted it and added it to the next line.

HDuring the time of Emperor Meiji the Great, he was forced to sign unfair agreements opening Japan to wWestern countries;, defeated the Shogunate and madgave the emperor in Japan to be withposition of Emperor real power, their. His ancestors haved been living in a lonely palace for over 1,000 years; won but not any more. With the winning of two foreign wars , Japand won back an equal position with wWestern countries.

OI have one more my thought about Meiji: the Meiji Restoration isdid not only aiming to modernize and industrialize Japan but it also served as a revolution to the long- history iof the Imperial family, h. He wanted to catch the golden opportunity to win real power.

とても面白そうです。

This is past tense since it happened over 100 years ago.

He achieved two things in one stroke.

From what Meiji has doneaccomplished, it seems he never stopped even for a whilemoment and hathus experienced so many critical events; h. He won every time, however.

そうですね。

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とても面白い歴史ですね。教えてくれてありがとうございました。そして、今回も上手に書けています!

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Scarlett_farther

April 1, 2023

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あなたはたくさんのことを教えてくれて、ありがとうございます。:ー)

Napoleon III, Meiji Emperor, and Shogunate (3)

The Meiji Emperor won another two important foreign wars with the big neighborhooduring countries.

They were the first Sino-Japan war (1894-1895) and the Russoian-Japanese War (1904-1905).

Western countries gradually accepted Japan as their alliance.y

In 1900, they even invited Japan to join a Military action in China which we named Eight-Nation Alliance.

During the period of Emperor Meiji the Great.

He was forced to sign unfairdiscriminatory agreements opening toinviting western countries; he defeated the Shogunate and made the emperor in Japan to be witha real power, t. Their ancestors who have been living in a lonely palace for over 1,000 years;, won two foreign wars and won back an equal position with the western countries.

One more my thought about Meiji: the Meiji Restoration is not only aiming to modernize and industrialize Japan but to also a revolution toise the long-historystanding imperial family, and he wanted to catchuse the golden opportunity to win real power.

He achieved two things in one stroke.

From what Meiji has done, it seems he never stopped for a while and hasand experienced so many critical events; which he won every time, however.

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Scarlett_farther

March 30, 2023

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thank you for your corrections! :-)

Napoleon III, Meiji Emperor, and Shogunate (3)

The Meiji Emperor won another two important foreign wars with big neighborhooding countries.

They were the first the Sino-Japan war (1894-1895) and the Russo-Japanese War (1904-1905).

Western countries gradually accepted Japan as part of their alliance.

In 1900, they even invited Japan to join a Mmilitary acoalition in China we named the Eight-Nation Alliance.

During the period of Emperor Meiji the Great.,

Hhe was forced to sign unfair agreements opening to western countries;, defeated the Shogunate, and madgave the emperor in Japan to be with real power, t. Their ancestors have been living in a lonely palace for over 1,000 years;, won two foreign wars, and won back an equal position with western countries.

One more my thought about Meiji: the Meiji Restoration is not only aiminged to modernize and industrialize Japan but also ato revolution toize the long- history of the imperial family, h. He wanted to catch the golden opportunity to win real power.

From what Meiji has done, it seems he never stopped for a while and hasand experienced so many critical events; h. He won every time, however.

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Scarlett_farther

March 30, 2023

1

thank you very much! : -)

Napoleon III, Meiji Emperor, and Shogunate (3)

Napoleon III, Meiji Emperor, and Shogunate (3)

Napoleon III, the Meiji Emperor, and the Shogunate (3)

The Meiji Emperor won another two important foreign wars with big neighborhood countries.

The Meiji Emperor won another two important foreign wars with the big neighborhooduring countries.

The Meiji Emperor won another two important foreign wars with big neighborhooding countries.

The Meiji Emperor won another two important foreign wars withwars against big neighborhooding countries.

They were the first Sino-Japan war (1894-1895) and Russo-Japanese War (1904-1905).

They were the first Sino-Japan war (1894-1895) and the Russoian-Japanese War (1904-1905).

They were the first the Sino-Japan war (1894-1895) and the Russo-Japanese War (1904-1905).

They were the first Sino-Japan war (1894-1895) and the Russo-Japanese War (1904-1905).

Western countries gradually accepted Japan as their alliance.

Western countries gradually accepted Japan as their alliance.y

Western countries gradually accepted Japan as part of their alliance.

Western countries gradually accepted Japan as their alliancey.

In 1900, they even invited Japan to join a Military action in China we named Eight-Nation Alliance.

In 1900, they even invited Japan to join a Military action in China which we named Eight-Nation Alliance.

In 1900, they even invited Japan to join a Mmilitary acoalition in China we named the Eight-Nation Alliance.

In 1900, they even invited Japan to join a Mmilitary action in China we named the Eight-Nation Alliance.

During the period of Emperor Meiji the Great.

During the period of Emperor Meiji the Great.,

During the period of Emperor Meiji the Great.

He was forced to sign unfair agreements opening to western countries; defeated the Shogunate and made the emperor in Japan to be with real power, their ancestors have been living in a lonely palace for over 1,000 years; won two foreign wars and won back an equal position with western countries.

He was forced to sign unfairdiscriminatory agreements opening toinviting western countries; he defeated the Shogunate and made the emperor in Japan to be witha real power, t. Their ancestors who have been living in a lonely palace for over 1,000 years;, won two foreign wars and won back an equal position with the western countries.

Hhe was forced to sign unfair agreements opening to western countries;, defeated the Shogunate, and madgave the emperor in Japan to be with real power, t. Their ancestors have been living in a lonely palace for over 1,000 years;, won two foreign wars, and won back an equal position with western countries.

HDuring the time of Emperor Meiji the Great, he was forced to sign unfair agreements opening Japan to wWestern countries;, defeated the Shogunate and madgave the emperor in Japan to be withposition of Emperor real power, their. His ancestors haved been living in a lonely palace for over 1,000 years; won but not any more. With the winning of two foreign wars , Japand won back an equal position with wWestern countries.

From what Meiji has done, it seems he never stopped for a while and has experienced so many critical events; he won every time, however.

From what Meiji has done, it seems he never stopped for a while and hasand experienced so many critical events; which he won every time, however.

From what Meiji has done, it seems he never stopped for a while and hasand experienced so many critical events; h. He won every time, however.

From what Meiji has doneaccomplished, it seems he never stopped even for a whilemoment and hathus experienced so many critical events; h. He won every time, however.

One more my thought about Meiji: the Meiji Restoration is not only aiming to modernize and industrialize Japan but also a revolution to the long-history imperial family, he wanted to catch the golden opportunity to win real power.

One more my thought about Meiji: the Meiji Restoration is not only aiming to modernize and industrialize Japan but to also a revolution toise the long-historystanding imperial family, and he wanted to catchuse the golden opportunity to win real power.

One more my thought about Meiji: the Meiji Restoration is not only aiminged to modernize and industrialize Japan but also ato revolution toize the long- history of the imperial family, h. He wanted to catch the golden opportunity to win real power.

OI have one more my thought about Meiji: the Meiji Restoration isdid not only aiming to modernize and industrialize Japan but it also served as a revolution to the long- history iof the Imperial family, h. He wanted to catch the golden opportunity to win real power.

He achieved two things in one stroke.

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