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What's your favorite winter memory?
My winter memory

As time goes by, my memories about winter become less and less, because Now I live in a coastal city, where the winter is just like the summer, compared to the little town I used to live in. My memory about winter seems to fade away. However, my favorite winter is always located in a secret place in my mind and I will never forget it.
I was a little boy then, during that winter I was on my vacation, all of my little friends in town came out and played all around that town every day, we climbed the hill, explored the cave, played fire crack, had a snow fight, etc. I remember I was happy every day during that winter, however, I think I will return to that town again because it has been rebuilt as a tourists destination, all of the houses in that town have changed their shapes and I can't recognize any at all. I think not only my favorite winter but also my favorite town will stay in my memory forever.

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As time goes by, my memories about winter become less and lessfewer and fewer, because Nnow I live in a coastal city, where the winter is just like the summer, comparas opposed to the little town I used to live in.

I assume you're saying that the winters where you live now are different from the winters where you used to live?

My memoryies about winter seems to fade away.

However, my favorite winter memory is always located in a secret place in my mind and I will never forget it.

What you wrote isn't really wrong, but saying "my favorite winter memory is..." is more specific and sounds more natural

I was a little boy then, d. During that winter I was on my vacation, and all of my little friends in town came out and played all around that town every day, w. We climbed the hills, explored the caves, played fire crackers, had a snow fights, etc.

I remember I was happy every day during that winter, h. However, I think I will return to that town again because it has been rebuilt as a tourists destination, a. All of the houses in that town have changed their shapes and I can't recognize any at all.

I think not only my favorite winter but also my favorite town will stay in my memory forever.

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That sounds like a fun winter! This was well-written, there were just a few small changes to make!

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yyq90

Dec. 12, 2021

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As time goes by, my memories about winter become less and lessfewer and fewer, because Nnow I live in a coastal city, where the winter is just like the summer, comparas opposed to the little town I used to live in.

I assume you're saying that the winters where you live now are different from the winters where you used to live?

Thank you, yes

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yyq90

Dec. 12, 2021

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However, my favorite winter memory is always located in a secret place in my mind and I will never forget it.

What you wrote isn't really wrong, but saying "my favorite winter memory is..." is more specific and sounds more natural

Thank you

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My winter memorymemories of winter

As time goes by, my memories about winter become less and less, because Nfewer. And now I live in a coastal city, where the winter is just like the summer, compared to in the little town I used to live in.

My memoryies about winter seems to be fadeing away.

However, my favorite winter is alwaymemory is located in a secret place in my mind and I will never forget it.

I was a little boy then, d. During that winter I was on my vacation, and all of my little friends in town came out and we played all around thate town every day, w. We climbed the hills, explored the caves, played with fire crackers, had a snow fight, etc.

I remember I was happy every day during that winter, h. However, I don't think I will return to that town again because it has been rebuilt as a tourists destination, and all of the houses in that townthere have changed their shapes and. Now I can't recognize any of it at all.

I think that not only my favorite winter but also my favorite town will stayremain in my memory forever.

My winter memory

My winter memorymemories of winter

As time goes by, my memories about winter become less and less, because Now I live in a coastal city in southern China, where the winter is just like the summer, compared to the little town I used to live in.

My memory about winter seems to fade away.

My memoryies about winter seems to be fadeing away.

My memoryies about winter seems to fade away.

However, my favorite winter is always located in a secret place in my mind and I will never forget it.

However, my favorite winter is alwaymemory is located in a secret place in my mind and I will never forget it.

However, my favorite winter memory is always located in a secret place in my mind and I will never forget it.

I was a little boy then, during that winter I was on my vacation, all of my little friends in town came out and play all around that town everyday, we climbed the hill, explored the cave on the mountain, played fire crack, had a snow fight, etc.

I remember I was happy every day during that winter, however, I think I will return to that town again because it has been rebuilt as a tourists destination, all of the houses in that town have changed their shapes and I can't recognize any at all.

I remember I was happy every day during that winter, h. However, I don't think I will return to that town again because it has been rebuilt as a tourists destination, and all of the houses in that townthere have changed their shapes and. Now I can't recognize any of it at all.

I remember I was happy every day during that winter, h. However, I think I will return to that town again because it has been rebuilt as a tourists destination, a. All of the houses in that town have changed their shapes and I can't recognize any at all.

I think not only my favorite winter but also my favorite town will stay in my memory forever.

I think that not only my favorite winter but also my favorite town will stayremain in my memory forever.

I was a little boy then, during that winter I was on my vacation, all of my little friends in town came out and played all around that town everyday, we climbed the hill, explored the cave, played fire crack, had a snow fight, etc.

As time goes by, my memories about winter become less and less, because Now I live in a coastal city, where the winter is just like the summer, compared to the little town I used to live in.

As time goes by, my memories about winter become less and less, because Nfewer. And now I live in a coastal city, where the winter is just like the summer, compared to in the little town I used to live in.

As time goes by, my memories about winter become less and lessfewer and fewer, because Nnow I live in a coastal city, where the winter is just like the summer, comparas opposed to the little town I used to live in.

I was a little boy then, during that winter I was on my vacation, all of my little friends in town came out and played all around that town every day, we climbed the hill, explored the cave, played fire crack, had a snow fight, etc.

I was a little boy then, d. During that winter I was on my vacation, and all of my little friends in town came out and we played all around thate town every day, w. We climbed the hills, explored the caves, played with fire crackers, had a snow fight, etc.

I was a little boy then, d. During that winter I was on my vacation, and all of my little friends in town came out and played all around that town every day, w. We climbed the hills, explored the caves, played fire crackers, had a snow fights, etc.

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