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gustavofnando

Jun 09

English

1 min read

my town

I live in the city of Caruaru in the state of Pernambuco in the northeast Brazil.
It is an average city with 300 thousand inhabitants.
It's really hot in summer and sometime even if in winter too.
I really hate hot weather because i have rhinitis and goes really bad in summer. Also I don't like sweating that much.
I wish one day live in the south of brazil because i like low temperatures.

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I live in the city of Caruaru in the state of Pernambuco in the northeast Brazil.

I live in the city of Caruaru in the state of Pernambuco in the northeast Brazil.

You can also say "I live in the city of Caruaru in the state of Pernambuco in the northeast of Brazil".
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I live in the city of Caruaru in the state of Pernambuco in the northeast Brazil.

You can also say "in northeastern Brazil"

It is an average city with 300 thousand inhabitants.

It is an average sized city with 300 thousand inhabitants.

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It is an average city with 300 thousand,000 inhabitants.

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It's really hot in summer and sometime even if in winter too.

It's really hot in summer and sometimes even if in winter too.

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I really hate hot weather because i have rhinitis and goes really bad in summer.

I really hate hot weather because iI have rhinitis and goeit gets really bad in summer.

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I really hate hot weather because i have rhinitis and goes really bad in summer.

"rhinitis" is not commonly used. I'd say "allergies"
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Also I don't like sweating that much.

I wish one day live in the south of brazil because i like low temperatures.

I wish to one day live in the south of bBrazil because iI like low temperatures.

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