Aug. 25, 2021
My Tip for Waking Up Early
When I have to wake up early, I open the curtain near my bed before I sleep. By doing so, the sunlight disturbs my sleep as the day dawn. In addition, opening the window slightly is also effective because sounds such as mail carriers' bike sounds make me awaken. However, the best way is to go to bed earlier and set a lot of noisy alarms.
My Tip for Waking Up Early
When I have to wake up early, I open the curtain near my bed before I sleep.
By doing so, the sunlight disturbs my sleep as the day dawns.
In addition, opening the window slightly is also effective because sounds such as mail carriers' bike sounds mwake me awaken[up].
Either 'wake me' or 'wake me up' is more natural hear than 'make me awaken'.
However, the best wastrategy is to go to bed earlier and set a lot of noisy alarms.
This sentence is okay, it's just clearer if you either contextualise what you mean by 'way', eg. 'the best way to wake up early' OR use a more specific word like strategy. Hope that makes sense!
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This is a great piece of writing! I'm awful at waking up early but maybe I should try your tip ;)
Aug. 27, 2021
Thank you for your corrections. I hope this tip works!
My Tip for Waking Up Early
When I have to wake up early, I open the curtain near my bed before I sleep.
By doing so, the sunlight disturbs my sleep as the day dawns.
In addition, opening the window slightly is also effective because sounds such as mail carriers' bike sounds make me awaken.
The sentence is okay, but "make me awaken" is very awkward. I would probably just write "wake me up."
However, the best way is to go to bed earlier and set a lot of noisy alarms.
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When I have to wake up early, I open the curtain near my bed before I sleep. |
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By doing so, the sunlight disturbs my sleep as the day dawn. By doing so, the sunlight disturbs my sleep as the day dawns. By doing so, the sunlight disturbs my sleep as the day dawns. |
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In addition, opening the window slightly is also effective because sounds such as mail carriers' bike sounds make me awaken. In addition, opening the window slightly is also effective because sounds such as mail carriers' bike sounds make me awaken. The sentence is okay, but "make me awaken" is very awkward. I would probably just write "wake me up."
In addition, opening the window slightly is also effective because sounds such as mail carriers' bike sounds Either 'wake me' or 'wake me up' is more natural hear than 'make me awaken'.
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However, the best way is to go to bed earlier and set a lot of noisy alarms. However, the best This sentence is okay, it's just clearer if you either contextualise what you mean by 'way', eg. 'the best way to wake up early' OR use a more specific word like strategy. Hope that makes sense!
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